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Inspektah Meth-Tical
10-14-2010, 08:14 AM
Inspektah:
i came through stories untold
spread like the plague across the globe
lighting the world up like a stove
trynna hold on to reality loosing my grip
hard to maintain when your minds playing tricks
i slip slowly, into a never ending abysss
where the cherished past
is about to perish fast
memories that makes me laugh
becomes a thing of the past
my biggest obsession
to get a million in my possesion
leaving rappers burned like Michael Wesson
my vocals is blessing, learn a lesson
fucking with me, will only get u in depression
for years i've been concealed
time for me to be revealed
taking giant leaps like Armstrong, holmes
been through hell fire and brimstone
to set my name in stone
i beat you to a pulp non-fiction
reservior lions with glorious gentleman
advancing with the intention of death sentence


So take out the scroll
and see how life unfolds

Chorus:
Sup See this is how life unfolds
this is how life unloads, recoils and reloads
hate the plight on a daily
hate the shit taken on a daily
hate the spotless mind of the dumb on the daily
hate those that diss all and love none...
sup see this is how life unfolds
this is how life unloads, recoils and reloads...



Lord of Chaos:
Deniable audio salable rhyme caliber mathematical rapture
given my birth guess my death is inevitable/
so when I came to work the boss looked
and said you jerk “YOUR FIRED”/
felt as if Doc Brown came back from the future
now obscure trips dipped low cash flow roasted toes/
boost my confines now rewind the tape didn't steal a thing
I think he was drunken by power for whatever means/
gifted scheme dream up revenge similar to the sith
by the gifts I can send your way wouldn't be anything McVay/
skim the gall from the game their gauge is effective as the cup next to me
you can't intimidate me, your fickle as a pickle that hasn't been picked yet/
debt paid full dues skew any views now we got problems
relations went all wrong getting played live full effect
is like a gun pointed at cha and pissing wet drenched in sweat/
didn't know what to think next is how I felt
when my rent got canceled, my job dissed me and the bitch didn't even bother to kiss me/
so I drifted into space, like a wasted trash case facing the wall nearest to the door
thinking why brawl, when I can work my ass off if I could actually find something/
hated pumping heat when the gas wasn't even on the cheap
guess my pockets dropped like the roof dropped on Dorthy/
port me like a PS2 Game file, guess now I am wild
as a Tasmanian devil reveal effortlessly dreading any outcome
guess we shall see on the next episode of how life unloads/

SHEEPISH LORD OF CHAOS
10-14-2010, 08:25 AM
the crazy part of this verse i wrote this in 20 mins while bumping some EL-P sometimes inspiration and a good beat can make the paint drip out of your fingers and thumbs and onto the keypad

gotta admit this collabo felt something as oragnic as i've even written with

Inspektah Meth-Tical
10-14-2010, 08:40 AM
dun, you just killed me with your verse hahahaha, props to you. Like damn man, you spitting straight fire and it only took you 20 mins, damn dun, thats some talent shit there.

THE MASON
10-14-2010, 10:10 AM
good collab

Inspektah was dope, a couple parts shined through most, like the last 3 lines at the end, those were tight. i felt that the flow, patterns, and structure we too standard and in the box, ya dig? hittin the rhyme right at the end of each line, nothing wrong with that it just comes out a bit forced sometimes

but you see how Sheep freaked his patterns and flows, shit sometime his shit rhymes mid sentence, plus he throws in a few multis......... basically what i mean is variation.

deviate from the norm fam, just write form the soull and dont force it

good writtens though

SHEEPISH LORD OF CHAOS
10-14-2010, 10:29 AM
good collab

Inspektah was dope, a couple parts shined through most, like the last 3 lines at the end, those were tight. i felt that the flow, patterns, and structure we too standard and in the box, ya dig? hittin the rhyme right at the end of each line, nothing wrong with that it just comes out a bit forced sometimes

but you see how Sheep freaked his patterns and flows, shit sometime his shit rhymes mid sentence, plus he throws in a few multis......... basically what i mean is variation.

deviate from the norm fam, just write form the soull and dont force it

good writtens though

lulz yeah bronze ur complete right when writing it has to be you and your soul oozing from your work and sometimes forcing it doesn't work like for me i know when i force something i can tell when i am reading it. i think variation is something when you write rhymes that comes with the more you write and learn your flows and stylez and patterns

overall this collabo was dope

J.T.S.
10-14-2010, 10:35 AM
taking giant leaps like Armstrong, holmes
been through hell fire and brimstone
to set my name in stone

Deniable audio salable rhyme caliber mathematical rapture
given my birth guess my death is inevitable/


i liked how those lines connected and the visuals niceness keep elevating..

Inspektah Meth-Tical
10-15-2010, 02:09 AM
good collab

Inspektah was dope, a couple parts shined through most, like the last 3 lines at the end, those were tight. i felt that the flow, patterns, and structure we too standard and in the box, ya dig? hittin the rhyme right at the end of each line, nothing wrong with that it just comes out a bit forced sometimes

but you see how Sheep freaked his patterns and flows, shit sometime his shit rhymes mid sentence, plus he throws in a few multis......... basically what i mean is variation.

deviate from the norm fam, just write form the soull and dont force it

good writtens though


Yeah, Sheep def had a mad scheme on this song, he damn straight killed me, next time i got some work to do. LOL.

Me, i tried to put a lot of emotion into the song and tried to make it dark. I cudn't really add much multi's to this verse, IDK why, but i like the verse this way.