PDA

View Full Version : Jamel The Prophet vs. TeknicelStylez (Jamel WINS)


Robert
10-13-2005, 11:42 AM
Lets do this, One verse, 20 lines, first to five votes, House rules (TKO ETC)

Robert
10-13-2005, 11:57 AM
Alright, guess I'll drop............
Jamel murders fake snakes that step into the-cipher,
who’s Tek? A net geek or a 25-to-lifer,
only time you did dirt was when you played in the sand-pit,
face it Tek, your faker then a double D Pam-tit,
your the lowest life form, a lyrical disgrace,
disappear without a trace, rip that cloth off your face,
Your obsession with crime is sick, like child prostitution,
you’ll do anything to enter a correctional institution,
Why write verses?, you cant get arrested-for-that,
Proud of been a felon but few are impressed-at-the-fact,
Fuck calling you out, someone better call-a-medic,
“there been an emcee homicide, get this bitch an anaesthetic!”
And another thing homie, how’d ya get that many posts,
this aint a competition, “who writes wak verses the most”,
its about quality not quantity, check the verses I wrote,
I’ve lost as many battles as Tek be getting battle votes, (Not many, lol)
Your an inferior emcee, your persona dont mean shit-to-me,
acting hardcore on this site coz no one knows your history,
Jamel sees throught the veneer, I aint quaking-in-fear,
I just beat you homie, am I making-this-clear?
peace man, come back..........

BRASSKNUCKLED PAI MEI
10-13-2005, 03:35 PM
PeacEcaeP

TeknicelStylez
10-13-2005, 06:55 PM
Solid verse, I got you homie, I'm caught up right now but I'll get at you in a minute.

TeknicelStylez
10-13-2005, 09:30 PM
Prophet couldn't blow if he was Strapped to a Rocket//
Couldn't get amped with his fingers Tapped in a Socket//
Couldn't get on Track even if he Ran like jessie Owens//
Couldn't spit Raps if his saliva Glands were Flowing//
You couldn't Beat Tek if you were Ike and I was Tina//
Couldn't get your Feet Wet if they were Dipped in Aquafina//
Couldn't Lock my Rhymes down if you Equipped a Suppena//
Couldn't Knock a Crime I commited with 6 Misdameanors//
Couldn't Drop 16 even if you were too weak to lift a Pound//
You couldn't win one battle even if we went fifty-Six Rounds//
Couldn't be heard through Equalizers on Surround Sound//
If you overdosed on Tranquilizers you still couldn't be Down//
If your name was Tony Danza you still couldn't be the Boss//
Even if I wrote with Phony Stanza's I still couldn't take a Loss//
Even If you studied to be a dental Hygienist you couldn't Floss//
You couldn't get believers if you were Jesus nailed to the Cross//

Visionz
10-13-2005, 10:13 PM
I just wrote a long-ass break down of this battle and I'm not doing it again but Tek took this one with relentless punches, that hit harder and got there quicker....Jamel it was a tight verse from you, both emcees represented, but Tek matched you in creativity and beat you w/ the sheer numbers of his punches.peace

T-ribe
10-13-2005, 10:25 PM
I'ma be blunt, Jamel T/P flow is just way tighter. Tek had more punches but the rhyme was too kindergarden. No disrespect by any means, it just sounded too simple for me.
Jamel got my vote. SOLID

Robert
10-13-2005, 10:57 PM
1-1, anyone else wanna vote?

RockD
10-13-2005, 11:04 PM
this was down to the wire :

Jamel
flow--10/10 always fluent and flowin jamel keeps goin
wordplay-9/10 stay with the prophecies
creativity-8/10 non compared to tek but it was good
vocabulary-8/10 good
punches- 9/10 it was great but fell short to tek


Tek
flow-7/10 nice flow i wasnt to tight on the repetition in the begginin of each line
wordplay-8/10 very very nice
creativity-9/10 do i need to say anything
vocabulary-9/10 man one more line u would have gotten a ten
punches-10/10 do i need to say anything this was tek wit all style

jamel 34 tek 33 one point made the diffrence

RockD
10-13-2005, 11:06 PM
i had to read this battle twice both mc's came wit "fya in here"

Robert
10-13-2005, 11:09 PM
Jamel=2, Tek=1, keep voting

TeknicelStylez
10-14-2005, 12:14 AM
the rhyme was too kindergarden
Couldn't get on Track even if he Ran like jessie Owens//
Couldn't spit Raps if his saliva Glands were Flowing//

Couldn't Drop 16 even if you were too weak to lift a Pound//

16 bars, 16 ounces = 1 pound !

Couldn't be heard through Equalizers on Surround Sound//
If you overdosed on Tranquilizers you still couldn't be Down//

Theres enough wordplay and punches in that verse to keep someone occupied for days figuring it all out....

Can I disqualify his vote on account of being a moron?

Jamel I don't mind you beating me because you really came hard, it was hard for me to come up with a response and it would be a defeat worth taking, but I refuse to have my verse be called "Kindergarten" from a person that doesn't know how to spell "Kindergarten".

Robert
10-14-2005, 01:43 AM
I aint having any of that man, we'll just accept the votes as they came

TeknicelStylez
10-14-2005, 05:32 AM
Na you can keep the vote I just wanted to call him a moron lol.

Potent1
10-14-2005, 09:25 AM
Nice battle -

Jamel
flow--10/10
wordplay-10/10
creativity-8/10
vocabulary-9/10
punches- 9/10 -46 tight ass verse!!

Tek
flow-8/10
wordplay-8/10
creativity- 7/10
vocabulary- 8/10
punches-10/10 - 42 Good punches - I just found the format alil redundant


V= jamel

BRASSKNUCKLED PAI MEI
10-14-2005, 09:30 AM
Alright, guess I'll drop............
Jamel murders fake snakes that step into the-cipher,
who’s Tek? A net geek or a 25-to-lifer, (kinda calling him a murderer)
only time you did dirt was when you played in the sand-pit,
face it Tek, your faker then a double D Pam-tit,( Nice Punch here)
your the lowest life form, a lyrical disgrace,
disappear without a trace, rip that cloth off your face,( what cloth?? )
Your obsession with crime is sick, like child prostitution,
you’ll do anything to enter a correctional institution,
Why write verses?, you cant get arrested-for-that,
Proud of been a felon but few are impressed-at-the-fact,
Fuck calling you out, someone better call-a-medic,
“there been an emcee homicide, get this bitch an anaesthetic!” ( nice punch )
And another thing homie, how’d ya get that many posts,
this aint a competition, “who writes wak verses the most”, ( another jab )
its about quality not quantity, check the verses I wrote,
I’ve lost as many battles as Tek be getting battle votes, (Not many, lol)
Your an inferior emcee, your persona dont mean shit-to-me,
acting hardcore on this site coz no one knows your history,
Jamel sees throught the veneer, I aint quaking-in-fear,
I just beat you homie, am I making-this-clear?
peace man, come back..........





Prophet couldn't blow if he was Strapped to a Rocket// ( Knuckle game )
Couldn't get amped with his fingers Tapped in a Socket// ( Strike 2 )
Couldn't get on Track even if he Ran like jessie Owens//
Couldn't spit Raps if his saliva Glands were Flowing//
You couldn't Beat Tek if you were Ike and I was Tina// ( Nice Haymaker )
Couldn't get your Feet Wet if they were Dipped in Aquafina// ( LMAO )
Couldn't Lock my Rhymes down if you Equipped a Suppena//
Couldn't Knock a Crime I commited with 6 Misdameanors//
Couldn't Drop 16 even if you were too weak to lift a Pound// ( Nice Punch )
You couldn't win one battle even if we went fifty-Six Rounds// ( Hah ahaha )
Couldn't be heard through Equalizers on Surround Sound//
If you overdosed on Tranquilizers you still couldn't be Down//
If your name was Tony Danza you still couldn't be the Boss//
Even if I wrote with Phony Stanza's I still couldn't take a Loss// ( LOL )
Even If you studied to be a dental Hygienist you couldn't Floss//
You couldn't get believers if you were Jesus nailed to the Cross/


I'm gonna vote on this and as my responses to the lines above I believe TeknicelStylez took this one!!!

BRASSKNUCKLED PAI MEI
10-14-2005, 09:31 AM
3- Jamel
2 - tek

Luther Large
10-14-2005, 09:49 AM
^^yo ben the cloth he was talkin about was when tek posted his picture with a bandana over his face


i would vote but i'm gonna have to go over them a few times

TeknicelStylez
10-14-2005, 03:25 PM
Yall call it redundant, I call it ability to main a steady concept...

:)

Thanx for the vote ben.

BRASSKNUCKLED PAI MEI
10-14-2005, 03:42 PM
Yeah under the circumstances of both ya'll having top ranked stats I think its pertinant that I vote!!

PeacEcaeP

TeknicelStylez
10-14-2005, 03:46 PM
Yea this is definately how a top ranked battle should look too.

TeknicelStylez
10-15-2005, 12:31 AM
DAmn we need a votes needed sign here

Robert
10-15-2005, 04:41 AM
can we get some votes up in here?

jjh_38
10-15-2005, 07:22 AM
JAMEL '''


Alright, guess I'll drop............
Jamel murders fake snakes that step into the-cipher,
who’s Tek? A net geek or a 25-to-lifer,
only time you did dirt was when you played in the sand-pit,
face it Tek, your faker then a double D Pam-tit,

-- 1st bar had nice sound to it.. and good flow.. not to damaging tho
--- 2nd bar.. decent punch witta lil multi ... word

your the lowest life form, a lyrical disgrace,
disappear without a trace, rip that cloth off your face,
--filler

Your obsession with crime is sick, like child prostitution,
you’ll do anything to enter a correctional institution,

-- not really much of a diss

Why write verses?, you cant get arrested-for-that,
Proud of been a felon but few are impressed-at-the-fact,

--- decent multies.. but punch is weak

Fuck calling you out, someone better call-a-medic,
“there been an emcee homicide, get this bitch an anaesthetic!”
-- not too bad

And another thing homie, how’d ya get that many posts,
this aint a competition, “who writes wak verses the most”,
-- boring

its about quality not quantity, check the verses I wrote,
I’ve lost as many battles as Tek be getting battle votes, (Not many, lol)
-- at least your tryin to come witta personal... but its bland

Your an inferior emcee, your persona dont mean shit-to-me,
acting hardcore on this site coz no one knows your history,
---aite.. but not much impact

Jamel sees throught the veneer, I aint quaking-in-fear,
I just beat you homie, am I making-this-clear?
-- multies are a plus.. ok closer

my thoughts on this.... not bad.. but you should focus strickly on your opponent.. you let him off easy witta couple of them lines.. gotta come with non stop relentlessness... nuttin but offense... dont waste opportunities to diss the opposition..
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

TEK

Prophet couldn't blow if he was Strapped to a Rocket//
Couldn't get amped with his fingers Tapped in a Socket//

-- needed another syllable or two in that 2nd line.. but a punch nontheless

Couldn't get on Track even if he Ran like jessie Owens//
Couldn't spit Raps if his saliva Glands were Flowing//

--not incredible.. but showing a bit of creativity .. plus the internal rhymes of track and raps tied the lines together nicely

You couldn't Beat Tek if you were Ike and I was Tina//
Couldn't get your Feet Wet if they were Dipped in Aquafina//

--- 1st lines played like a mufucka... 2nd one.. im not sure why he'd want to get his feet wet.. you were onto somethin but this punch isnt much

Couldn't Lock my Rhymes down if you Equipped a Suppena//
Couldn't Knock a Crime I commited with 6 Misdameanors//

--- still not lettin up wit da punches.... good form

Couldn't Drop 16 even if you were too weak to lift a Pound//
You couldn't win one battle even if we went fifty-Six Rounds//

--= it woulda been tight if you played that 16 like 16oz.. and somehow tied it into the 'pound'.. (cuz 16oz is a pound) .... the punch.. ehh..

Couldn't be heard through Equalizers on Surround Sound//
If you overdosed on Tranquilizers you still couldn't be Down//

-- not to shabby son

If your name was Tony Danza you still couldn't be the Boss//
Even if I wrote with Phony Stanza's I still couldn't take a Loss//

-- i liked the internals

Even If you studied to be a dental Hygienist you couldn't Floss//
You couldn't get believers if you were Jesus nailed to the Cross//

--- this concept could have been presented better.. but your still throwin continuous jabs...

my vote... tek.. for the plain fact that he did what your suppose to do in a battle.. come at your opponent with punches... i think ur punches could be better.. they aint bad but they aint fresh...u kno.. somewhat mundane... be creative and come with some shit that aint been thought of... still.. yu clearly won the battle tho so i guess ya did what yu needed to do...

vote Tek



* and yo... thats how votes should go..... *

Robert
10-15-2005, 09:03 AM
Thats 3-3, les wrap this up peeps, more votes! (cheers for the feedback kingshyt)

TeknicelStylez
10-15-2005, 11:35 AM
I agree with king I was struggling on them punches, I really wasn't in the mood to write na mean.

Robert
10-16-2005, 08:59 AM
Come on peeps, lets get this over with, VOTE!!!

Robert
10-16-2005, 11:45 AM
Vote Vote Vote Vote Vote Vote Vote Vote Vote Vote Vote Vote Vote Vote Vote Vote Vote Vote Vote Vote Vote Vote Vote Vote Vote Vote Vote Vote Vote Vote Vote Vote Vote Vote Vote Vote Vote Vote Vote Vote Vote Vote Vote Vote Vote Vote Vote Vote Vote Vote Vote Vote Vote Vote Vote Vote Vote Vote Vote Vote Vote Vote Vote Vote Vote Vote Vote Vote Vote Vote Vote Vote Vote Vote Vote Vote Vote Vote Vote Vote Vote Vote Vote Vote Vote Vote Vote Vote Vote Vote Vote Vote Vote Vote Vote Vote !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

TeknicelStylez
10-16-2005, 03:01 PM
lol someone needs to change the name to votes needed.

BRASSKNUCKLED PAI MEI
10-17-2005, 01:07 PM
Vote

$inista
10-17-2005, 01:38 PM
got 2 read this agian, pretty clost

TeknicelStylez
10-17-2005, 01:59 PM
vote?

Robert
10-17-2005, 02:04 PM
Vote Or Die!!!!!!!!!!

TeknicelStylez
10-17-2005, 06:34 PM
Damn can we get some fuckin votes

Robert
10-18-2005, 09:34 PM
Can some peeps from the comp please vote on this? its 3 all first to five, me and tek wanna wrap this one up!

TeknicelStylez
10-19-2005, 11:15 PM
I think its easier to get inner city youth to vote than to get people to vote in the battlefield lol.

WARPATH
10-20-2005, 10:47 AM
Jamel
flow-8/10
wordplay-8/10
creativity-8/10
vocabulary-7/10
punches- 8/10

78%

Tek
flow-7/10
wordplay-7/10
creativity-7/10
vocabulary-7/10
punches- 7/10

70%

I think Jamel's verse was more creative and the punches were funnier-

Tek i've seen better work from you what happened man?

And another thing why you given T-ribe a hard time? If you didn't know-- my homey know's how much ounces are in pound-

Let me enlighten you--T-ribe knows how much ounces are in pound
thats elementery street shit--tell us how much sixteen ounces transulates to pennies on the dollar

and that's real

you shouldn't talk shit just because someone didn't vote for you

and why'd you give my homey a hard time about spelling kindergarten? we are'nt in school this is chat forum

besides

some of us went to real city public schools
we can't all have rich parents to send us to private school.............................

TeknicelStylez
10-20-2005, 08:33 PM
Jamel
flow-8/10
wordplay-8/10
creativity-8/10
vocabulary-7/10
punches- 8/10

78%

Tek
flow-7/10
wordplay-7/10
creativity-7/10
vocabulary-7/10
punches- 7/10

70%

I think Jamel's verse was more creative and the punches were funnier-

Tek i've seen better work from you what happened man?

And another thing why you given T-ribe a hard time? If you didn't know-- my homey know's how much ounces are in pound-

Let me enlighten you--T-ribe knows how much ounces are in pound
thats elementery street shit--tell us how much sixteen ounces transulates to pennies on the dollar

and that's real

you shouldn't talk shit just because someone didn't vote for you

and why'd you give my homey a hard time about spelling kindergarten? we are'nt in school this is chat forum

besides

some of us went to real city public schools
we can't all have rich parents to send us to private school.............................Lol I never thought I'd be called rich, I went to highschool in the city in Jersey, my english teacher was out the whole year because he got his jaw broken after he asked some kid for a hall pass... na mean? I got an A for playing C-Lo and Bloody Knuckles in 7th period everyday.

And the 16 ounces in a pound like has nothign to do with drugs, it's you couldn't drop 16 if you were too weak to lift a pound, meaning you couldn't drop 16 bars, or 16 ounces, if you were to weak to lift something that weighs a pound, if you were to weak to lift a pound you would drop it... nothing to do with drugs, ok champ?

I don't mind people voting against me, I just don't like people callin my shit kindergarten when I put mad effort into it.

One more thing... you gave me a 7/10 in punches and wordplay when my whole entire verse consisted of punches and wordplay? Seems a little unfair to me.

WARPATH
10-20-2005, 09:38 PM
couldn't this couldn't that couldn't this couldn't that couldn't this couldn't that

I'm not impressed by that shit

Jessie ownes- flowin- that's a Gza line from the W album

really i've read alot of your battles and I've seen you do better work then this crap you wrote I gave you some extra points cuz i didn't want to hurt your feelings

16 ounces to a pound- was just relating that to some common knowledge shit you learn growing up

honestley

if you did go to public school then you were the type of kid that got slapped around in the hallways for acting like a retard then a guy like me would come around and you'd get jealous because you found out the girl you've had a crush on since 2nd grade is sucking me and my homey's off at a party you weren't invited to.

real shit

Ballad Ballistik
10-20-2005, 09:53 PM
1-1, anyone else wanna vote?JAMEL POSTED THIS SHIT EARLY ON ...THE VOTE WAS 2-0 ...
DUDE COUNTS LIKE DRACULA ON CRACK....

WARPATH
10-20-2005, 09:56 PM
JAMEL POSTED THIS SHIT EARLY ON ...THE VOTE WAS 2-0 ...
DUDE COUNTS LIKE DRACULA ON CRACK....:lmao:

Ballad Ballistik
10-20-2005, 10:01 PM
Charge Delete It I Counted Wrong...sorry I Renag

T-ribe
10-20-2005, 10:07 PM
Ok so Tek wants act like this is the spelling Bee championships... well Webster you can spell defeat all day long..... fuckin cry baby..... wha..wha... "I dont like nobody callin my shit kindergarten when I spent mad time on it" well to me it looked like a lot of time wasted.

WARPATH
10-20-2005, 10:08 PM
nah i'm gonna leave it that shit had me laughing because I remember Jamel miscounting votes in a different thread

Ballad Ballistik
10-20-2005, 10:18 PM
Alright...

Ballad Ballistik
10-20-2005, 10:24 PM
Jamel
flow-8/10
wordplay-8/10
creativity-8/10
vocabulary-7/10
punches- 8/10

78%

Tek
flow-7/10
wordplay-7/10
creativity-7/10
vocabulary-7/10
punches- 7/10

70%

I think Jamel's verse was more creative and the punches were funnier-

Tek i've seen better work from you what happened man?

And another thing why you given T-ribe a hard time? If you didn't know-- my homey know's how much ounces are in pound-

Let me enlighten you--T-ribe knows how much ounces are in pound
thats elementery street shit--tell us how much sixteen ounces transulates to pennies on the dollar

and that's real

you shouldn't talk shit just because someone didn't vote for you

and why'd you give my homey a hard time about spelling kindergarten? we are'nt in school this is chat forum

besides

some of us went to real city public schools
we can't all have rich parents to send us to private school.............................YOU PUT A NICKLE ON IT AND IF IT WEIGHS .5 SHIT IS TIGHT..

TeknicelStylez
10-21-2005, 12:40 AM
couldn't this couldn't that couldn't this couldn't that couldn't this couldn't that

I'm not impressed by that shit

Jessie ownes- flowin- that's a Gza line from the W album

really i've read alot of your battles and I've seen you do better work then this crap you wrote I gave you some extra points cuz i didn't want to hurt your feelings

16 ounces to a pound- was just relating that to some common knowledge shit you learn growing up

honestley

if you did go to public school then you were the type of kid that got slapped around in the hallways for acting like a retard then a guy like me would come around and you'd get jealous because you found out the girl you've had a crush on since 2nd grade is sucking me and my homey's off at a party you weren't invited to.

real shit
*Yawn* w/e, what reserve you live on again?

And T-ribe you shouldn't be allowed to speak or type, shit should be illegal. The verse you got for the competition couldnt compete with a steaming pile of horse shit.

I tried to be nice about it, if yall wanna slang insults I can do that too.

O yea.

Jessie ownes- flowin- that's a Gza line from the W album

Gza's line

Run on the track like jessie owens broke the record flowing
Without any knowing, that my wordplay run the 400 meter relay... etc etc.

And it was Protect Your Neck - Jump Off, everyone fuckin knows that.

My line

You couldn't get on track if your name was Jessie Owens
you couldn't spit raps if your saliva glands were flowing

Pretty fuckin different, GG shut up.

Robert
10-21-2005, 06:31 AM
Aight so its 4-3? I thought i'd counted this one right?

WARPATH
10-21-2005, 09:22 AM
*Yawn* w/e, what reserve you live on again?

And T-ribe you shouldn't be allowed to speak or type, shit should be illegal. The verse you got for the competition couldnt compete with a steaming pile of horse shit.

I tried to be nice about it, if yall wanna slang insults I can do that too.

O yea.

Jessie ownes- flowin- that's a Gza line from the W album

Gza's line

Run on the track like jessie owens broke the record flowing
Without any knowing, that my wordplay run the 400 meter relay... etc etc.

And it was Protect Your Neck - Jump Off, everyone fuckin knows that.

My line

You couldn't get on track if your name was Jessie Owens
you couldn't spit raps if your saliva glands were flowing

Pretty fuckin different, GG shut up.pretty different- not very original on your part

I must of really touched a nerve with you, man i'm sorry you got picked on in school, please don't get a gun and shoot everyone, you'll loose your virginity someday.

I'll tell you what i'll be your friend- how bout that?

And if you want to know It's the Pine Ridge Indian Reservation- Do some research then come back and talk shit, you little baby you ain't Tony Saprano.

you wanted to start shit crying around over a vote? your acting like a little bitch

people just wanted to give you some constructive criticism over that wack ass verse you wrote because we've seen you write some better material.

get over it don't reply to this it'll just make you sound like a little baby

I don't know you, you don't know me, let's leave it at that.

TeknicelStylez
10-21-2005, 05:19 PM
pretty different- not very original on your part

I must of really touched a nerve with you, man i'm sorry you got picked on in school, please don't get a gun and shoot everyone, you'll loose your virginity someday.

I'll tell you what i'll be your friend- how bout that?

And if you want to know It's the Pine Ridge Indian Reservation- Do some research then come back and talk shit, you little baby you ain't Tony Saprano.

you wanted to start shit crying around over a vote? your acting like a little bitch

people just wanted to give you some constructive criticism over that wack ass verse you wrote because we've seen you write some better material.

get over it don't reply to this it'll just make you sound like a little baby

I don't know you, you don't know me, let's leave it at that.I must of really touched a nerve with you

Ok chief running mouth.

Redskull
10-22-2005, 10:58 AM
jamel took it, i wasnt to impressed wit the "couldnt" shit either (no disrespect). nice battle ya

TeknicelStylez
10-22-2005, 11:21 AM
Thats all you jamel, good battle fam.

Robert
10-23-2005, 04:44 AM
yeah nice battle indeed
peace tek and all that took the time to vote (this shits been going on for ages)