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j_over
06-19-2005, 12:21 AM
my beliefs are monotheistic, but non specific/
and when im gone sadistic im unassisted/
i cant resist it i spit explicit, and get lifted/
gifted with a splif lit to leave ur lips split/
you'll need some blistex, my artistic lingustics are so twisted/
ill make you piss shit you missfits/
your in the midst of it, im twistin it and shiftin it/
the realistic shit.... im dissin it/
your chicken shit, when im kickin it/
im consistant with, prolific written scripts/
as high as the statistics get, insisting it/


this is part of a song i wrote a little over a year ago
tell me what you think

thank J Ova

I-Legit
06-19-2005, 12:28 AM
ya name almost sounds liek J-Hova...no? lol

well i liked it...kept the same rhymes but its cool, sounded nice man.......
if u wanan hook up for a collab hit me up

i liked it
1

Cap I
06-19-2005, 03:00 AM
Yeah it was nice

GuardianOne
06-19-2005, 03:51 AM
That's what i thought when i saw his title sounded like "Jehovah"!!!!!!
Cool verse, don't be afraid-experiment with your words as you flow, they are many schools of thought!!!!!!!!!!!We expect more verses from you!!!

Peace

j_over
06-20-2005, 01:26 AM
thanks for the input
I-Legit, i dont have a mic... so i dont know about the collab

j_over
06-21-2005, 02:48 AM
her is the whole song....

my beliefs are monotheistic, but non specific/
and when im gone sadistic im unassisted/
i cant resist it i spit explicit, and get lifted/
gifted with a splif lit to leave ur lips split/
you'll need some blistex, my artistic lingustics are so twisted/
ill make you piss shit you missfits/
your in the midst of it, im twistin it and shiftin it/
the realistic shit.... im dissin it/
your chicken shit, when im kickin it/
im consistant with, prolific written scripts/
as high as the statistics get, insisting it/
mystic in the vision, balistics wizzin/
swift kick incision, those wrists ur slitin glisten/
in the sunlight, listen, get spun right/
clockwise, vision like hawk eyes/
i talk wise and drop guys with hot rymes/
the plot finds the dot lines...... 2 X's/
perplexs, my intalect is infectious/
from here to teaxs, toast for breakfast,
coast the lexus, the most impressive/
sucsessive excessive rymes, to mess your minds/
your assanine, ill smash your spine/
clasic kind of fantastik design, masterd thru time/
spent, inventing deffance agianst the devil/
pedal to the metal, of corse i meddle with weapons and/ shit/
seconds to spit the scene, emit a beam_____ hit tha spleen/
of a distant fiend, i insist on green_____lazers/
my mean face is a, falce front, a fake falicy/
i make analogies of mc fatalities/
they are not real, i got zeal for the game/
feal my pain, steals the same/
when it enters your heart, the sharp dart i impart verbaly/
is murder he wrote, sturdy but broke financialy/
im not angela lansburry/
i plan to be gettin tha money tho, funny flow/
from a newfoundlander, polute the air with slander/
frome here to gander, comand the grander gramer/
i am a.... man of my word, and i plan to be heard/
in the echo of time, i let go of rymes/
and let'em flow, frequent and fluently intuitively/
new id be of the top, i often drop/
tha syntax, and begin raps that spin cats like thin flat/
records, the main aspect is the mass message/
for all people, were all equal, its a small steeple/
but u can find it, poluted rymes hit the student minded/
recrute the blinded, and give em vision/
your indicision has been revisioned/
to make an obvious choice, in audio, voice and insrtamental blends/
my mental decends thru pencils and pens/
to leave impressions on pages and people/
play this, the needle will be a bio hazzard/
the vinal is plasterd with viral matter/
as a matter of fact, atack your neverous system/
with words of wisdom/
concurrent convulsions, pulseing thru your synapse's/
my rap colapsess your brain cells/
with falling anvils, 7 stories dropin/
stopin, 6 feet OVER, the streets wonder where i be probe'n/
take me like ibuprofen, widely open/
slyley scope me with trinoculars/
as i inaculate the populous every time i talk a diss/
or disembowel you, see me like the owl do/
with lack of light, atack at night/
im back despite the daly grind/
play me find rewind and press it quick

Rebel_INS
06-21-2005, 06:17 AM
Nice.........

j_over
06-22-2005, 12:21 AM
thanks

BlaK FuRYaN
06-22-2005, 05:47 AM
I kinda like that skeme coz i use it my self most times....

I agree wid spokes comment....more imagery would of helped....

'stay awake'

Dae Ja Nae
06-22-2005, 09:54 AM
my beliefs are monotheistic, but non specific/
and when im gone sadistic im unassisted/
i cant resist it i spit explicit, and get lifted/
gifted with a splif lit to leave ur lips split/
you'll need some blistex, my artistic lingustics are so twisted/
ill make you piss shit you missfits/

( ^^ Damn)

your in the midst of it, im twistin it and shiftin it/
the realistic shit.... im dissin it/
your chicken shit, when im kickin it/
im consistant with, prolific written scripts/
as high as the statistics get, insisting it/


this is part of a song i wrote a little over a year ago
tell me what you think

thank J Ova
I liked it ... stay up

Dae Ja Nae
06-22-2005, 10:01 AM
her is the whole song....

my beliefs are monotheistic, but non specific/
and when im gone sadistic im unassisted/
i cant resist it i spit explicit, and get lifted/
gifted with a splif lit to leave ur lips split/
you'll need some blistex, my artistic lingustics are so twisted/
ill make you piss shit you missfits/
your in the midst of it, im twistin it and shiftin it/
the realistic shit.... im dissin it/
your chicken shit, when im kickin it/
im consistant with, prolific written scripts/
as high as the statistics get, insisting it/
mystic in the vision, balistics wizzin/
swift kick incision, those wrists ur slitin glisten/
in the sunlight, listen, get spun right/
clockwise, vision like hawk eyes/
i talk wise and drop guys with hot rymes/
the plot finds the dot lines...... XX/
perplexs, my intalect is infectious/
from here to teaxs, toast for breakfast,
coast the lexus, the most impressive/
sucsessive excessive rymes, to mess your minds/
your assanine, ill smash your spine/
clasic kind of fantastik design, masterd thru time/
spent, inventing deffance agianst the devil/
pedal to the metal, of corse i meddle with weapons and/ shit/
seconds to spit the scene, emit a beam_____ hit tha spleen/
of a distant fiend, i insist on green_____lazers/
my mean face is a, fake front, a falce falicy/
i make analogies of mc fatalities/
they are not real, i got zeal for the game/
feal my pain, steals the same/
when it enters your heart, the sharp dart i impart verbaly/
is murder he wrote, sturdy but broke financialy/
im not angela lansburry/
i plan to be gettin tha money tho, funny flow/
from a newfoundlander, polute the air with slander/
frome here to gander, comand the grander gramer/
i am a.... man of my word, and i plan to be heard/
in the echo of time, i let go of rymes/
and let'em flow, frequent and fluently intuitively/
new id be of the top, i often drop/
tha syntax, and begin raps that spin cats like thin flat/
records, the main aspect is the mass message/
for all people, were all equal, its a small steeple/
but u can find it, poluted rymes hit the student minded/
recrute the blinded, and give em vision/
your indicision has been revisioned/
to make an obvious choice, in audio, voice and insrtamental blends/
my mental decends thru pencils and pens/
to leave impressions on pages and people/
play this, the needle will be a bio hazzard/
the vinal is plasterd with viral matter/
as a matter of fact, atack your neverous system/
with words of wisdom/
concurrent convulsions, pulseing thru your synapse's/
my rap colapsess your brain cells/
with falling anvils, 7 stories dropin/
6 feet OVER, the streets wonder where i be probe'n/
take me like ibuprofen, widely open/
slyley scope me with trinoculars/
i inaculate the populous every time i talk a diss/
or disembowel you, see me like the owl do/
with lack of light, im back despite the daly grind/
play me find rewind and press it quickOkay, I posted before I saw the whole song. I always post first, then read :) ... not bad at all. Keep em comin'.

Peace

j_over
06-22-2005, 04:37 PM
thans agian for all the input, i appreciate it.