PDA

View Full Version : Just some things i wrote.


Inspektah Meth-Tical
10-30-2010, 08:07 AM
sorry.

SHEEPISH LORD OF CHAOS
10-30-2010, 06:43 PM
tight verse, try and varying up your rhyme patterns

Inspektah Meth-Tical
10-30-2010, 10:18 PM
Yeah, i'm fairy new to this rhyming shit and i'm working on it, hopefully i can better with time.

SHEEPISH LORD OF CHAOS
10-31-2010, 02:39 AM
word no doubt, just keep writing try concerntrating on your first bars and it'll flow right from there

also study your favorite rappers lyrics got to like ohhla.com and look e'm nah mean and see how the songs and rhymes etc.