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Visionz
10-14-2005, 04:08 AM
Comp votes only. Verse must be in by Weds. Unseen drops first

Visionz
10-15-2005, 09:53 AM
Spiked punch, I'm the drunken master with numchucks/ I'm truly Sinista when ur chosen for the mental deconstruct/I could give a fuck about how brutal ya think-ya are/You've already played yourself like a Dali guitar/Ya got seven notes but my chords are infinite/Every line I place is to make murder more intricate/I'll detonate you w/ nano bombs developed by the neo-cons/In my prime I smash on decepticons/Only way you're sinister is from these left-handed bitch slaps*/Work at Taco Bell and you still can't wrap?/It's finito for these mosquitos,you couldn't drop shit if you scarfed on bean burritos/Roll in a battleship only to get sunk by the torpedos/Ya style's repulsive like Rosanne in a speedo/The chef here is cookin up marvelous cuisines/You said you brought Steak but it's more like Sizzlean/You must be a heroine addict, it's hard to come clean/Your verses couldn't be tight if they were cowboy jeans/That's why you stick to one-liners, ya need the tag-team/Too bad it's the same for sex, when its ya girls time to cream/Mandingo, I set aside slobs who can't finish the job/Go bust ur ass at work,while ya pussy's getting robbed/I'm outside in the blue jag waiting for the perfect situation/Cause even on Viagra you couldn't rise to the occasion/And since this is a comp, you're officially getting killed/Have to take a Road to Perdition to see all the blood been spilled/I lay out crowds of competition with a mental streetsweeper/Got loads of the hottest shit, like dump trucks for a Texas zookeeper/It'll been dirt on the casket after I murder you all/God must've loved sinista, he be the first to fall.







*thought this line had the potential to go over heads but the word sinister's orgins and it's current meaning are directly related to left-handedness

$inista
10-16-2005, 06:41 AM
I behead ya..I'm da future ahead-a ya time.. even @ ya prime.. me fall? nah neva dat.. Iím optimistic.. Unseen bitch nigga Rockin lipstick.. He clutches & chokes on a-lot-a cocks.. on da block they call him a-cock-a-lips.. I bring apocalypse with a-lot-a guns & a-lot-a clips.. Dynamic dule on da mic, you can say Dynamite, explosive sticks.. Rip through ya cartilage.. you anit seen me cumin like dick way deep in ya esophagus.. you swung with da left but you missed.. so now ya getz dismissed, discombobulated & burnt 2 a crisp.. You getz nuked cause you thought you was a winner so know I eat you like microwave dinners.. I'll rip out ya spleen & feast on ya liver.. but first I'll drown you where jesus blessed headz in da river.. What part of sinista, sin, sinner you didnít get.. I deliver shit that makes ya body shake, shiver & quiver.. thatís it you shook Itís over.. no hold up wait.. You hold no weight, like you in outer space.. you weightless.. Thereís no escape kid.. Attack from spaceships.. Shoot gamma rays & tazors .. What happened 2 your torpedoes.. porbrecito.. Who would of thought Killa mosquitoes.. West Nile I be lethal.. Word to my brotha Tito & my little cousin Cheito.. teach you a lesson.. Smith & Wesson desert eagle.. you 2 feeble Beet you with da gat till you fetal.. I son you like da sun shining light on the masses.. I give you life.. But quick 2 reverse it.. fiery gases you get blasted inside out like a mega-bomb.. Oh shit look who it is.. Megatron.. do you like bush did Sadam.. err-err-eee-ooh-ot.. blow up your blood clot autobots.. transform into Osama send my suicide bombers.. I Snap, crackle, pop.. turn cannibalistic serial killa type, Jeffrey Dahmer.. I taught da drunken monks & da Dali Lama.. Beet you into a mental trauma.. Iím a what-cha-ma-call-it.. oh yea.. alcoholic, drunken monkey plus I'm open off a funky bag of skunk G.. unseen tries extra hard but no way he can fuck me.. trust me his skills is still way 2 dusty.. if he wins Iíll give him a 4 leaf clover & call him lucky



http://www.geocities.com/Area51/Station/6563/megatron.html

Grim Reapa
10-16-2005, 10:19 AM
actually this was a good battle; both the verses were same in length but Unseen took this $ini$ta's verse wasn't bad, just not consistent enough to Eric's verse; I mean in some rhymes sinista made didn't even make sense

v=Unseen

whatradio
10-16-2005, 11:38 AM
daaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaamn!
I have to read this a few more times.

T-ribe
10-16-2005, 12:04 PM
Sinista had some tight lines but the flow fell of too many times for me. Unseen keept it smooth the whole time and had some murderous lines....Def a nice battle props to both lyricist but Unseen took it.

jjh_38
10-16-2005, 12:20 PM
not a bad battle.. Eric made the bigger impression tho.. he had better flow and more punches.. alltho that viagara line was played. The rosanne in a speedo made me laugh... overall, you stayed on the offense and didnt seem to drift off like Sinista's verse did..


Sinista.. i think the problem with your verse was the choppy ass flow, plus the big letters might of made it harder to pick up on,i dunno..,but both of you guys need to learn to write in bars.. I think you lacked a bit on your punches, but you had some nice concepts if they would have been structured and worded better.. like this shit



blow up your blood clot autobots.. transform into Osama send my suicide bombers..



but it came just scattered in a mess of text.. you should try to set your opponent up for the hit.. not just throw wildly.. u kno


but yea.. overall.. ERIC connected with more shots imo

vote Unseen

Robert
10-16-2005, 12:43 PM
Vote=Eric
You came with a nice verse homie, like the flow of it and you hit hard with the punches. Nice job.

Now for Sinista. Attention ALL VOTERS, Sinista has bitten rhymes from Vinnie Paz in liberal Arts. Yeah, thought no one would notice? Yeah that line about "apocalyse.......lots-of-guns and lots-of-clips" is a straight out copy of Vinnie Paz. Poor form homie, poor form......

I say Sinistas should be disqualified. Too many cats are getting away with this bullshit, its gotta stop. You should be writting your own material not biting others. And dont come with that bullshit excuse, "I didnt realise......it was a coincidence". You bit too much, you should be disqualfied

RockD
10-16-2005, 01:14 PM
Vote = sinista

flow was fluent to me, punches were preatty even so the flow was got me to vote sinista

TeknicelStylez
10-16-2005, 04:10 PM
Vote=Eric
You came with a nice verse homie, like the flow of it and you hit hard with the punches. Nice job.

Now for Sinista. Attention ALL VOTERS, Sinista has bitten rhymes from Vinnie Paz in liberal Arts. Yeah, thought no one would notice? Yeah that line about "apocalyse.......lots-of-guns and lots-of-clips" is a straight out copy of Vinnie Paz. Poor form homie, poor form......

I say Sinistas should be disqualified. Too many cats are getting away with this bullshit, its gotta stop. You should be writting your own material not biting others. And dont come with that bullshit excuse, "I didnt realise......it was a coincidence". You bit too much, you should be disqualfiedDamn you and this nigguh are quick to accuse nigga of biting, if it's on some whole verse tip like fuckin concept, than you should be DQ'ed. But 2 phrases.... that are very coincidential and popular? I don't even know who the fuck vinnie Paz is and I probably said that before. Besides in what way shape or form does that determine the winner of the battle?

Anyway Good Imagination in your verse Sinister, I could tell you was into that shit.

My vote goes to Eric Unseen, that rosanne in a speedo line was fuckin hilarious.

Eddy
10-16-2005, 04:29 PM
v=unseen, mad nice battle but he brought more fury. VOTE FOR APOKALIPS V.S. sTUNACINO.

$inista
10-16-2005, 06:40 PM
Vote=Eric
You came with a nice verse homie, like the flow of it and you hit hard with the punches. Nice job.

Now for Sinista. Attention ALL VOTERS, Sinista has bitten rhymes from Vinnie Paz in liberal Arts. Yeah, thought no one would notice? Yeah that line about "apocalyse.......lots-of-guns and lots-of-clips" is a straight out copy of Vinnie Paz. Poor form homie, poor form......

I say Sinistas should be disqualified. Too many cats are getting away with this bullshit, its gotta stop. You should be writting your own material not biting others. And dont come with that bullshit excuse, "I didnt realise......it was a coincidence". You bit too much, you should be disqualfiedwhatever duke if you must know i got da idea for this line
lots-of-guns and lots-of-clips....is
i got a hundred guns, a hundred clips im from ny ny
jarule fat joe & jada
i could give a fuck disqualify me I dont give a fuck
i do this here for da love & spit it however it comes to me bro
fall back be easy if you want we could battle

as for everyone else i thank you 4 da feed back keep it comin

Visionz
10-16-2005, 06:53 PM
yo man fuck it ^, I think my verse is strong enough to stand on it's on two feet, I sent ya that pm last night cuz it souned the same to me as well. You said you never heard it, so that's good enough for me homie,

score is 5-2, lets keep it moving. peace

oDoUoSoKo
10-16-2005, 07:53 PM
i kno im not in the turney but my battle wit apok needz votes ya, pleez vote

whatradio
10-16-2005, 08:44 PM
a battle of 2 very serious cut throat styles. I fuckin loved it. I can't say that one verse was weaker than the other. both were extremely fierce. $inista gets my vote b/c his was more brutal imo. best matchup I've seen so far.

respect.

Visionz
10-16-2005, 08:48 PM
5-3, ^respect homie, everyone in the comp needs to post ya votes.peace

Ballad Ballistik
10-16-2005, 09:07 PM
that line came first from the boogie down productions...
bdp ...krs 1...melody..ive got one hundred guns ...two hundres guns
coming from new york new york....show some roots...
my boy named rob is chilling in a benz
in the front of the building with the rest of friends..
i give him a pound o i mean shake his hand..
he's the nieghborhood drug dealer my man...
thats were that got started...loves goin to get ya...

Ballad Ballistik
10-16-2005, 09:09 PM
that line came first from the boogie down productions...
bdp ...krs 1...melody..ive got one hundred guns ...two hundres guns
coming from new york new york....show some roots...
my boy named rob is chilling in a benz
in the front of the building with the rest of friends..
i give him a pound o i mean shake his hand..
he's the nieghborhood drug dealer my man...
thats were that got started...loves goin to get ya...
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Ballad Ballistik
10-16-2005, 09:11 PM
whatever duke if you must know i got da idea for this line
lots-of-guns and lots-of-clips....is
i got a hundred guns, a hundred clips im from ny ny
jarule fat joe & jada
i could give a fuck disqualify me I dont give a fuck
i do this here for da love & spit it however it comes to me bro
fall back be easy if you want we could battle

as for everyone else i thank you 4 da feed back keep it cominthat line came first from the boogie down productions...
bdp ...krs 1...melody..ive got one hundred guns ...two hundred guns
coming from new york new york....show some roots...
my boy named rob is chilling in a benz
in the front of the building with the rest of his friends..
i give him a pound o i mean i shake his hand..
he's the nieghborhood drug dealer my man...
thats were that got started...loves going to get ya...

Potent1
10-16-2005, 11:30 PM
Eric unseen - yo verse was ri-dic-u-lous!! Dude I think your one of the sickest text a death type nuccas here... I loved it and in no way shape or form did I think Sin would top it but -


Diache!! Sinistas whole verse was absurd... I spit both verses and Sin killt it... Great change up in style ....

V= Sin





LMAO - even if it is something someone said, it one line- did you miss the rest of the verse.

Visionz
10-16-2005, 11:56 PM
word, 5-4, voting reflective of the quality of the battle

Visionz
10-17-2005, 01:01 AM
I ask that for those going second in a round that you limit the builds to two, and hopefully do away with 'em all together. I will deduct a vote if I feel the building is excessive

you swung with da left but you missed.......What part of sinista, sin, sinner you didnít get..........What happened 2 your torpedoes.. porbrecito.....Who would of thought Killa mosquitoes.......Oh shit look who it is.. Megatron.. I'm not taking away a vote here for a battle I'm personally in. To me that would be fuckin gay. I would ask that the rest of the voters left remember what an advantage going second is if you're able to build at will. And I'm not takin anything away from Sinister, it was a nice mafuckin verse....but these lines weren't in my verse.........Dahmer here loves putting dicks in a dead guys esophogus/He got me confused, I stay in my Prime like Optimus/Fuck the photon bombs and Galvatron/I eat your style up like Unicrom/Gone on a universal safari/I shoot down spaced invaders like throwbacks to Atari.........


cause you can't build when you drop first. Don't take these lines into consideration when voting but building excessively is an obvious advantage that no one so far in the voting seemed to notice or at least mentioned that it was going on.

$inista
10-17-2005, 02:14 AM
unseen you made a valid point^ but those are da rules you set

I like the 1 verse deal dont like that build bull shit much
i think of that as a life line fuck that bring it straight "ride or die" shit nah mean, make pass the first 2 rounds then you get life lines or another "build" whatever you wanna call it

I personally like it totaly blind so both emcees dont see each others verse untill it gets posted, it builds more suspence and the other emcees dosent build off of your verse its each persons own raw tought & talent
for example both emcces pm,s you then you will post them for both emcees
but hey you said the rules I'm gonna play rules or no rules I dont give a fuckat the same time anyone would be a fool not to take advangtage of going second

its all good doe

Visionz
10-17-2005, 02:23 AM
yeah you right^ on the choice to go w/out the blind post at the same time I also asked to limit in the building in the single rounds. I ain't mad at you for doin' it, you may not of even read the ready to rumble thread, I mean I don't really know. I'm just asking that voters take it into considerations when they're judging. Regardless what happens, this has easily been the tighest battle out of the first round so far. all respect due Sin, peace

b.a.R.n.
10-17-2005, 04:50 AM
damn, that shit was dope. I have to go with unseen, his whole verse was sick and i liked its flow, and the punches. I didnt feel sisnistas verse as much as i felt erics, but damn, this was some quality shit, respect to both emcees.
Vote=eric unseen

Visionz
10-17-2005, 05:12 AM
6-4, Unseen, looks like this one is goin down to the wire

PHENIX
10-17-2005, 03:08 PM
vote=eric

roseanna in a speedo. Thats scary. eric had some tight ass punchlines. I like the whole verse from start to finish.

Sin at first I wasnt feeling your verse then it started gettin tight towards the middle then you lost me again. Had a couple of very good punch lines but overall I just dont think i was better than erics.

Visionz
10-17-2005, 03:14 PM
7-4 to Unseen, (three more votes still out there)

Visionz
10-17-2005, 11:50 PM
bumpin this one for votes

Luther Large
10-18-2005, 12:09 PM
my vote goes to eric unseen he just had a pretty dope verse with few weak parts that left handed bitch slap line was ill especially with the history to back it up........i just felt sinista had horrible form and his verse lost it's flow becuz of it...........it had potential but he didnt execute the way he shouldve if he wanted to beat eric.............sin had a long verse but the problem with dropping that much is keeping a consistant flow and the readers get bored and by the time you know it there are more weak parts to your verse than good............peace ya'll

vote=eric unseen

b.a.R.n.
10-18-2005, 02:45 PM
8-4....eric unseen is in the next round, congrats

$inista
10-18-2005, 04:11 PM
congrats homie http://images.google.com/images?q=tbn:u7tA8ZuwqSgJ:www.stainedglassmagic.co m/stained_glass/4leaf_clover.sm.jpg I mean lucky

WARPATH
10-18-2005, 05:37 PM
Vote= Sinista

His flow was sick, I understood it fine and it just kept poppin.
Eric's verse was dope too, I exspecially like the part where you told him to step aside and let a real man fuck your girl, but Sinista just squeezed this vote out of me.

WARPATH
10-18-2005, 05:40 PM
^^dam my vote came to late oh well dope battle both emcees are deadly

Visionz
10-18-2005, 05:47 PM
^we can still call it at 8-5, much respect to Sinista, ya came real fierce homie, respect