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Visionz
10-14-2005, 04:09 AM
Comp votes only. Both verses must be done by Weds. Jamel drops first

jjh_38
10-15-2005, 02:28 AM
Wedns.... thats too long... you kno how long it will take to finish a 16 participant tournament with a 5 day deadline... it'll never get finished... 2 days is good... drop by sunday prophet... thats still plenty of time.. shit, drop 2nite... im ready when you are

Visionz
10-15-2005, 07:11 AM
^ that deadline is only because I didn't expect to have the brackets done till Sat morn, it's not going to be as long a time period between each of these rounds

jjh_38
10-15-2005, 07:48 AM
two days seems reasonable.. u think?

Visionz
10-15-2005, 08:11 AM
^actually I was thinkin 3,

jjh_38
10-16-2005, 10:11 AM
drop ya verse homie..

Robert
10-16-2005, 12:13 PM
Aight then.......
Jamel slays emcees and arrogant lil' wannabes,
You aint the King of Shyt, your faker then mephistopheles,
Gettin' props on the net dont make you a battle vet,
Think your the best? where's King's audio or casette?
A P.I.R crony who's punches are indirect,
cant take you serious homie, your crew's down with INTELL3KT,
You spit poetry, but your punches are distant misses,
In your dream your the best, now you writing battle disses,
In reality Tek murdered you, and no one's ever heard-of-you,
You ain't Shyt, all you-can-do is spit a word-or-two,
You couldnt injure-me if you were Mr. Hyde when he was furious,
You couldn't Shyt-on-me if I was Pompei and you Vesuveus,
All you can do, is write a few nice lines,
A few complex words, a few complex rhymes,
That complex Shyt might impress cats on a website,
But you know it dont amount to Shyt in a true mic-fight,
continue writin' rhymes behind the safety of your computer,
I'll give King this- he could ghostwrite or be an english tutor,
But you couldnt spit a verse to hurt-me, and conversely,
Prophet's a ruthless killer, got King beggin' for mercy.......
peace homie, come back

jjh_38
10-16-2005, 12:23 PM
whew.. damn.. hot shit Jamel

aite.. ima grab some lunch real quick and ill get workin on a verse

Robert
10-16-2005, 12:28 PM
cheers homie, no doubt you'll drop something dope

Grim Reapa
10-16-2005, 01:31 PM
this is y i come on wu corp.......fuckin battles like these

jjh_38
10-16-2005, 02:38 PM
Ayo



Kid, your a mochery.. .. ya ‘prophecies’ aint possibly stoppin me
You wouldn’t have ‘Shyt in the bag’ if you ‘rocked a Colostomy’
Here’s my philosophy.. ya lost-ta-me.. take ya fuckin vacation
Cuz you aint ‘beatin’ the ‘illest’.. you jus ‘jerkin off' 'AIDs patients’
More moves than matrix agents…I shred you rappers to pieces
Lethal procedures...nailin your body to these ‘posts’ like Jesus
A master of rap ‘Mechanics’..i ‘ratchet’ graphic schematics
You couldn’t ‘pass it’ like cash baskets at Cath-o-lic masses.
Gats smackin’ ya cabbage….watch ya collapse to tha canvas
Contacted a 'cactus'...left ya 'stuck' for ya cash and advances
KingShyt slick with the sentences.. rippin this kid’s appendages
iLL varieties spit ‘to society’… like ‘menace is’
Death is his.. but Jamel can still be heard.. ..wonderin how?
Cuz i placed ‘bombs in his casket’.. and ‘blew up the underground’
Jamel the Prophets the user.. we consider the corp’s sewer
Wit all dat lyrical manure he’s puttin through his computer
Your easially out-manuevered... Kid I soothed-ya-fix'
What about ‘PIR?’.. This Prophets on my ‘crew’s-suffix’ (crusifix)




--edit-- punctuations

Grim Reapa
10-16-2005, 02:58 PM
fuck this is a hard vote man

Kingshyt

Kid, your a mochery.. .. ya ‘prophecies’ aint possibly stoppin me
You wouldn’t have ‘Shyt in the bag’ if you ‘rocked a Colostomy’
Here’s my philosophy.. ya lost-ta-me.. take ya fuckin vacation
Cuz you aint ‘beatin’ the ‘illest’.. you jus ‘jerkin off' 'AIDs patients’
More moves than matrix agents…I shred you rappers to pieces
Lethal procedures...nailin your body to these ‘posts’ like Jesus
A master of rap ‘Mechanics’..i ‘ratchet’ graphic schematics
You couldn’t ‘pass it’ like cash baskets at Cath-o-lic masses.
Gats smackin’ ya cabbage….watch ya collapse to tha canvas
Contacted a 'cactus'...left ya 'stuck' for ya cash and advances
KingShyt slick with the sentences.. rippin this kid’s appendages
iLL varieties spit ‘to society’… like ‘menace is’
Death is his.. but Jamel can still be heard.. ..wonder how?
Cuz i placed ‘bombs in his casket’.. and ‘blew up the underground’
Jamel the Prophets the user.. we consider the corp’s sewer
Wit all dat lyrical manure he’s puttin through his computer
Your easially out-manuevered... Kid I soothed-ya-fix
What about ‘PIR?’.. This Prophets on my ‘crew’s-suffix’ (crusifix)


Kinda sounded deckish in the begining but a tight verse


Im gonna have to vote Jamel

Aight then.......
Jamel slays emcees and arrogant lil' wannabes,
You aint the King of Shyt, your faker then mephistopheles,
Gettin' props on the net dont make you a battle vet,
Think your the best? where's King's audio or casette?
A P.I.R crony who's punches are indirect,
cant take you serious homie, your crew's down with INTELL3KT,
You spit poetry, but your punches are distant misses,
In your dream your the best, now you writing battle disses,
In reality Tek murdered you, and no one's ever heard-of-you,
You ain't Shyt, all you-can-do is spit a word-or-two,
You couldnt injure-me if you were Mr. Hyde when he was furious,
You couldn't Shyt-on-me if I was Pompei and you Vesuveus,
All you can do, is write a few nice lines,
A few complex words, a few complex rhymes,
That complex Shyt might impress cats on a website,
But you know it dont amount to Shyt in a true mic-fight,
continue writin' rhymes behind the safety of your computer,
I'll give King this- he could ghostwrite or be an english tutor,
But you couldnt spit a verse to hurt-me, and conversely,
Prophet's a ruthless killer, got King beggin' for mercy.......
peace homie, come back

The pir diss in that was fire both prolly equal in punches

but my vote still stands

v=Jamel

jjh_38
10-16-2005, 03:14 PM
thx for votin grim


and btw.. nice battle Jamel... peace n respect.. some fuckin heat up in here..lol

Grim Reapa
10-16-2005, 03:16 PM
vote on my battle

Locust
10-16-2005, 03:22 PM
KING:

Kid, your a mochery.. .. ya ‘prophecies’ aint possibly stoppin me
You wouldn’t have ‘Shyt in the bag’ if you ‘rocked a Colostomy’
Here’s my philosophy.. ya lost-ta-me.. take ya fuckin vacation
kinda simple but still.. tight multies man
Cuz you aint ‘beatin’ the ‘illest’.. you jus ‘jerkin off' 'AIDs patients’
hahaha
More moves than matrix agents…I shred you rappers to pieces
Lethal procedures...nailin your body to these ‘posts’ like Jesus
A master of rap ‘Mechanics’..i ‘ratchet’ graphic schematics
You couldn’t ‘pass it’ like cash baskets at Cath-o-lic masses.
Gats smackin’ ya cabbage….watch ya collapse to tha canvas
Contacted a 'cactus'...left ya 'stuck' for ya cash and advances
KingShyt slick with the sentences.. rippin this kid’s appendages
iLL varieties spit ‘to society’… like ‘menace is’
tight!
Death is his.. but Jamel can still be heard.. ..wonder how?
Cuz i placed ‘bombs in his casket’.. and ‘blew up the underground’
Jamel the Prophets the user.. we consider the corp’s sewer
Wit all dat lyrical manure he’s puttin through his computer
Your easially out-manuevered... Kid I soothed-ya-fix
What about ‘PIR?’.. This Prophets on my ‘crew’s-suffix’ (crusifix)
damn.. what a verse, last line was killer


Jamal:

Jamel slays emcees and arrogant lil' wannabes,
You aint the King of Shyt, your faker then mephistopheles,
Gettin' props on the net dont make you a battle vet,
Think your the best? where's King's audio or casette?
weak..
A P.I.R crony who's punches are indirect,
cant take you serious homie, your crew's down with INTELL3KT,
LOL
You spit poetry, but your punches are distant misses,
In your dream your the best, now you writing battle disses,
In reality Tek murdered you, and no one's ever heard-of-you,
You ain't Shyt, all you-can-do is spit a word-or-two,
:learning: being shyt is good? keep using multies though
You couldnt injure-me if you were Mr. Hyde when he was furious,
You couldn't Shyt-on-me if I was Pompei and you Vesuveus,
All you can do, is write a few nice lines,
A few complex words, a few complex rhymes,
That complex Shyt might impress cats on a website,
stop complementing him
But you know it dont amount to Shyt in a true mic-fight,
continue writin' rhymes behind the safety of your computer,
I'll give King this- he could ghostwrite or be an english tutor,
But you couldnt spit a verse to hurt-me, and conversely,
Prophet's a ruthless killer, got King beggin' for mercy.......

nothing special there, no real punchlines or multies at all really.. King was on a whole different level, jamals lines didn't even touch him. I gotta vote for Kingshyt since he had alot of quoteable lines and the better flow, 1
vote=kingshyt

TeknicelStylez
10-16-2005, 03:41 PM
You ain't Shyt, all you-can-do is spit a word-or-two,
:learning: being shyt is good? keep using multies though

Are you from another country or something?

TeknicelStylez
10-16-2005, 03:59 PM
Kid, your a mochery.. .. ya ‘prophecies’ aint possibly stoppin me
You wouldn’t have ‘Shyt in the bag’ if you ‘rocked a Colostomy’
(Hahahahahaha)
Here’s my philosophy.. ya lost-ta-me.. take ya fuckin vacation
Cuz you aint ‘beatin’ the ‘illest’.. you jus ‘jerkin off' 'AIDs patients’
(You just blackened his eye wit this punch)
More moves than matrix agents…I shred you rappers to pieces
Lethal procedures...nailin your body to these ‘posts’ like Jesus
(didn't work as well as you expected it too)
A master of rap ‘Mechanics’..i ‘ratchet’ graphic schematics
You couldn’t ‘pass it’ like cash baskets at Cath-o-lic masses.
Gats smackin’ ya cabbage….watch ya collapse to tha canvas
Contacted a 'cactus'...left ya 'stuck' for ya cash and advances
(Good use of mult's but punch wise its all jabs)
KingShyt slick with the sentences.. rippin this kid’s appendages
iLL varieties spit ‘to society’… like ‘menace is’
(Nice word play)
Death is his.. but Jamel can still be heard.. ..wonder how?
Cuz i placed ‘bombs in his casket’.. and ‘blew up the underground’
(I'm not too sure how this one works? lol)
Jamel the Prophets the user.. we consider the corp’s sewer
Wit all dat lyrical manure he’s puttin through his computer
Your easially out-manuevered... Kid I soothed-ya-fix
What about ‘PIR?’.. This Prophets on my ‘crew’s-suffix’ (crusifix)
(OK)

Yo if it was any other opponent this verse would've straight killed em, for the simple use of multi's and decent punches. The only punch you had in this verse that I really felt hit hard was the Aids Patient, and the Colostomy. I felt like you had alot of filler in your verse.

Jamel slays emcees and arrogant lil' wannabes,
You aint the King of Shyt, your faker then mephistopheles,
(Yea this was pretty weak for an opener lol, on some Vernakular tip)
Gettin' props on the net dont make you a battle vet,
Think your the best? where's King's audio or casette?
(Ok I'll take that as a weak jab)
A P.I.R crony who's punches are indirect,
cant take you serious homie, your crew's down with INTELL3KT,
(THIS IS THE KILLER LINE, SHIT HAD ME DYING, NICE ASS PERSONAL)
You spit poetry, but your punches are distant misses,
In your dream your the best, now you writing battle disses,
In reality Tek murdered you, and no one's ever heard-of-you,
You ain't Shyt, all you-can-do is spit a word-or-two,
(Thanks for the recognition, nice use of multi's)
You couldnt injure-me if you were Mr. Hyde when he was furious,
You couldn't Shyt-on-me if I was Pompei and you Vesuveus,
(Again on that vernakular tip, shooting random historical locations and names)
All you can do, is write a few nice lines,
A few complex words, a few complex rhymes,
That complex Shyt might impress cats on a website,
But you know it dont amount to Shyt in a true mic-fight,
(Kind of Filler)
continue writin' rhymes behind the safety of your computer,
I'll give King this- he could ghostwrite or be an english tutor,
(lol thats pretty funny)
But you couldnt spit a verse to hurt-me, and conversely,
Prophet's a ruthless killer, got King beggin' for mercy.......
(Ok nice little outro)
peace homie, come back

Idk yo, this is hard, because you had more personals, and that intellekt line really had me dying. This was a good battle on both ends, but I seen King bring alot better before, and as for you, you came hard but you fell off on a couple of lines. Jamel if you had more punches you definately would've won this. I would've voted for you in a second with more punches to back up the personals you already had.

Since punches and wordplay are both pretty much even. Based on verse construction, flow, and use of multi's... I'm gonna have to vote King

Vote = King Shyt

Damn yo, I had to read that battle like 8 times...

Eddy
10-16-2005, 04:44 PM
Damn idk gahd!!! thats hard...........

What about ‘PIR?’.. This Prophets on my ‘crew’s-suffix’ (crusifix)
continue writin' rhymes behind the safety of your computer,
I'll give King this- he could ghostwrite or be an english tutor

i think im gonna have to go wit shyt on this 1, but it was hard, and it was mad close

Eddy
10-16-2005, 04:46 PM
oh ya VOTE ON MY BATTLE WIT STUNACINO PLEEZ WE NEED VOTES MAN!!!!!

Grim Reapa
10-16-2005, 04:49 PM
Are you from another country or something?
Jamel is actually from Australia lmao

RockD
10-16-2005, 07:33 PM
Vote= Jamel

both mc's came hard , but i felt that wat jamel was throwin, was deadly darts lol... i'm not sayin king shyt aint do shit is just his shit was not DA best shyt in this battle lol.. good battle to both Mc's but vote goes to Jamel.

whatradio
10-16-2005, 08:47 PM
dope battle. no disprespect to Jamal's verse but Kingshyt gets my vote b/c his was damn near flawless. good metas, muliti's and wordplay.

Visionz
10-16-2005, 09:36 PM
gotta go w/ King on this one, I think he was more aggressive w/ the attacks, felt like Jamel was givin him too much credit in the verse when he should've just been tryin to murder him. There were some nice lines in the verse. I thought the Vesuvius line was real clever but I just didn't think it was brutal enough to top King's verse. peace

Visionz
10-16-2005, 09:39 PM
3-2, w/ King leading, gotta repeat that non-comp votes don't count, don't mind if others come in here and share their feedback but it's not going to affect the official outcome.

Potent1
10-17-2005, 11:07 AM
Are you from another country or something?
LOL!! GOODNIGHT!


Imma have to read this again.

Robert
10-17-2005, 11:29 AM
3-3, lets get some votes to finish this off

Robert
10-17-2005, 12:19 PM
"being shyt is good? keep using multies though"-Locust


when you tell someone "you aint shit but a faker/bitch etc it aint a complement which is what I was doing foolio
peace

Locust
10-17-2005, 12:41 PM
"being shyt is good? keep using multies though"-Locust


when you tell someone "you aint shit but a faker/bitch etc it aint a complement which is what I was doing foolio
peace yea w/e, if you read what i was quoting you would get where i was coming from, but who gives a fuck, your verse was wack anyway

Robert
10-17-2005, 12:54 PM
^^
Dont really value your opinion anyway. Verse was wack? alot of peeps didnt think that (thought that Teks vote pretty much summed up how close the battle was). I think you dickride Kingshyt and Spok3n just a little too much, no doubt King was good but please, it aint 3 all coz King's "on a whole nother level" then me. Anyway dont bother responding to this coz I aint gonna bothering replyin' to you again...........

T-ribe
10-17-2005, 12:54 PM
This battle waz a hot one both brought a decent amount of fire power. I gotta say Jamel just laid his in the right places. Resprct ot both sides.
V-Jamel

TeknicelStylez
10-17-2005, 12:54 PM
I smell a hater *sniff* *sniff*

Relax chisel chest, If you think that this line being quoted

You ain't Shyt, all you-can-do is spit a word-or-two

Negates the fact that when you say someone "Aint shit" it doesn't imply that your calling them fecal matter, than I think your a poor judge of quality in the first place, in the future I'll probably disqualify all your votes from my battles in the official rules.

Word is bond.

Robert
10-17-2005, 12:55 PM
4-3, dont really know what Eric has this battle going too but yeah. Keep voting those in the comp........

Robert
10-17-2005, 12:59 PM
I smell a hater *sniff* *sniff*

Relax chisel chest, If you think that this line being quoted

You ain't Shyt, all you-can-do is spit a word-or-two

Negates the fact that when you say someone "Aint shit" it doesn't imply that your calling them fecal matter, than I think your a poor judge of quality in the first place, in the future I'll probably disqualify all your votes from my battles in the official rules.

Word is bond.


Who are you talking too?

Met-a-4
10-17-2005, 01:02 PM
Ya'll must be starin' at computer screens for too long, ya vision is blury.
Kingshyt came sick on every line. verbose wording, madd multi's, every meta4 and punch hit direct. word play was sick. Jamel came nice, i aint gunna discredit tha man, but tha King reigned supreme.

Vote= Kingshyt

TeknicelStylez
10-17-2005, 01:17 PM
To locust.

Locust
10-17-2005, 01:23 PM
I smell a hater *sniff* *sniff*

Relax chisel chest, If you think that this line being quoted

You ain't Shyt, all you-can-do is spit a word-or-two

Negates the fact that when you say someone "Aint shit" it doesn't imply that your calling them fecal matter, than I think your a poor judge of quality in the first place, in the future I'll probably disqualify all your votes from my battles in the official rules.

Word is bond.

i'm a poor judge of quality? I have more knowledge about battling than you homey

TeknicelStylez
10-17-2005, 01:26 PM
i'm a poor judge of quality? I have more knowledge about battling than you homeyThis is coming from somebody that doesn't know what "You aint shit" means, ever heard domestic violence? Dude thought bobby's girl was complimenting him the whole time ROFL.

Robert
10-17-2005, 02:31 PM
can we get some votes from those in the comp?

Visionz
10-17-2005, 02:39 PM
^its 4-3 to Jamel, still got seven comp votes out there so yall need to get in here and vote (all the bickering in this thread is for not when non-comp votes don't count)peace

Potent1
10-17-2005, 03:00 PM
nah both verses were tight.... I had to go through it a couple of times...


eeesh!

alright - Jamel stay throwing punches, flowed superbly but shyt's verse was just a bit more agressive. This is definitely top 2 battle here..

v= king

Robert
10-17-2005, 03:03 PM
4-4, this shit is going down to the wire............better get working on that tie breaker shit lol

$inista
10-17-2005, 03:04 PM
vote = king............... I think king got this by far
jamel you came out strong and with hard punches
but then died out at one point it sounded like you was giving him props
as king was more consistant & killng you with mad multis
with that verse king spit, IMO you didnt stand a chace

Robert
10-17-2005, 03:08 PM
5-4 to king,
A few people keep saying it sounded like I was complementing King in my verse, read it properly, I really wasnt.......anyway keep voting

b.a.R.n.
10-17-2005, 03:32 PM
Dope battle. i liked the furious-vesuvius line, that was sick, and the PIR diss saying they are down with intellekt (which IS totally ridiculous), and jamels verse flowed nicely. Thing is, kingshyt came back with incredible wordplay and sick multi's, that was just too much nahmean...i vote kingshyt. peace

Visionz
10-17-2005, 03:51 PM
6-4, King's up (still four votes out)

PHENIX
10-17-2005, 08:27 PM
Hard ass battle to vote for. both verses were on point. Excellent punches on both sides. I have to give a slight edge to king on wordplay though. I liked jamel's flow a lil better but if I gotta pick one.

vote=king by .00000001 cause both of yall are fo' real

Robert
10-17-2005, 11:41 PM
7-4 to Kingshyt, nice homie you prolly got this so good luck with the rest of this comp........

WARPATH
10-18-2005, 05:52 PM
vote= Jamel

That complex Shyt might impress cats on a website,
But you know it dont amount to Shyt in a true mic-fight,
continue writin' rhymes behind the safety of your computer,
I'll give King this- he could ghostwrite or be an english tutor

King Shyt came hard to but the enlish tutor thing- that shit was funny and smart

SurreaL
10-18-2005, 06:23 PM
Kings verse came hard (no homo Tuco), multi's, flow, whatever, his punch's were alot harder then Jamel, The battle was alright, but I felt King came out on top of this one, peace.

Vote = King

Visionz
10-18-2005, 06:23 PM
7-5, King up, shit aint over till its over yall still two votes out

Luther Large
10-18-2005, 06:28 PM
for sum reason i strongly think king's verse is pre-written it was still the best ive read so far though jamel was good but but he just didnt overcome king's verse.........it's a true shame 1 of ya'll aint gonna make it to the next round cuz in my opinion ya'll are in the top 5 best of the competition.....

but my vote gotta go to king shyt

vote=king shyt

Visionz
10-18-2005, 06:31 PM
8-5, KingShyt movin on to the next round, nice battle.respect to both emcees.peace