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Visionz
10-14-2005, 03:11 AM
Comp votes only. Both verses must be done by Weds. Potent1 drops first

Potent1
10-15-2005, 10:44 AM
new to your screen – this gal quick to clap a genius - who’s quite the contrary, this bitch is crack fiendish - never seeing this, expose you as the wu – corps top trick -Allah paypal my money but was short sucking one dick - bronze your keypad – toggle these – as I text, you swallow - virtual babies make up the enzymes in your intestines hollow - like a wynan brother dressed in drag breaking ethic laws – ugly hot chick shittin behind bathroom stalls - type to watch internet kiddie porn while your ass gets torn – One your senior – boy - you liked my first born – you against me is like atila versus vernacular –

when I get through with your handle – your mammays going to need a spatula.

Grim Reapa
10-15-2005, 01:10 PM
Potent1 doesn't even know what being,'potent', means
Prolly a gay man frontin as a bitch like the,'king of queens'
Your,'disturbed', prolly spittin silioquies
Even if I came and slapped the shit outta ya with my rhymes
You wouldn't be,'feelin these'
Never could start a battle, always burnt by Unseen bad
You prolly such a dyke you use a,'mattress pad',
as a,'maxi-pad'
This is a big,'gamble', thinkin u could win this
You couldn't 'battle right'
if someone showed you 'How- to- diss'
Talk about how you merk netcees your just a 'seat filler'
Your steppin out of the 'pee wees' and messin with 'real killers'
Actin like a 'monkey' and just 'throwin' out shit
Try to come off like the GZA but your just to 'dimly lit'

Grim Reapa
10-15-2005, 03:50 PM
vote

Visionz
10-15-2005, 05:18 PM
ok, first up Potent1........................


new to your screen – this gal quick to clap a genius - who’s quite the contrary, this bitch is crack fiendish(hot opening for the verse) - never seeing this, expose you as the wu – corps top trick -Allah paypal my money but was short sucking one dick(that's a funny punch) - bronze your keypad – toggle these – as I text, you swallow - virtual babies make up the enzymes in your intestines hollow(creative but this still lacked punch, more a jab) - like a wynan brother dressed in drag breaking ethic laws – ugly hot chick shittin behind bathroom stalls(another jab) - type to watch internet kiddie porn while your ass gets torn – One your senior – boy - you liked my first born(funny playing on his age, another jab) – you against me is like atila versus vernacular –

when I get through with your handle – your mammays going to need a spatula.(nice rhyme, but not too much impact, vernacular means slang of the people, even if it was a historical figure, the spatula imagery is vague to me,is she whippin his ass w/ the spatula? kind of a weak jab here)



now for GA...........................

Potent1 doesn't even know what being,'potent', means
Prolly a gay man frontin as a bitch like the,'king of queens'
(not bad openin lines here)
Your,'disturbed', prolly spittin silioquies
Even if I came and slapped the shit outta ya with my rhymes
You wouldn't be,'feelin these'
(ayy, kinda of a stretched line here,and if your lines can't be felt, that's not a good thing)
Never could start a battle, always burnt by Unseen bad
You prolly such a dyke you use a,'mattress pad',
as a,'maxi-pad'
(Still kinda stretching the lines, but still a funny punch)
This is a big,'gamble', thinkin u could win this
You couldn't 'battle right'
if someone showed you
How 'to diss'
(no impact for me here, filla)
Talk about how you merk netcees your just a 'seat filler'
Your steppin out of the 'pee wees' and messin with 'real killers'
(ok, not brutal but not bad, call it a jab)
Actin like a 'monkey' and just 'throwin' out shit
Try to come off like the GZA but your just to 'dimly lit'
(monkey line not bad but on the second one, the dimly doesn't really have a tie in besides it rhyming.No real set up on why she's dimly lit)


Not too bad a battle, and was pretty evenly matched. One of you is defintely moving forward and would say that you're going to have to bring these verses like it could be your last, both were decent but neither one was amazing for me. I would hope whoever moves on brings more intensity in the future. I did think that Potent1 was more creative w/ the punches and a tad more consistent, GA thought it seemed like rhymes because they rhyme on a couple of lines and the verse as a whole could've used some imagination injected into the whole thing. My vote goes to Potent1

Grim Reapa
10-15-2005, 05:43 PM
this is gonna be classic

Grim Reapa
10-15-2005, 07:32 PM
Like Diddy

Vote or die

TeknicelStylez
10-15-2005, 09:55 PM
Potent1, better context and multi's, more interesting read and a better flow.

Genious' verse sounded broken up and didn't connect well, punches did't work as well as they shouldve.

Eddy
10-15-2005, 09:59 PM
considerin i jus met u, nice and no ofense but readin this definetley got me ready to face u gahd. U BETTA SHOW j/k much props gahd

Eddy
10-15-2005, 09:59 PM
mb v=genius

T-ribe
10-15-2005, 10:17 PM
Yo, potent1's verse started pretty strong but ran out of steam, and GA's was kinda soft at first but got vish at the end.
My vote goes to GA.

Grim Reapa
10-15-2005, 10:30 PM
im leading 3-2 bumpin

what we doin up to?

Visionz
10-15-2005, 11:19 PM
actually it's 2-2, rules are that only people in the comp count, no offense to Pok, it's just tourney rules and it take 8 votes to win, all these are stated in the ready to rumble thread

Potent1
10-16-2005, 12:13 AM
good shyt Genuis -


i thought i saw that Genius Allah used to be vernakular or something like that - lol

Visionz
10-16-2005, 12:19 AM
^true statement, GA got a long list of aliases, da Grim Reapa being the latest

TeknicelStylez
10-16-2005, 01:21 AM
"The fag" is the latest nick name he has in my book lol

Just fuckin wit you homie.

$inista
10-16-2005, 04:57 AM
What! These 2 lines did it for me
toggle these – as I text, you swallow - virtual babies make up the enzymes in your intestines hollow
And
ugly hot chick shittin behind bathroom stalls - type to watch internet kiddie porn while your ass gets torn


GA like this line
Your steppin out of the 'pee wees' and messin with 'real killers'
Actin like a 'monkey' and just 'throwin' out shit

It was to short I would love 2 see a rematch
But this 1 I have 2 give 2 potent

Visionz
10-16-2005, 05:01 AM
3-2 for the Potent1

Grim Reapa
10-16-2005, 09:20 AM
"The fag" is the latest nick name he has in my book lol

Just fuckin wit you homie.
and ur new name is Unseens dickrider jk lol

whatradio
10-16-2005, 10:38 AM
Genius you came pretty nice... you were lackin wordplay but you had some good punches here and there. I read your verse numerous times and I can't pick a couple of lines that stood out to me b/c you were pretty consistent w/ch is good.

Even if I came and slapped the shit outta ya with my rhymes
You wouldn't be,'feelin these'


this line I felt could have been worded differently b/c it discredits your verse in a way. when inflicting pain to your opponent you definitely want them to feel it.

Potent1 started off viscious.

new to your screen – this gal quick to clap a genius - who’s quite the contrary, this bitch is crack fiendish - never seeing this, expose you as the wu – corps top trick

now thats crazy!
potent sustainted the same aggression throughout.

my vote goes to Potent1
good battle though peoples!

respect

Robert
10-16-2005, 11:23 AM
Hmmm, Potent got this but not by much, the fact is thats genius's verse was just too disjointed and he lost points for that, the punches were there just not the structure.

Potent's verse was structured much better and the punches were consistent, so i'll vote for him......
vote=Potent1
peace

Ballad Ballistik
10-16-2005, 11:26 AM
potents a chick right..?

Grim Reapa
10-16-2005, 11:54 AM
5-3

Potent respect not all female mc's are like you I respect that

RockD
10-16-2005, 12:11 PM
i vote =genius

like the flow punches were funny and effective for allah
potent was good at begginin but ran out at the end
so repeat :
vote=Alllah

Grim Reapa
10-16-2005, 12:15 PM
5-4

damn this is a good battle

TeknicelStylez
10-16-2005, 02:38 PM
and ur new name is Unseens dickrider jk lolThat would make sense if I actually mentioned unseen Ever, but yea.... your still corny.

Grim Reapa
10-16-2005, 02:40 PM
y do u pick fights tek

Grim Reapa
10-16-2005, 04:04 PM
Vote 5-4

Grim Reapa
10-16-2005, 08:28 PM
Vote

Visionz
10-16-2005, 08:42 PM
correction, 5-3. non-comp votes don't count

Ballad Ballistik
10-16-2005, 08:45 PM
correction, 5-3. non-comp votes don't countway to stay on top of it...bs votes you killing them i like it...!

Grim Reapa
10-16-2005, 08:47 PM
correction, 5-3. non-comp votes don't count
rockd is in the tourney

Visionz
10-16-2005, 08:51 PM
however, Pok isn't, 5-3 homie

Potent1
10-17-2005, 10:27 AM
5-4

damn this is a good battle

oh you changed your name again? cute sig.

Robert
10-17-2005, 11:38 AM
If its 5-3 didnt potent just win? Eric you gotta get ben to close these so peeps stop voting and confusing this shit

Met-a-4
10-17-2005, 11:54 AM
Gotta give this to the Potent1, fa real her shyt is smokin son. I like intricate lyrics, your smart grl, i like ur style. But Genius's wasnt bad, that shyt was nice. Potent jst came out swingin' for blood.

Vote= Potent1

Visionz
10-17-2005, 01:25 PM
If its 5-3 didnt potent just win? Eric you gotta get ben to close these so peeps stop voting and confusing this shit naw man, everyone in the comp needs to vote on all these battles, it's gonna take 8 votes to win a battle in the first round. I think such a high # is necessary to keep crew votes and other shit from influencing things too much.......and once again non-comp votes dodn't count, so its still 5-3 (with 6 votes still out)peace

PHENIX
10-17-2005, 02:37 PM
it was a nice battle. I'm goin with potent1 on this one. I like the punchlines from potent1 a lil better than genious but he had some heat though.

vote=potent1

Visionz
10-17-2005, 02:49 PM
6-3, Potent1's up (5 votes still out)

b.a.R.n.
10-17-2005, 03:03 PM
i vote potent1, his shit was nice with grim reapa i felt some punches, but like jamel said, he should have organized and structure it better...i vote potent1

Grim Reapa
10-17-2005, 04:17 PM
Vote

Visionz
10-17-2005, 05:32 PM
7-3, Potent1 up,(still got like 4 votes out)

Grim Reapa
10-17-2005, 05:37 PM
Eric i got a question

Visionz
10-17-2005, 05:41 PM
what up?

Visionz
10-18-2005, 05:50 PM
bumpin, we still got votes out for this one

WARPATH
10-18-2005, 07:44 PM
Vote= Potent

I almost voted GA- then I realized Potent was a female and when I re-read her verse it made sense and it was like her name applies- potent- you gotta read between the lines with hers

although GA's verse was also good and flowed well, I think you should have approached the battle differentley.

Mista Sinista
10-18-2005, 07:45 PM
This battle went to GA cuz his punches were better than potents non existing ones

Visionz
10-18-2005, 08:37 PM
8-3, that's a wrap yall, Potent1 is moving on to the next round. peace

Potent1
10-19-2005, 12:37 PM
Good shyt GA! thx for the votes peeples!! ;o)

Now I normally wouldn't ever explain my rhyme but too many people didn't get it...

you against me is like atila versus vernacular –when I get through with your handle – your mammays going to need a spatula.

Atila the Hun is a fat character - huge in unreasonable porportions...
vs.
Vernakular ( was GA's old handle) nothing pertaining to slang

hence the need of a spatula to scrap ole boi off the floor..... eeesh.