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H.Notik
03-25-2011, 12:32 PM
zone in...


tune out...


life is life lets cross the F out.



LIE



chant and re-live...
a serpents sacrafice, suicide
soothin' eyes accepted, except when jesus cries
let the meaning be a vessel, voyage, truthful credential...
elevation: terrestriel - speech pattern volcanic
seap into the ocean with glee, only to panic
soaked...buthard as a rock armed with a'
COCK'...Adoodle wake up voodoo for useful alarm clocks...
bust it,
matter of fact yo fuck it...
rape the vision portrayed by a scavangers bucket
lolly-gaggin misery, beneath the cities symphony
'cling' goes the sound 'cling cling cling' all things considering,
you got yourself a pretty penny worth of booze control the simmering.
boiling...
water flows, behold the sympathy
wash away, wash away, wash away....

wash away the pollen stains and breath... precious air
this is mental organisms confused with pressure of no cares

you scared?

BornPower
03-25-2011, 02:53 PM
LIE



chant and re-live...
a serpents sacrafice, suicide
soothin' eyes accepted, except when jesus cries
let the meaning be a vessel, voyage, truthful credential...
elevation: terrestriel - speech pattern volcanic
seap into the ocean with glee, only to panic
soaked...


bust it,
matter of fact yo fuck it...
rape the vision portrayed by a scavangers bucket
lolly-gaggin misery, beneath the cities symphony

you got yourself a pretty penny worth of booze control the simmering.
boiling...
water flows, behold the sympathy
wash away, wash away, wash away....

wash away the pollen stains and breath... precious air
this is mental organisms confused with pressure of no cares

you scared?

i felt like i was listening in on you sketching a few verses to some beats you just picked up. I like how you threaded it together with the "water" theme.

what were you listening to when you did this?

peace

THE MASON
03-28-2011, 01:26 AM
read this a couple of times and got a good flow out of it. good written overall, some dope lines in there

let the meaning be a vessel, voyage, truthful credential...
elevation: terrestriel - speech pattern volcanic
seap into the ocean with glee, only to panic

^these were dope

SHEEPISH LORD OF CHAOS
03-28-2011, 05:57 AM
damn dope son short but sweet

J.T.S.
03-28-2011, 08:32 AM
zone in...


tune out...


life is life lets cross the F out.



LIE



chant and re-live...
a serpents sacrafice, suicide
soothin' eyes accepted, except when jesus cries
let the meaning be a vessel, voyage, truthful credential...
elevation: terrestriel - speech pattern volcanic
seap into the ocean with glee, only to panic
soaked...buthard as a rock armed with a'
COCK'...Adoodle wake up voodoo for useful alarm clocks...
bust it,
matter of fact yo fuck it...
rape the vision portrayed by a scavangers bucket
lolly-gaggin misery, beneath the cities symphony
'cling' goes the sound 'cling cling cling' all things considering,
you got yourself a pretty penny worth of booze control the simmering.
boiling...
water flows, behold the sympathy
wash away, wash away, wash away....

wash away the pollen stains and breath... precious air
this is mental organisms confused with pressure of no cares

you scared?


Damn this made me think iv'e never read something so short and unique took my mind through a trip much props!

Wh0am3ye?
03-28-2011, 01:04 PM
Feelin this bro, good shit.