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oldie
10-20-2005, 10:32 AM
cos me for one can't write rhyme's, but i always try n write sum shit for some reason, i'll be listenin to a real good album that i havent heard in ages and im jus like, gotta get somat down on paper, man! jus gets me in the mood to write some firery shit but it never comes off! get my pen and paper and my mind jus goes blank or when i do write somethin - the rhymin is on such a poor level.lol. i mean im sure a lot off ppl on here can rhyme, but for me, i think wiv rhymin - u either got it or you don't and i don't. ive jus tried writin again the other nite, jus laid in bed listenin to public enemy and thinkin on how fucked up hip-hop is nowadays, jus gettin pissed off thinkin bout how ppl like Diddy n Jigga contributed greatly to making it into a business! so i thought fuck it, im gunna try n write sum shit on that.

Welshkillabee
10-20-2005, 10:39 AM
Nah I aint never write nothing down but I can rhyme In my head if ya know what I mean.

SurreaL
10-20-2005, 10:39 AM
It's all about the message and creativity from your own mind, you know?

BRASSKNUCKLED PAI MEI
10-20-2005, 10:48 AM
try sitting down with out the music on and think about something in ya past that really pissed you off...then write about it

Sweet6
10-20-2005, 10:54 AM
Do drugs and drink and then try to write something about your neighborhood. Works for 75% of rappers who go platinum.

arcane
10-20-2005, 10:56 AM
^^^^:lmao:

Locust
10-20-2005, 11:15 AM
Do drugs and drink and then try to write something about your neighborhood. Works for 75% of rappers who go platinum. hahaha

practise..........fuck it heres a little advice off the top


think of a subject matter, you always have to have something to write about
don't rap about guns or whores or bling or drugs, that kinda bullshit is played out, come with something original
try to rhyme with more than 1 syllable at a time, you won't survive today with that simple style shit
don't use verses in the battlefield as examples, it's almost all crap there
don't use the word 'you', as in don't diss the reader or whatever else you have in mind
don't have streched lines, don't write long ass lines with more than 16 syllables
keep practising until you think your good, and use the feedback you get from others wisely

King Callabah
10-20-2005, 11:15 AM
i write wah ever i want when ever i feel like it and i spit that shit whenever i want and i flow over wahever fuckin beats i want and i do all that jus cos i want to and i topic songs on wah i want to and thats that WAH! UH!

Skellington
10-20-2005, 11:54 AM
I never done it till earlier this year when my cousin told me he was busy writing for the last 2 years, so he told me I should give it a shot cause he knows I had a pretty messed up life, so eventually I tried and tried and, now....it goes pretty well, and I'm enjoying it,I can finally express my feeling without pounding someone to dust ;)

shingen
10-20-2005, 01:29 PM
i used to write rhymes

now adays my mind kinda been blank

Gigy
10-20-2005, 01:30 PM
Oh yeah I tried, just for the fun of it. And it comes out pretty well actually.

Bloo
10-20-2005, 02:59 PM
You know, I've never tried to write a rhyme but every now and again i'll think of two or three hot bars but never write them down. Funny thing though, every now and again I'll get an idea for a dope beat or a dope verse in my sleep. and I never remember it when I wake up. Only thing I can remember are the beats sometimes. But seeing as how I don't produce I can't do anything about them either.

Luther Large
10-20-2005, 03:01 PM
i don't try to write ryhmes..........i do write ryhmes

Sicka than aidZ
10-20-2005, 03:05 PM
i just decided to start dissing bigben and skale one day and the shit kinda went from there. no, most shit i dont write down, thats the main reason i lose. horrible structured.

SHRAP
10-20-2005, 03:15 PM
cos me for one can't write rhyme's, but i always try n write sum shit for some reason, i'll be listenin to a real good album that i havent heard in ages and im jus like, gotta get somat down on paper, man! jus gets me in the mood to write some firery shit but it never comes off! get my pen and paper and my mind jus goes blank or when i do write somethin - the rhymin is on such a poor level.lol. i mean im sure a lot off ppl on here can rhyme, but for me, i think wiv rhymin - u either got it or you don't and i don't. ive jus tried writin again the other nite, jus laid in bed listenin to public enemy and thinkin on how fucked up hip-hop is nowadays, jus gettin pissed off thinkin bout how ppl like Diddy n Jigga contributed greatly to making it into a business! so i thought fuck it, im gunna try n write sum shit on that.
pffffffffffflaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa

rhymes just pop into my head like ill see a sign and shit/ and think of somethin that rhymes wit it... oh shit theres one right there... problem is keepin track of all of em cuz at work i dont have nothin to write em on. i dont need to try, usually takes like like 20-30 minutes to write a 16. its not like it came naturally though you just have to keep practicing and train your brain to think in rhyme and shit like that.

Sicka than aidZ
10-20-2005, 03:22 PM
yeah, when i started to clown these guys they'd blow me off the map with there response. I dont think i can rap like skale or ben, they're to good. but i kept it up cuz we became cool with eachother. fuckin skale's to good. peace man. your shrap verses were unreal.

Potent1
10-20-2005, 03:23 PM
Battle - if you can snap - go to it - even if you suck and even if you lose... you'll get your weight up eventually or not. But at least you can say you tried.

Woozer
10-20-2005, 03:24 PM
its the mu fuckin god emcee/
mister woozy, what the fuck you know about thee/
bring lyrical maimings like skale/
leaving herb ass niggas frale/
sicka den aidz i heard you popping shit/
talkin bout you got a big clique/
well i got the biggest crew/
and youre going down you drunk indian you/
shouldnt you be on the side of the road/
passed out and greener then a toad/
been to a casino?/
cause i dont see no/
sick den aidz character with a job/
come on the internet and brag bout the chinks you rob/
even though we know you aint hold heat/
but your more similar to rodney peete/
and i keep my crack game major like apple white/
ima make a drunk indian my acolyte/

my thread got deleted

Ayatollah Prolific
10-20-2005, 03:33 PM
To spit with skill, is like composing a living will
every word and message should be refined until
your content it's your best, you'll easily rest
a day later, figure out how to take the next step

... I personally think it takes a great deal of practice and research (listening to hip hop). Listening to Wu will help, because they vary in styles. It gives you an idea of different approaches. However, you will realize you write your best stuff when you stay true to yourself.

G.O.D.PT3
10-20-2005, 03:36 PM
a nigga dibble and dabble aitn really fucin with this rap game. basketball is my thing. stay up JUSTICE

Sicka than aidZ
10-20-2005, 03:40 PM
its the mu fuckin god emcee/
mister woozy, what the fuck you know about thee/
bring lyrical maimings like skale/
leaving herb ass niggas frale/
sicka den aidz i heard you popping shit/
talkin bout you got a big clique/
well i got the biggest crew/
and youre going down you drunk indian you/
shouldnt you be on the side of the road/
passed out and greener then a toad/
been to a casino?/
cause i dont see no/
sick den aidz character with a job/
come on the internet and brag bout the chinks you rob/
even though we know you aint hold heat/
but your more similar to rodney peete/
and i keep my crack game major like apple white/
ima make a drunk indian my acolyte/

my thread got deleted
ill rip u in two baby gurl.

Sicka than aidZ
10-20-2005, 03:42 PM
its the mu fuckin god emcee/
mister woozy, what the fuck you know about thee/
bring lyrical maimings like skale/
leaving herb ass niggas frale/
sicka den aidz i heard you popping shit/
talkin bout you got a big clique/
well i got the biggest crew/
and youre going down you drunk indian you/
shouldnt you be on the side of the road/
passed out and greener then a toad/
been to a casino?/
cause i dont see no/
sick den aidz character with a job/
come on the internet and brag bout the chinks you rob/
even though we know you aint hold heat/
but your more similar to rodney peete/
and i keep my crack game major like apple white/
ima make a drunk indian my acolyte/

my thread got deleted
WTF?.....hahahaahahahaaha

tajeco
10-20-2005, 03:45 PM
Just write down your thoughts, it might turn into a book. Rhymes are just words that sound the same, but are not as important as the messege you convey. Plus when you "try" to do something it's harder than if you just allow it to flow. Just Do It, like Michael Jordan, he didn't "try" to play basketball, he just practiced and improved his natural skill.

wutangazn
10-20-2005, 05:55 PM
i write poems in my poetry class and try to have as much good rhymes and lyrics in there. the class is given ten minutes to write something and some days i have a hard time writing something good. other days ill write something thats not bad. but i realized that knowledge is needed to write something good. ur poems cant be sounding like a retard wrote it.

oldie
10-20-2005, 07:42 PM
thnx 4 not hatin ya lot. i expected mad heat, like this kids fuckin jokin. but yeah, messagesm experiences, i got a fair few strong ones, how about ---- i got anuerysm in/of my brain, i already typed this but, yeah im 18 now, @ the time i was born, doc said they was a 50/50 chance i would die or survive wiv brain damage, i survived win NO brain damage - dnt even crack j/k's bouts dat, and @ the time i had the most metal coils in my brain, 21. the most now is 24, but they was me & ONE other person in THE WORLD 2 have survived the opperation - who the other person is i aint got a clue, the opperation was still pioneering @the time too. my mam n dad sent pics on my b-day to my doc's till i was 6 jus 2 show how i was gettin on, which was perfect/normal. and the docs took my pics all ova the world wiv em 2 conferences cos at the time i was the most successful case of it!

so how about dat for a story 2 rhyme about, p.s. ^^^evry word is a fact, im special ya.

so heres what i got on the mainstream ova the past few nights:
I stay 2 fingers up to the mainstream

dumbed down in the name of CREAM

a real message is never seen

it's about the finer things in life

no real emcee's

rhymes been used so many times they as old as christ

they ain't battle in the streets at night

but act gangsta in the studio when its light

don't matter as long as they earning money, right?

hip-hop's been turned into a business

think they signing artists for money

all goes to CEO, dummy

U-Samurai
10-20-2005, 08:17 PM
If U Cant Write Then Dont. Do Sumthin Else Ur Better At. Paul Wall Is A Clear Example Of Sumbody That Didnt Get The Memo.

J-Cee
10-20-2005, 11:47 PM
really you just have to condition yourself to be able to get the rhymes out of your mind and on the paper. im to the point that every verse i write takes me at the most 15 minutes and its always fire. i never second guess myself, the shit you think at first is usually gonna be that hot shit. in all real a good way to help yourself with your writing is to practice freestylin. when you freestylin you move from ya brain to ya mouth, and a lot of times you can say some amazing shit just of whim. i know thats probably backwards to what most people think but its how i gets down.
thats true as man,i freestyle alot and most of the time when i freestyle on spot i just come up wit made punchlines n shit outta nowhere,then i try writing some shit and i have to think for like 10 minutes to find 2 decent rhymin lines.

deadlymelody
10-21-2005, 12:21 AM
It's tough to do a full 16 bars I gotta say. It was odd though this one day I wrote a full page of one verse and it stayed on the subject matter and it was easily the best I did. You can't think about what to write, you just fucking do it.

Hidden Chamber
10-21-2005, 03:51 AM
I write rhymes galore

oldie
10-21-2005, 06:14 AM
i don't know jack shit about bars i jus try to write rhymes....unsuccessfully

WuBanga36
10-21-2005, 11:06 AM
Tried a few times, came out looking n hearing horrible.

oldie
10-21-2005, 01:20 PM
oh well thx to those who gave advice, gotta keep tryin, but unfortunatley i think its jus sumthin u either got or u don't, and i don't.