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LoTec
05-05-2011, 11:55 PM
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In a form of fragmented presentation
to comprehind the the boundless born
the infinte meshed set apart distance
intimate relentless on wind sentance
sentax advanced vocab tracks
the mind absolute
standing bending rigidly flexible
the cactus invoke life resolute
my thorns pierce and defy the brute
with tender tenticles clutching strange fruit
feel all feelings fall crash tumble
stomach butterfly brawl
can you fell my country drawl
as I should be open
the probe shutdown I melt sound

caress the cobra U sick
nurse the venom
voodoo sweatshop music
cursed denim

Shit flowers
to create an understanding of endless powers
twit cowers to debate blunder man things for endless hours
dazzling brillant resplendent in her ball gown
comanding in her tall crown she devours
energy seemingly voracious with ferocious synergy
on the god link lurkin
the blessed mother by frenzy twurkin
the earth spins she carefree be steady shirkin
the bonfire disire quagmire satire
expire
I see body suspended in blackness
ringed and illumined by a blue white cold energy fire
stimulating but not consuming the reservoirs
fighting off predators
coming from several doors
everyone with fangs dripping
some on two some on all fours

LoTec
05-08-2011, 09:26 PM
up for a few more views

THE MASON
05-10-2011, 12:02 PM
cant view it, says it aint processed yet

H.Notik
05-10-2011, 01:33 PM
not working

LoTec
05-10-2011, 03:15 PM
fixed

thanks for telling me

THE MASON
05-10-2011, 04:29 PM
this was dope, you got ill lyrics but the flow is choppy imo. if thats what you going for you could still tighten it up a bit more so it hits on those drums, certain parts the flow was locked in more, other were way off beat.

but overall this was my favourite joint from you, and the more i hear the better its gettin, so keep bangin em out fam, you def got a unique voice and style

KSTVRLSN
05-11-2011, 10:37 AM
Yeah, basically what Bronze said, shit's dope !

Haven't been dissapointed by anything I've heard from you so far !

LoTec
05-12-2011, 01:22 AM
this was dope, you got ill lyrics but the flow is choppy imo. if thats what you going for you could still tighten it up a bit more so it hits on those drums, certain parts the flow was locked in more, other were way off beat.

but overall this was my favourite joint from you, and the more i hear the better its gettin, so keep bangin em out fam, you def got a unique voice and style

thanks Bronze, I appreciate the constructive critique, I'll keep what you've said in mind when Im able to record again. All the tracks I've posted were all recorded 1 to 4 years ago.


Yeah, basically what Bronze said, shit's dope !

Haven't been dissapointed by anything I've heard from you so far !

peace KSTVRLSN glad your diggin the music, thanks for the listen.

llBARlllCODEll
05-12-2011, 06:17 PM
nice! Bonfire Desire Quagmire Satire! when u gonna be able to record again fam? i got some new beats on my soundcloud and some shit in the on deck circle. holla at me if u still wanna collab.

LoTec
05-13-2011, 12:27 PM
It will be awhile before Im recording again. Gotta get some ends up for equipment.

thanks for the listen and reply