PDA

View Full Version : Mid Day Mash Up's w/ Bronze Feet - Concrete Utopia


H.Notik
05-27-2011, 12:22 PM
Notik

I’ll gash open my forearm and sail through epiphanies
Specifically, through an ordinary but striking occurrence…
I’ll spit the breeze on lighting and ride through the current
Enticing the sea, but listen…my life’s no deterrent
As I’m guided through this empty pot just dying to stir it
Aligning my courage, guided through fires a furnace
Burns deep within my soul - along with a lion…
Who purrs when its roars been solemnly silenced
In time I’m a servant, never crying but violently searching
Counting away the seconds as my essence retires its purpose…
Reside in the hurt when, my island is corrupted by sirens
Singing songs of simple spells, succulent seductive to eye lids.
But words from a demon can never hold this poet back
I’ll plant stems that store water as my utopia overflows in the cracks…

Bronze

from the hanging gardens, we swear unearthly pardons
bumpin sound thru my harman kardons, dont be startin
with the monster, diabolic astrologic starry night prophet
gazin from the heavens rippin thru with vocal tension
ascention, in and out of 4th dimensions, apprehension
to keep it progressive with newer forms of aggression
receptive, detective paid for protection, armed experts
aresol artworks on brick walls, when Jill falls..........
Jack comes tumblin after, but the rock moves faster
rock slide shifter, death doctor, doomsday room operator
steel iron pit caster, we stay on top, die in laughter

ArcherPriest
05-27-2011, 05:02 PM
doooooope drop, this shit wuz fuckin NICE fellas..feelin it big time, inspired me add some.. lookin forward to more like this from yall

babel tower tongue spoken, gun powder lungs smokin
shells spent, like bus tokens seen some heads bust open
hell's vents, wuz left open, strewed gaseous smoke pillars
crust crackin like broke billiards collapsing on home builders
impassionate rogue killer's, black serpent mass sermon
pass baskets to cash servants of plastic mask surgeons
wrath merchants of rash burden, new jerusalem captives
stack ya foods 'n ya matches, the revolution's enacted
evolutions abandon by the movements of moons 'n planets
to positions where conditions have proven to do sum damage
by loosening pull of magnets, in atlas's solar fields
cook the soldiers meals, over the heat of smoldering steel

SHEEPISH LORD OF CHAOS
05-27-2011, 09:48 PM
dope shit keep killin e'm

J.T.S.
06-09-2011, 10:46 AM
[QUOTE=H.Notik;2102668]Notik

I’ll gash open my forearm and sail through epiphanies
Specifically, through an ordinary but striking occurrence…
I’ll spit the breeze on lighting and ride through the current
Enticing the sea, but listen…my life’s no deterrent (PAUSe..GODAMN!!)
As I’m guided through this empty pot just dying to stir it
Aligning my courage, guided through fires a furnace
Burns deep within my soul - along with a lion…
Who purrs when its roars been solemnly silenced
Bro This is insane!!
In time I’m a servant, never crying but violently searching
Counting away the seconds as my essence retires its purpose…
Reside in the hurt when, my island is corrupted by sirens
Singing songs of simple spells, succulent seductive to eye lids.
But words from a demon can never hold this poet back
I’ll plant stems that store water as my utopia overflows in the cracks…
This is a 5 Star Verse Man Inspirational!

Bronze

from the hanging gardens, we swear unearthly pardons
bumpin sound thru my harman kardons, dont be startin
with the monster, diabolic astrologic starry night prophet
gazin from the heavens rippin thru with vocal tension
ascention, in and out of 4th dimensions, apprehension
to keep it progressive with newer forms of aggression
receptive, detective paid for protection, armed experts

I take my cap off to you guys man this is some of the best stuff iv'e read in the temple for a while.