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Locust
06-05-2011, 03:42 PM
worked on it a lot, gimme some feed if you think its tight!! I will return all feed




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llBARlllCODEll
06-05-2011, 04:12 PM
what thread?

Locust
06-06-2011, 08:23 PM
most ppl here commented in it. can i get some feedback on this tho homie=

llBARlllCODEll
06-07-2011, 04:07 PM
not really my flavor but sounded like a good song for its proper audience. is that u on the beat?

SHEEPISH LORD OF CHAOS
06-07-2011, 05:16 PM
flow isn't bad, not my flavor but the right song, the right beat and proper audience its got a great place i did like the beat thou

Locust
06-08-2011, 05:53 PM
wtf^ lol

yeah thats me on the beat. thanks for the feedback guys much love!!

llBARlllCODEll
06-08-2011, 06:09 PM
this is A wu-tang board...what do u expect from fans of hardcore hip-hop?

no offence but it sounds like ur tryin to make musicc like Drake or somebody. i do like that beat though.

Locust
06-09-2011, 07:34 PM
yo nigga stop hating so much

llBARlllCODEll
06-09-2011, 07:40 PM
thats not hate cousin. thats just my opinion.

check two
06-09-2011, 08:01 PM
I'd like to give feedback

cutn' heads
06-09-2011, 08:11 PM
this is what it would sound like if rebecca black made rap music

http://media.tumblr.com/tumblr_liwashMf8U1qcsk3u.gif

llBARlllCODEll
06-09-2011, 08:16 PM
I'd like to give feedback

play the vid and tell him what u think

check two
06-09-2011, 08:31 PM
I'll do it my own way

cutn' heads
06-09-2011, 08:33 PM
beat is dope. reminds me of some old tribe shit

Locust
06-11-2011, 03:50 PM
thanks man!!

H.Notik
06-11-2011, 05:32 PM
flow is much better than the last joint you posted. no doubt...beat is crucial though.

keep goin'

JIGSAW45
06-13-2011, 11:09 AM
Beat is cool.........thats it.

Locust
06-13-2011, 11:24 AM
skampoe always hating, fat fuck with no life

llBARlllCODEll
06-13-2011, 11:34 AM
Beat is cool.........thats it.

skampoe always hating, fat fuck with no life


that wasnt Skampoe G. that was Jigsaw

THE MASON
06-13-2011, 02:23 PM
beat is dope, but its not so much ya flow man. it could be different, but ya cadence is off, sometimes you missing the drum hits. flow has improved but get that timing down

lyrics were aight too, swag isnt a word i care to hear in hip hop tho, shits played out.

check two
06-13-2011, 03:36 PM
Albino threadstarter,
You ask people their opinions and then you get all upset when some don't like your music?

INF
06-13-2011, 03:45 PM
naw you doin good man.Thats all truth about what kind of board this is.You gotta think about that before you drop a track here.They want that GRIMEY shit ALL THE TIME.These cats don't wanna hear songs.They wanna hear somebody straight BEAST the mic all HARDCORE and they wanna hear beats that are so HARD they gotta check their pockets after listening just to make sure they didn't just get jacked.lol


you are improving Locust. I remember when all you would talk about is dicking down broads and doing drugs. Your delivery here adds a lot of variety to what you are trying to do.

keep going dawg.1




p.s.

don't take critique so personal. you gotta expect the whole spectrum and not just what you wanna hear.peace

llBARlllCODEll
06-13-2011, 03:51 PM
good shit INF! thats what i been tryin to tell him this whole time. i just couldnt find the right words.

SKAMPOE
06-13-2011, 04:01 PM
naw you doin good man.Thats all truth about what kind of board this is.You gotta think about that before you drop a track here.They want that GRIMEY shit ALL THE TIME.These cats don't wanna hear songs.They wanna hear somebody straight BEAST the mic all HARDCORE and they wanna hear beats that are so HARD they gotta check their pockets after listening just to make sure they didn't just get jacked.lol


you are improving Locust. I remember when all you would talk about is dicking down broads and doing drugs. Your delivery here adds a lot of variety to what you are trying to do.

keep going dawg.1




p.s.

don't take critique so personal. you gotta expect the whole spectrum and not just what you wanna hear.peace
thats true somewhat, we make dif tracks for dif reasons n ears

building wit the children

i still love HER

Lost in translation

to name just a few of where we took it some where else type


but yea, that head knock neck breaker shit is the essence :b

JIGSAW45
06-13-2011, 07:58 PM
skampoe always hating, fat fuck with no life

hip hop is 4 erry1....but its NOT for erry1.

.....i aint diggin it,thats not hatin thats how i feel about it.to be honest ur flow is aiiiight but ur song stucture is unoriginal, played the fuck out and ur rhymes is wack....euro rapper spittin witta american accent talkin bout keepin it REAL lookin ass nigga,smfh. and why would i hate on someone i could body in 4bars....please

that wasnt Skampoe G. that was Jigsaw

good looks on makin it clear to this little girl who said that.

SKAMPOE
06-13-2011, 08:10 PM
werd

singodsuperior
06-13-2011, 08:29 PM
this is decent, the flow needs a bit more polishing, but the beat is ill tho.