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BLACK BART SIMPSON
07-03-2011, 11:51 PM
drop feed wrote it on the spot and came out better then expected been a long time since i dropped summin in here

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fuck carlito i do it the john way WAY not the cowboy i mean gacy
that means im tryna fuck whatevers below eighteen and over 80
butt rapin babys with my SOLDIERs in this THREAD like old navy
a nigga steal from me and i transform to the game in waist deep
he PO'd throw my piss tests at my PO's chapped lips
check me on your registered sex offenders list just did a bid
slightly below your uncle and right before ya fathers dick
SNUFF Films turned porno flicks STARRING me like several ASTERISKS
the baddest bitch im bashin em' just to make me feel masculine
scientific experiment gone WRONG now RIGHT the catalyst
suffer cannabilistic damages spawned by sadistic fantasies
scalp resemble damiens make my maids hang from banisters
my house amity split ya family up like DCF
double d's ill rape her chest now where the fat bitches At
i dont wanna fuck em ill skin em up like billy buff
mr GUMB my dicks on drugs addicted to bitches tongues
stab and punch a niggas lungs while takin chugs off fifths of Blood

just pick the gun ill point it up and prove to you im fatherless
no martyring the stories far from done the ending is marvelous
no souls to barter with satanism scattered my thought process
later murkin my consciousness these false prophets aint obvious
obnoxiousness noxious gases released from capsules-and
scars your lungs with carcinogens bi-products claim harmlessness
part of it cuz im monsterous but whats that to a group of them
fact i see an troop of them blame it on da ha-ha-hallucinogens
meet and greet with a few of them compare intestinal recipes
hunger got the best of me beatin off to da human centipede
"You like human hearts" FIX Me A PLATE
shoot a nigga in da grill tell em fix up his face
and im ill rollin like a big wheel peddaled by a cyborg infant
its not rape if she not awake to say no is it ?

BLACK BART SIMPSON
07-14-2011, 08:02 AM
bump

Father N Dangerous
07-14-2011, 09:35 AM
the baddest bitch im bashin em' just to make me feel masculine
scientific experiment gone WRONG now RIGHT the catalyst


was feeling that line alot...

just pick the gun ill point it up and prove to you im fatherless
no martyring the stories far from done the ending is marvelous

nice start here...


"You like human hearts" FIX Me A PLATE
shoot a nigga in da grill tell em fix up his face
and im ill rollin like a big wheel peddaled by a cyborg infant
its not rape if she not awake to say no is it

nice finish...

not bad at all brotha, not bad at all was feeling it for tha most part, good structure and sum lines that stooD out ot me... keep writing stay up one love two fingaz

Father N Dangerous
07-14-2011, 09:38 AM
the baddest bitch im bashin em' just to make me feel masculine
scientific experiment gone WRONG now RIGHT the catalyst

i like this line alot...

"You like human hearts" FIX Me A PLATE
shoot a nigga in da grill tell em fix up his face
and im ill rollin like a big wheel peddaled by a cyborg infant
its not rape if she not awake to say no is it ?

good strong finish...

good structure overall and pretty nice vocab. good 2 c ur stll around stay up one love two fingaz

BLACK BART SIMPSON
07-15-2011, 02:26 AM
the baddest bitch im bashin em' just to make me feel masculine
scientific experiment gone WRONG now RIGHT the catalyst


was feeling that line alot...

just pick the gun ill point it up and prove to you im fatherless
no martyring the stories far from done the ending is marvelous

nice start here...


"You like human hearts" FIX Me A PLATE
shoot a nigga in da grill tell em fix up his face
and im ill rollin like a big wheel peddaled by a cyborg infant
its not rape if she not awake to say no is it

nice finish...

not bad at all brotha, not bad at all was feeling it for tha most part, good structure and sum lines that stooD out ot me... keep writing stay up one love two fingaz

word thanks man yea i been mia from this scene since i've lately been writing shit in my notebooks and been tryna get my ish on wax.. but i figured id throw something in here to see how people feel.

BLACK BART SIMPSON
07-25-2011, 01:42 AM
Anymore feed ?

BLACK BART SIMPSON
08-05-2011, 02:20 AM
cun t uppercuts

TheBoarzHeadBoy
08-05-2011, 02:34 AM
Not bad plus it's nice to see another Odd Future Wolf Gang Kill Them All fan. It's like a Wu Tang Clan 21st century style. Your shit is dirty like stained drawers.