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SHEEPISH LORD OF CHAOS
07-19-2011, 12:37 AM
Gimme your thoughts, ideas and opinions
I want cha wisdom, I want cha eyes, I want cha smiles
I don't want cha lies, I want cha truth when ever I ask for it
I want your vision, not cha characterization or perception
I want your inception, your creationism, your wisdom
but I ain't never taking back the words I said...


Off wit cha head, I got them bars
that will give any emcee a 12 step program/
take out cha lights white cha eyes black
write cha lies and give e'm to the spies/
my twin snakes be truth being told
one is liquid and the other is solid
two side of the same coin/
give it a lecture, give it a lesson pressure bust pipes whatever you must write
give it a push beyond its boundaries/
now clowns get cha town cut off now resources are scarce
better prepare to bare ya soul enough to crush coal/
never leading this sheep to slaughter
chaotically you ain't messing with my theories
given your inert queries/
checking how I bury beats weighed out marrying streets
faded wait out cha sit in when i'm spitting/
you can quit cha swagger talk and get back on ripper walk
leave wit cha head down and i'll know instantly i'm reserving room in your mind state/


Gimme your thoughts, ideas and opinions
I want cha wisdom, I want cha eyes, I want cha smiles
I don't want cha lies, I want cha truth when ever I ask for it
I want your vision, not cha characterization or perception
I want your inception, your creationism, your wisdom
but I ain't never taking back the words I said...

tekunique
07-19-2011, 10:15 PM
it comes off half battle half thought provoking but to me doesnt reach its potential. im feelin the style as it aint all the way heavy on some poem shit nor straight punchline battle shit. would love to check more of you rockin this style in the future. peace. -tek

SHEEPISH LORD OF CHAOS
07-19-2011, 11:07 PM
it comes off half battle half thought provoking but to me doesnt reach its potential. im feelin the style as it aint all the way heavy on some poem shit nor straight punchline battle shit. would love to check more of you rockin this style in the future. peace. -tek

thanks tekunique, its kinda part of the style i developed around the corps and other forums and some have said its "lyrical chaos"

Father N Dangerous
07-20-2011, 12:54 AM
now clowns get cha town cut off now resources are scarce
better prepare to bare ya soul enough to crush coal/



fav line right there, i see you style has change a lil its not nearly as sloppy as it use to be its alot more organized and better structured, keep at it fam. pz one love two fingaz

J.T.S.
08-03-2011, 10:10 AM
not bad i suppose you were busting!