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TeknicelStylez
10-24-2005, 02:54 PM
1 verse each, I'll drop first if you want it's no problem.
3-0 Count = T.K.O
4-1 Count = K.O
First to 5 otherwise
The verse can be however long you want, write a novel if you want.

Iiight just tell me when you ready fam.

TeknicelStylez
10-24-2005, 03:34 PM
YO who the fuck?

Who the fuck..Is rockD?

Tryina play me off like I'm cocky//my rhymes intercept like shockey//
We playin for branches/I'm a stick up/eyes be where the glock be//
Sizin up your chances/you'll get chipped up/where it's gettin rocky//
Children tryina play in my park//with sizable hearts/get torn apart//
Now this new born wanna start//hit with darts of my adorned art//
This rhyme structure/is sure to touch-ya/like I'll gun butt-chya...

Fresh,Urinating on ya jeans/Crying,"TEK'S HATING, YOUR SO MEAN!"//
Emotionless/when I leave emcess motionless/why I'm The rap machine//
come and get your dishes cleaned//I love to hear bitches scream//
Now shut the fuck up and eat ya ice cream/like a nice teen//
Nigga I'm your worst dream/your just a deer caught in high beams//

I don't give votes to scape goats//you won't float I break boats//
Kid your a joke like gay folks//sit the fuck back and take notes//
its hard to learn staying in burbs//this is how real men battle//
I've been playing with words//since you were playing with rattles//
Leave whole hordes baffled on 'Eves'//tear out vocal chordes and 'Adams' apples//
You couldn't tackle with ease/half the emcees/with wich I grappled//
Straddle cats/that are 'twenty percent fact'/like the back of 'snapple caps'//
Cannibal devour you like an animal/powdered sugar/you don't taste real like Apple Jacks//

Your not in my vision/listen/as my mind and tongue operate in unision//
win by unananimous decision/Vocal incisions/creatin severe brain schysms//
Multiple Words Heard being fired//recieved keys travel through the wire//
Delivered punch lines like Richard Prior//Lemme end the verse This Kid Is Tired//

RockD
10-24-2005, 04:15 PM
iight i'll drop lata on i got class some time round 3 hrs from now i'll respond.

TeknicelStylez
10-25-2005, 01:27 AM
take your time..

RockD
10-25-2005, 12:45 PM
oops i forgot bout you so here i go

u aint really say shit so there aint much to respond
but nigga get devoured cause i'm the big fish in the pond
never been fond of yo antics and ways
it dont matta how many wins u got still u still fuckin gay
oaky thats said the name is Rock D dont forgett it
approved by FDA not they tryin to regrett it
i'm the pestiside the mr.hide, jackal, a menace to yo spectrum
nigga i'm the foot that goes deep in ya rectum
check out the specs son i'm broad limitless, ever expanding talent
yo shit was wack as diluted crak so lament yo commnet
i have been rattlin a FAMUAN* by heart never changed since day one
i have poison in my gums dont need a gun to kill this lame bum
i spitt the venom in a battle or keystyle even audio freestyle
nigga scince win 12 yo ass has been sessile
mean while i rise like the heat not to face defeat so bitch take a seat
come to the battlefield but yo charge is full retreat
u aint neat u net geek nor shocky u flop like Leek
we can battle 12 more times and i still got u beat
your a deciet i'm the tall tale a big feat u cant beat me
even if u had 20/20 and contancts u cant see me
Who is RockD? the muthafucka dat will put yo on blast
makin u turn diffrent color like u filled wit chloroplast
so put the dictionary down gimme that rusty crown u dont deserve top 3
u still aint shit but a lowrate mc
i dont rite novels i write stories of truth thats why u hate
thought u would battle me one more time dumb nigga there goes yo fate

*FAMU= Florida Agricultural and Mechanical University; Mascott= Rattle Snake aka- Rattlers

TeknicelStylez
10-25-2005, 03:00 PM
even if u had 20/20 and contancts u cant see me

Played.. I used that in these forums before, but I don't give a fuck, I know you aint sepcifically copywrite. I'm just pointing out that line is played.

Good Verse all around though.

Good luck.

TeknicelStylez
10-25-2005, 11:36 PM
votes?

Ballad Ballistik
10-25-2005, 11:56 PM
alright i read both ryhmes a few times...
i wanted to see rockd step up...
and i felt he tried but didnt come threw..
rockd was on point..
but didnt hold the joint..
teck when i read his shit
i felt i rode along with it..
rockd keep at it..
but teck has this..
sometimes you have to slow down
and make sure you bring it tight..
you were to hype and let it spilll.
but it was real..
i didnt like how teck popped off before and after the verses..
but i think he got this....
i vote teck...

Robert
10-25-2005, 11:58 PM
First off I'd just say that RockD has improved a lot, that verse was decent, just work on your structure, and multi's.

Tek on the other hand was far better, that verse was ill man, the multi's and flow was fuckin dope, the only thing i'd say is there could have been more punches but that was just ill man, respect
anyway,
Vote=Tek
nice battle peeps

TeknicelStylez
10-26-2005, 04:39 AM
Good looks for the votes peoples

2-0

RockD
10-26-2005, 08:45 AM
thanks for the coment n votes, i gotta give a shout out to $inista he really broke it down to me on how i messed this battle up lol. good battle tek so lets keep those votes comin. one more thing show me that line anywere on this forum besides mines gimme a link cause i dont believe you. :)

JCKILLA100
10-26-2005, 02:01 PM
i wud say tek coz da second paragraph was dope da best part of da vurse

TeknicelStylez
10-26-2005, 04:17 PM
^^unreasonable explanation 2-0...

Sinista didn't even vote......

Hold on lemme get the link.

Ghost In The 'Lac
10-26-2005, 04:41 PM
RockD got better flow in his words, T.S seems all disjointed

TeknicelStylez
10-26-2005, 05:02 PM
is that a vote....

BRASSKNUCKLED PAI MEI
10-26-2005, 07:14 PM
More Votes!

TeknicelStylez
10-27-2005, 03:26 AM
bumpin it.

RockD
10-27-2005, 12:30 PM
^^unreasonable explanation 2-0...

Sinista didn't even vote......

Hold on lemme get the link.
naw i finally understood wut u meant by multis $inista sent me a PM critic about me not usin em. VOTE NIGGAS!!!

TeknicelStylez
10-27-2005, 01:35 PM
Oh, lol and you was like

YOUR BEING AN ASSHOLE, it's basic shit mang, one syllable rhyme boring, multiple rhymes entertaining. Imagine if deck was like

I BOMB STUFF AND DO THINGS LIKE SOCRATES
THAN I PREDICT ALL TYPES OF PHILOSOPHIES
DETERMINE YOUR ILLEGITAMATE HYPOTHESIS
THAN IMA GO AND PLAY THE LOTTERY
I'M KNOWN TO COMMIT CRIMES ARMED ROBBERY....

you get the point

TeknicelStylez
10-28-2005, 02:44 AM
bump...

TeknicelStylez
10-28-2005, 05:28 PM
vote....

T-ribe
10-29-2005, 04:00 PM
Tek got this one he just came off way stronger from start to finish. RockD had some very nice lines but just not enough and he wasnt very consistent.

V=Tek

TeknicelStylez
10-29-2005, 05:18 PM
3-0 good battle.