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noel411
08-04-2011, 06:06 PM
I decided to have a go at writing some lyrics for a dance song and thought I'd post them up here to see what you guys think of them. Any feedback would be appreciated.

There'll be no bitchin' in my kitchen,
there'll be no bitchin' in my kitchen,
there'll be no, there'll be no, there'll be no,
there'll be no bitchin' in my kitchen,
there'll be no bitchin' in my kitchen,
there'll be no bitchin' in my kitchen,
there'll be no, there'll be no, there'll be no,
there'll be no bitchin' in my kitchen,
there'll be no bitchin' in my kitchen,
there'll be no bitchin' in my kitchen,
there'll be no, there'll be no, there'll be no,
there'll be no bitchin' in my kitchen,
there'll be no bitchin' in my kitchen,
there'll be no bitchin' in my kitchen,
there'll be no, there'll be no, there'll be no,
there'll be no bitchin' in my kitchen,
there'll be no bitchin' in my kitchen,
there'll be no bitchin' in my kitchen,
there'll be no, there'll be no, there'll be no,
there'll be no bitchin' in my kitchen,
there'll be no bitchin' in my kitchen,
there'll be no bitchin' in my kitchen,
there'll be no, there'll be no, there'll be no,
there'll be no bitchin' in my kitchen,
there'll be no bitchin' in my kitchen,
there'll be no bitchin' in my kitchen,
there'll be no, there'll be no, there'll be no,
there'll be no bitchin' in my kitchen,
there'll be no bitchin' in my kitchen,
there'll be no bitchin' in my kitchen,
there'll be no, there'll be no, there'll be no,
there'll be no bitchin' in my kitchen,
there'll be no bitchin' in my kitchen,
there'll be no bitchin' in my kitchen,
there'll be no, there'll be no, there'll be no,
there'll be no bitchin' in my kitchen,
there'll be no bitchin' in my kitchen,
there'll be no bitchin' in my kitchen,
there'll be no, there'll be no, there'll be no,
there'll be no bitchin' in my kitchen,
there'll be no bitchin' in my kitchen,
there'll be no bitchin' in my kitchen,
there'll be no, there'll be no, there'll be no,
there'll be no bitchin' in my kitchen,
there'll be no bitchin' in my kitchen,
there'll be no bitchin' in my kitchen,
there'll be no, there'll be no, there'll be no,
there'll be no bitchin' in my kitchen,
there'll be no bitchin' in my kitchen,
there'll be no bitchin' in my kitchen,
there'll be no, there'll be no, there'll be no,
there'll be no bitchin' in my kitchen,
there'll be no bitchin' in my kitchen,
there'll be no bitchin' in my kitchen,
there'll be no, there'll be no, there'll be no,
there'll be no bitchin' in my kitchen,
so stop snitchin'!

TheBoarzHeadBoy
08-05-2011, 01:42 AM
Can't go wrong with just tight complicated lyrics. This shit is masterfully insightful and shows a real progression from your earlier stuff. You've really grown as an artist, hopefully your fans don't feel like you're selling out the style that they first fell in love with in favor of a new aesthetic. It's like Kanye, he opened up his audience to new people but there is a marked change and some of the older fans feel alienated. You can't please everyone, you can only pleasure yourself.

ArcherPriest
08-05-2011, 07:46 AM
haha pure FIRE!

noel411
08-08-2011, 09:16 PM
Cheers guys. I appreciate the feedback. I'm keen to write a few more dance songs but I've been suffering from writer's block since I exhausted all my creative energy on this one.

sileNt.siN.
08-09-2011, 04:32 AM
This.

This is what real looks like.
- Spokenn.

FRiTz
08-10-2011, 08:00 AM
daaaaaaam

Tito_Para Enfrente
09-05-2011, 09:14 PM
crazy dude