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MaShPG
10-24-2005, 09:47 PM
I usually don't rap, but I'll give it a try. Don't step to this if you're established please, i'm a rookie. Fuck it, i'm bout to pop my battling cherry.

one verse each, first to 5 votes win. step up.

Ballad Ballistik
10-24-2005, 09:55 PM
im down drop first...im not too new but ive got a terrible record..
so lets go...

Ballad Ballistik
10-24-2005, 10:09 PM
you there....?

MaShPG
10-24-2005, 10:10 PM
You got a bad record, but you ain't really new?
well then fuck it, even this rookie can destroy you.
I understand you wanna pick on me to up your rep,
But i thought i said only if you're a rookie can ya step.
Whatever man, i'll still murder your phony ass.
You garbage son, and I'm about to take out the trash.
you lose all these battles cause you're lyrics have many flaws,
plus your bitch ass is swallowing more seamen than Jaws.
You're a faggot, and I don't mean like the bundle of sticks,
While you writing your rhyme, your mom's on her knees sucking our dicks.
That's right, all you do is listen to Wu-Tang.
But I actually know em, we and your moms having a gang bang.
I write wordplay, like a good game of scrabble;
the type of shit that'll make you piss yourself in a battle.
Step to this thread, and your petty career is done.
Like Nelly being torn apart by KRS-One.
I may not be good, but I'm better than Ballad.
When I'm done with you, I'll toss ya ass like a salad.
After, I knock you out, fuck it, buy me a beer.
And give me props for being the Rookie of the Year.

I told you I can't rap ^. Damn, I'm considering just deleting this shit...fuck it. Just don't laugh at me...

MaShPG
10-24-2005, 10:11 PM
chyea, sorry i'm late, had to go eat dinner.

Ballad Ballistik
10-24-2005, 10:41 PM
mash(pg) needs parental guidance
im x-rated and cant be silenced
sneak a peek and see my violence
you got alot of weak ass mom jokes
did she tell you the 1 ..when she choked..?
on my hot nuts and saved my gue
spit it out and dropped it in a test tube..
but you wouldnt a clue..on the birth of your crew...
dude you couldnt drop
if you were cole trickle with a hammer so stop..
im sorry man I know your new...
ill digest your style and drop you like doo-doo..
but whatever man who knew...
have you guessing in this game of clue..????
grab some popcorn for the interlude...
imma mysterious murder like tupac...
have you beatin like louima with ten cops...
mash couldnt handle my black top..
guess thats why hes a new kid on the block..
you couldnt stop me with blazin glocks.
learning the 36 chambers your styles left endangered
i kill names like deadly u.s rangers..
damn salad tosser ...got me all angered

MaShPG
10-24-2005, 10:43 PM
Votes Please

Ballad Ballistik
10-24-2005, 10:56 PM
nice battle ...ive been in your shoes and still am...

MaShPG
10-24-2005, 11:02 PM
yea good one, i feel i can only get better from here...

Robert
10-24-2005, 11:19 PM
Mashpg got this. The punches were better, just dont do homosexual punches, there lame.
On your wordplay and stucture it was pretty basic but still aight, just work on incorporating multi's and working on the flow of the verse (like bars and shit). Overall, you got this, nice work
VOTE=Mashpg
peace

Ballad Ballistik
10-24-2005, 11:24 PM
Mashpg got this. The punches were better, just dont do homosexual punches, there lame.
On your wordplay and stucture it was pretty basic but still aight, just work on incorporating multi's and working on the flow of the verse (like bars and shit). Overall, you got this, nice work
VOTE=Mashpg
peaceif you read what i wrote ..i mentioned mom jokes aint cool..
i came back and tried to go above the simple shit..and move on...

T-ribe
10-24-2005, 11:39 PM
Mashs' shit was pretty hype for a first tymer, I mean the word play was there, but you still need to develop a disinct delivery. Ballistic is usually on point with his shit, this one was a little under par for you homie. Still I'm gonna give it to Ballistic, because more of his punches held more weight, also Mash you murdered yourself by saying your a salad tosser. SOLIDV- BB

Ballad Ballistik
10-24-2005, 11:55 PM
1 to 1 ....!!

Longbongcilvaringz
10-25-2005, 01:14 AM
interesting battle, mashp's punches were nice and his flow wasnt bad at all, ballistik came back solidly but mash had some killer punches. "plus your bitch ass is swallowing more seamen than Jaws" - whether or not you like the homo disses that is a hot line, as i said better punches and a better verse.
vote=mash

TeknicelStylez
10-25-2005, 01:27 AM
Yea mash did have better structure punchlines and wordplay, that JAWS line was killer, I don't see what the problem is with calling someone a Fag, if it's insulting it's insulting na mean. BB your shit is getting better, but you need more structure, perhaps combine 2 lines together and form a bar. I'm all for compactness but in this case it's taking away from your flow. You steppin your game up though and your resiliance ceases to amaze me. GOOD SHIT BB.

Vote = Mash.

Nice noob battle.

Robert
10-25-2005, 03:52 AM
About the homosexual punches I just reckon they get over played, nah mean? Alright to have one or two original ones in ya verse but to dedicate too much can lead to the same punches been rerun in a slightly different format, and dont get me wrong ballad I saw what you were trying to do but for me you gotta improve the way you structure your verses..
peace

Ballad Ballistik
10-25-2005, 07:44 AM
3 to 1 ..ty for voting lets get a few more in...

WARPATH
10-25-2005, 10:50 AM
Vote ballad-

Mash was mashing on ballad in the beginning but then he says-

When I'm done with you, I'll toss ya ass like a salad.

dam what the fuck were you thinking?

mash(pg) needs parental guidance
im x-rated and cant be silenced
sneak a peek and see my violence
you got alot of weak ass mom jokes
did she tell you the 1 ..when she choked..?
on my hot nuts and saved my gue
spit it out and dropped it in a test tube..
but you wouldnt a clue..on the birth of you crew...

^^thought these lines were pretty dope- sneak a peek and see ballad choking mash's mom's down with his dick in her esophogus- then spittin sperm back up in a test tube- then took that shit to the lab to make your homies- sickly little test tube babies- ballad's getting better in his writing

Ballad Ballistik
10-25-2005, 05:52 PM
3-2 thanks charge and tek and j.p for the constructive criticism

$inista
10-25-2005, 06:10 PM
About the homosexual punches I just reckon they get over played, nah mean? Alright to have one or two original ones in ya verse but to dedicate too much can lead to the same punches been rerun in a slightly different format, and dont get me wrong ballad I saw what you were trying to do but for me you gotta improve the way you structure your verses..
peace
^you got to watch with this dude he gets a little sensetive cuase he's a flaming homo

I vote BB beter flow & punches & His structure was fine however improvement is something you should always try to do

"you got alot of weak ass mom jokes
did she tell you the 1 ..when she choked..?" LOL

Ballad Ballistik
10-25-2005, 06:12 PM
3-3 thanks for taking the time to vote...!

MaShPG
10-25-2005, 07:02 PM
3-3, you wanna go another round to settle it?

oDoUoSoKo
10-25-2005, 07:15 PM
ill save u the truble, bb, nice 1 man,v=bb

mash had nica ass punchlines, but im getting tired of people completely relying on punchlines to rap. good battle

MaShPG
10-25-2005, 07:21 PM
ok, whatever, you win. i don't use punchlines to rap, i use em to battle. I think battles are better with punchlines instead of metaphors and all that shit, just my opinion. I wish you woulda let us do another round, but whatever. Good match.

Ballad Ballistik
10-25-2005, 07:56 PM
alright 4-3 dont bow out now..
i dont want to win by bow out..
will that officially count.. a bow out ?
maybe i should take it and run !:looking:
haha

MaShPG
10-25-2005, 08:12 PM
oops, forgot it was to five. MORE VOTES PLEASE

Ballad Ballistik
10-25-2005, 08:22 PM
cool

oDoUoSoKo
10-25-2005, 09:07 PM
(voice of someone else to make it seem as if its not me talking) umm my vote is for mash, nice battle dudes!!!, nah jus jerkin ya chains

MaShPG
10-25-2005, 09:18 PM
thanks man, but you ain't gotta fake vote for me. This shit was just a practice round for me so i could get some constructive criticism and take my shit back to the lab. Thanks to all who voted, although a couple more would help. Peace.

oDoUoSoKo
10-25-2005, 09:24 PM
nah i said it cuz ya needed 1 more so i made like i was someone else, so it could be over kwika

Ballad Ballistik
10-25-2005, 09:26 PM
naw i feel ya man thats how you got to look at it....
you got the right attitude for sure...
i think you got something worth working at..
if its any help you seen tek and jamel p.o view of mines..
i aint mad at them for it ..i actually appreciate it..
but dont think you have to fit the desription of someone elses idea of a battler
bring your game up as you see fit..:i
just how i see it.

tha god concept
10-25-2005, 09:46 PM
mash had sum nyce lines for a rookie but over all BB took this one

vote BB

id like 2 see a rematch 2 cause i no BB can even come stronger than what he did.......and i wanna c if mash got anymore rhymes or if that was it for him

Ballad Ballistik
10-25-2005, 09:51 PM
o damn my first win...

Ballad Ballistik
10-26-2005, 05:12 PM
ill rematch no problem just get back at me mashpg

MaShPG
10-26-2005, 05:32 PM
g, i'm down for a rematch, although i understand if you're not since their is no point in it for you...i can go tommorow, today is busy for me. whatever, it's all open.

Ballad Ballistik
10-26-2005, 05:51 PM
post in the last enemy thread when you ready..