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Ian Dejean
06-20-2005, 05:46 AM
I just wrote this on the spot, on some run mentality shit, knamean, some off the top of the dome shit

I put it on yall dusty ass niggas, tryna jump work
but yo we movin on, jump off mentality,
let the pump off, push ya weight off the balance beam
and get ya steez up, Pablo Escaborro re-up
the next man of tommorow, the kid is movin
play ya position, flippin crates in the buildin
my whole team set mean-bred, mutha-fuckin jail killers
you want somethin? then we kick it bitch
gimme a minute kid, keep playin the back
or get ya wig split, this ain't no try outs
show you the lifestyle, this ain't no colgate
but we still catch white vowels, nigga hold weight
cut it four ways, pass it off, take the backdoor, blast yall
run with the budget through the door
get to the car, backalley crackfiends
demonstrate how they light it up
but never sweat the fed cars, minus the blood
out of breath, no Luthor, the style is Lex
from here to little italy, kiddo's snitchin me
the black man, behold the future, we talk murder
like brushin teeth with a killers toothpaste
and we in the hood like money in silver suitcases
we probably all blood brothers, thugs hustlers
knuckle up, a couple of bucks and its the same shit, muthafucka what

gimme yall thoughts on this

06-20-2005, 06:38 AM
Yah that was explict, and how you combined the rhymes!!!!!!!!!!!! Though it sounded as if you were busting? Nice flow disorganized but organized, we notice most of this type of lyrics here. But the way you put the context accross was well placed. Like to see more of you verses.


Definitive X
06-20-2005, 12:10 PM
Definitely tight, sounded like a cosmopolitan mix of AZ, Nas, and I even saw a little Ghost at the beginning...definitely tight, street rhymes...you told a story, explained it (albeit profanely), and pulled it off...SHIT! That was nice, fam...keep it up...peace.

Ian Dejean
06-21-2005, 07:07 AM
thanks fam, keep yall thoughts coming

06-21-2005, 01:09 PM
Yo, good shit, thanx for letting me peep this. I like the story telling concept you gave. It's ill yo, keep it up.


Ian Dejean
07-02-2005, 04:57 PM
dont sleep

07-02-2005, 05:04 PM
decent verse in reguards of flow....alota shit u mentioned already bin sed....if youo sayin it you gotta say it betta then who eva sayin it best.....

Basically i think you can convey tha streets betta den that......


hulla at me for a kollab...


07-02-2005, 05:26 PM
my honest thoughts: it barely rhymed at all... and therefore, i couldn't sit through it's entirety... work on it...



Stringer Bell
07-05-2005, 01:22 AM
Wack, sorry.