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GuardianOne
06-20-2005, 11:16 AM
"One can not try and copy anothers attitude, it is that ways come together and intrude, one is of their own, and need not bother for some appear to, but really would be trying to know you, yes no matters that can be solved in mind, what has been tried was seen far beyond, now they plead for companionship, why it did not work, only disturbed most of their cycles, with it all within that one life, yet lived within time, though could alter others but cannot solve oneself, a shame as we depart for the next expedition, no one is to spoil it, as the weather changes, many claim they can bring change, how that is strange".

cd
06-20-2005, 11:24 AM
I've always liked your work, good to see you back. You definately have your own style. Keep up the good work

Definitive X
06-20-2005, 12:12 PM
Dope, better than the "Those After" rhyme...I liked the theme, and you ran with it well...keep writing, and find your niche, cuz you're definitely on your way there...

Dae Ja Nae
06-22-2005, 10:54 AM
"One can not try and copy anothers attitude, it is that ways come together and intrude, one is of their own, and need not bother for some appear to, but really would be trying to know you, yes no matters that can be solved in mind, what has been tried was seen far beyond, now they plead for companionship, why it did not work, only disturbed most of their cycles, with it all within that one life, yet lived within time, though could alter others but cannot solve oneself, a shame as we depart for the next expedition, no one is to spoil it, as the weather changes, many claim they can bring change, how that is strange".
It's words like this that make one do some inner reflecting. We all try so hard to outwardly display perfection, that we lose the essence of who we really are to begin with.

Peace G-One