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Young Gun
05-26-2012, 09:46 AM
Lost in a whirlwind, watching the world spin/
Gossip and girlfriends, topics of world trends/
All in a monitor, sit, look on and observe/
Once you click it on, solves all problems emerged/
Ainít gotta concern, sit idly by/
Lookin back at the window staring out at the sky/
Bitterly criticize, individuals lives/
Taught to live with no ties under a hidden disguise/
Repetition sets the system, weíre given a choice/
Spread our wisdom but none listen due to minimal voice/
Itís ironic, needing thousands to support on a beat/
The challenge is most are self absorbed in the street/
Canít form words to speak, interactions disabled/
A personís unique when attached with a cable/
Latched in the fatal predicaments arising/
Dreams canít grow, then the dream stays inside/
And itís goneÖ

ArcherPriest
05-27-2012, 10:49 AM
nice flow

Prophet Picasso
05-27-2012, 11:01 AM
This is well done, Gun. Ann Arbor stand up!

Young Gun
05-29-2012, 11:12 PM
This is well done, Gun. Ann Arbor stand up!

nice flow

Thanks y'all. I appreciate the props. Myself, plus the rest of the collective I'm apart of work hard to keep A2 on the map.