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UNCLE RUCKUS
07-05-2012, 05:46 PM
Peace
http://soundcloud.com/redd-rebel/bloodlust

mrstraightfire
07-05-2012, 06:02 PM
Sup Homie,

First, the beat : I wasn't to excited by the beat itself. I have no problem against repetitiveness, but the beat just didn't move me. Is it an original beat?

Now for your verse, the lyrics were good, but I think you gotta pace yourself with the delivery, because a few time you were offbeat.

Overall, it's okay, the lyrics are there, you just gotta try to balance your delivery a bit more. Also, the hook was simple but cool.

Could you give me some feedback on my track? http://www.wutang-corp.com/forum/showthread.php?t=117186

noisebeat
07-05-2012, 06:11 PM
Groovy track, i like your flow.

UNCLE RUCKUS
07-05-2012, 07:55 PM
thanks bros

THE MASON
07-05-2012, 09:00 PM
the beat almost sounded like a Lucid beat imo, i dig it.

the lyrics was dope, as said tho, the timing was a bit off, you could rock that flow over this beat, but you gotta make sure your still hittin on those drums, especially on the down beat.

UNCLE RUCKUS
07-06-2012, 09:41 AM
yeah the beat is from one of the guys on here (not Lucid, I will get back 2 you on that) I hear you guys thanks for the feedback
Peace

THE MASON
07-06-2012, 11:20 AM
its gotta be a Lucid beat

he goes by Mumm Ra on here

UNCLE RUCKUS
07-09-2012, 02:34 AM
its gotta be a Lucid beat

he goes by Mumm Ra on here

I dont think it was him actually