View Full Version : a little something

07-11-2012, 08:06 PM

just having fun trying out new sounds. enjoy.

07-11-2012, 09:54 PM
this is chill man

07-12-2012, 02:02 PM
Dope verses. The Kick & Snare need some more OOMPH!!

*rep for the mentals*

food for thought
07-12-2012, 02:36 PM
good shit sosa

voice and flow reminds me of Von Pea

07-12-2012, 07:55 PM
thanks ruckus and alfa

and props food, i checked out some von pea, hes good. that chill shit is up my alley.

07-12-2012, 08:13 PM
dope dope dope

07-13-2012, 12:47 PM
shit is cool ill flow

07-13-2012, 05:44 PM
that beat needed drums and it woulda be dope.

you use a laptop mic? cause it wasnt the best recording, so it was hard to take it all in. but the laid back flow was pretty dope.

how long you spittin for?

07-13-2012, 06:07 PM
lol laptop mic would have been even worse, just using basic mic with a preamp. does the job for now.

i been writin raps for a year or so, but i haven't really been practising or recording my rapping much, i'm trying to do that more often so that its easier to just get on the mic and lay shit down. im pretty lazy but its definitely fun when im in the mood for it.

07-13-2012, 06:12 PM
word, well thats good start then. better then a laptop mic lol

just gotta work up the confidence to spit to the max. trust, if you ask people around here i was the same way at first.

the more you work on it the more youll understand breathe control and using your gut muscles to help push you thru the verse. even if its chilled out you got have the confidence in the voice.

keep workin at it man

07-13-2012, 07:25 PM

07-14-2012, 04:47 PM
pretty nice man I didnt mind the lack of drums but it would of been nice if some heavy hitting drums came in half way thru to build momentum rather than the couple of 808's at the end. flow and writtens was pretty good but I hear what bronze is saying a little more confidence and a better recording would of benifited props tho and keep it up you obviously have some skills

07-17-2012, 01:28 PM
this wouldve had the potential of being a better track if it had some drums but I personally think you did a good job without it. peace

07-17-2012, 06:47 PM
i don't know about the drums, yeah i coulda put some in but to me it just felt like that was what it was.

i definitely appreciate the feedback, i repped whoever it let me. made like 10 beats (with drums lol) this week. i'm working all next week but i'll try and use the advice for something after that.