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Redskull
11-03-2005, 08:07 PM
you drop first 16 bars 2 rounds 5 votes

oDoUoSoKo
11-04-2005, 04:42 PM
rappin it crazy, beatin u easy like smackin a baby
actin like u hardcore cuz ermac on ur avy
i dont think this kid is anything remotely close to urban
if u was really ermac u wouldnt be recievin this hurtin
breath in cuz zeed's in the place and ur career's briefer than case
now ur life is based on seeds in ur face
so take heed, cuz my warinig is all ull recieve
u think u good ill blow ya mind out before the thought is concieved
its good ur dawn cuz u gon need to wake up at the crack of it
to rap wit this kid, cut ya head off and carve my name out on the back of it
rap wit ridikulus flow, convert nickles to gold
tear ya chest up, rip out ya heart wit the sickle u hold
u challenge ya own crew member, wasnt to smart of a move
ill tear u apart dude, make u a part of my food
i roll thru like herbs and paper, there aint no person greater
is there a doctor in the house for this doctor impersonator?

oDoUoSoKo
11-04-2005, 05:18 PM
im sorry for the girl line i didn mean it, go all out in ur verse

oDoUoSoKo
11-04-2005, 05:43 PM
yo dawn i dont think im doin a second verse kuz if u got mad at the girl line, u shouldnt be battlin, battlin is all about goin wild, which is besides the point, I DIDNT KNOW U HAD A FUCKING GIRLFRIEND WHEN I WROTE THE FUCKING LINE, I DIDNT MEAN ANY DISRESPECT TO UR NEW GIRLFRIEND SO RELAX, if u dont understand what im sayin to u then im sorry

i jus wrote the line as a personal (major part of battling) since I DIDNT KNOW U HAD A GIRLFIREND when i wrote the line, so drop ur verse and get it over with.

still peace,

Redskull
11-06-2005, 02:38 PM
i dont know wat u been rappin bout latelly,
cause we both know that i could be slappin ur baby,
but wouldn't be slappin ur lady,
cause i wouldn't like it if u talked about mine hatefully,
talkin about me impersonating a doctor,
me impersonating gets me all the hallas,
talk about ermac as my avy,
but ermacs the one that got u goin crazy,
lets not get into spawn as ur avy,
and thats the last time i hear u talkin bout my baby,
i'll punch a hole in ur face forfor tryn to sound like mase,
nigga at least i was not the one giving head to an ace,
talk bout doc like u is somebody zeedy,
hay i got a question mans do u see deez,
nutz in ur mouth now thats true,
by the end of this battle u aint gonna wanna battle me in the booth.

oDoUoSoKo
11-06-2005, 04:50 PM
not bad

Redskull
11-06-2005, 05:06 PM
wat up my nigga

Redskull
11-06-2005, 05:08 PM
yo dusk im gonna battle bb

cap
11-06-2005, 05:21 PM
Wow Very Nice Battle
But I Have To Give The Slight Edge To Dusk
Nice Multi's
Both Were Dope Though

Vote =dusk

Redskull
11-06-2005, 05:39 PM
iight

Redskull
11-06-2005, 05:40 PM
thanks for the compliement

Eddy
11-06-2005, 06:23 PM
yo dawn u like the name change?

oDoUoSoKo
11-06-2005, 06:29 PM
yo man im werkin tomoro cuz tuesday i cant, so that probably applies to u 2

Redskull
11-06-2005, 06:38 PM
yea

Redskull
11-06-2005, 06:39 PM
i made a thread call bring the pain and its hot

oDoUoSoKo
11-06-2005, 06:47 PM
yo apokalips changed his name son, borykua

Eddy
11-07-2005, 08:26 PM
g zuss, who the hell are u, can u pick 1 who u thought sucked less?

BRASSKNUCKLED PAI MEI
04-15-2006, 06:23 PM
This is no proof VOTES NEEDED

oDoUoSoKo
04-18-2006, 09:48 PM
plz vote

oDoUoSoKo
04-19-2006, 03:46 PM
guidelines

J-Man
04-20-2006, 11:05 AM
yo that guy earlier saying y'all suck i disagree hes probs jelous n ill have to say dat dusk had the upper hand in the battle

Vote = Dusk

USE THE GUIDELINES PLZ - bigben

Classic
04-20-2006, 11:19 AM
rappin it crazy, beatin u easy like smackin a baby
actin like u hardcore cuz ermac on ur avy
(Good opener.)
i dont think this kid is anything remotely close to urban
if u was really ermac u wouldnt be recievin this hurtin
(Good punch.)
breath in cuz zeed's in the place and ur career's briefer than case
now ur life is based on seeds in ur face
(Decent punch.)
so take heed, cuz my warinig is all ull recieve
u think u good ill blow ya mind out before the thought is concieved
(Good punch here. Nice wordplay.)
its good ur dawn cuz u gon need to wake up at the crack of it
to rap wit this kid, cut ya head off and carve my name out on the back of it
(Good punch here.)
rap wit ridikulus flow, convert nickles to gold
tear ya chest up, rip out ya heart wit the sickle u hold
(Decent punch, wasn't feelin' first line.)
u challenge ya own crew member, wasnt to smart of a move
ill tear u apart dude, make u a part of my food
(Good punch here.)
i roll thru like herbs and paper, there aint no person greater
is there a doctor in the house for this doctor impersonator?
(Not too good of a closer. Wasn't feelin' first line. )



i dont know wat u been rappin bout latelly,
cause we both know that i could be slappin ur baby,
(You feed here. Wasn't really feelin' it. In text battles, feedin' and flippin' really aren't impressive to me.)
but wouldn't be slappin ur lady,
cause i wouldn't like it if u talked about mine hatefully,
(....It's the 'BATTLEFIELD' for a reason.)
talkin about me impersonating a doctor,
me impersonating gets me all the hallas,
(Feedin', and talk of yourself.)
talk about ermac as my avy,
but ermacs the one that got u goin crazy,
(Feed again. Not to good of a punch.)
lets not get into spawn as ur avy,
and thats the last time i hear u talkin bout my baby,
(Not too good of a punch.)
i'll punch a hole in ur face forfor tryn to sound like mase,
nigga at least i was not the one giving head to an ace,
(Good punch ere.)
talk bout doc like u is somebody zeedy,
hay i got a question mans do u see deez,
(Half-decent.)
nutz in ur mouth now thats true,
by the end of this battle u aint gonna wanna battle me in the booth.
(Not a good closer. True and Booth don't rhyme. Maybe should've tried "Truth" and "Booth".)

My vote goes for Dusk.
Dusk was more consistent, some minor flaws, and even some wordplay in there.
Red, just cause your opponent throws a personal into the battle doesn't mean you should actually take it personal. Respondin to it like that on your verse really spoils it man.
Overall, could've seen a better verse on Red's side.
I liked it.
Keep it up, make your battles "Classic".

oDoUoSoKo
04-22-2006, 12:37 PM
vote

oDoUoSoKo
05-02-2006, 05:55 PM
pleez motherfucking vote

Luther Large
05-02-2006, 06:10 PM
vote=doclocashoxin free

boat cars

oDoUoSoKo
05-02-2006, 06:28 PM
damn this site is so ass now

Luther Large
05-02-2006, 06:34 PM
damn this site is so ass now

especially the battlefield

oDoUoSoKo
05-07-2006, 06:27 PM
vote

Luther Large
05-08-2006, 06:29 PM
multi's=tie
punches=dusk
vocab=dusk
creativity=dusk
wordplay=dusk


no i aint hatin on u redskull ur's wasnt that bad i just thot dusk was better in this 1 this battle wasnt very good but dusk took it


peace....

Sirkulayshun
05-08-2006, 11:52 PM
punches-dusk
vocab-dusk
wordplay-dusk
flow-dusk

good battle tho...redskull did good but my vote goes to dusk

Thai Gear
05-11-2006, 08:44 PM
My votes for dusk
The last line did it

Dr.Teeth
05-11-2006, 09:06 PM
unfortunatley u cant vote horny hog!!

Thai Gear
05-12-2006, 07:51 PM
flow= Doc_death
wordplay=Dusk
creativity=Dusk
vocabulary=Dusk
punches= Doc_death

oDoUoSoKo
05-12-2006, 08:07 PM
sup hog, when u battlin?

Fuck
05-16-2006, 06:57 PM
flow-dusk
wrdply-dusk
vcb-dusk
crtvty-tie
pnchs-dusk

sorry red, dusk kinda destroyed u g