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GuardianOne
06-21-2005, 11:10 AM
"Humanity must stand and look before, what has to come, its simply a tour, of the vast unknown, how death makes many mourn, laughter for the child is gone, and elements control their surroundings, ones venture into unmarked regions, suspected with exploring adventures, and how all just watch, yes its this earth, the calls grow louder, we cannot understand it , but the forces are at hand, leaning for support to balance, they need not be disturbed, hadn't expected it, but its only a human habit thats weared off, so towards the jungle".

SHEEPISH LORD OF CHAOS
06-21-2005, 01:45 PM
Intresting Feelin The Content & Subject Matter

Dae Ja Nae
06-22-2005, 10:36 AM
"Humanity must stand and look before, what has to come, its simply a tour, of the vast unknown, how death makes many mourn, laughter for the child is gone, and elements control their surroundings, ones venture into unmarked regions, suspected with exploring adventures, and how all just watch, yes its this earth, the calls grow louder, we cannot understand it , but the forces are at hand, leaning for support to balance, they need not be disturbed, hadn't expected it, but its only a human habit thats weared off, so towards the jungle".
I love the way your writing challenges the mind to go deeper, always shining light on things that go unnoticed by most.

Peace