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Visionz
11-07-2005, 03:44 PM
Props to both emcees for getting in the quick responses. I felt like ya both brought ya A-game to the court, and it's a real fitting battle to set this mothafucka off in round 2. Here it is yall' Leeeeeets Get Reeeeedddyyyyyy to Rummmmbbble...two emcees both hailing from the land of legal weed, from Denver all the way to Amsterdam, two heavyweights battlin it out in a duel to the death, in a blind man's round of heated competition, here it is yall'. and btw only official judges will decide the battles but please feel free to leave yall's feedback even ur not directly involved. I'm sure both mc's are still interested in what you got to say.



Charging Soldier......

Got's your twenty kid what you gonna do?
No man can stand against the deadly hands of Shang Chi Master of kung- fu
With savage fists of fury too quick and blury to see through-
Jap slapped barn becuase punchin' women won't be cool-
When I get hold of this lady i'm gonna PUNISHER like Frank Castle
titty twist barns nipples full circle like her tassels
i'm an ass-hole fartin' in your mouth with no manners
leaving the after taste of shitty grammar
Smashing barnboy like my name was Bruce Banner-
I'm Incredible- this kids a dutch brownie- Highly edible
it's Got my mind juiced like Xavier-
call up one of your ex-men to be your savior
see kid your still green, while emcee's I B gobblin
I'm so mean like Annie Wilkes I'll leave you Hobblin
a Ghost Writer weaving rhymes like a spider--man my styles sticky
lettin' peeps know your my bitch with a big hickey
they call you barn but i'm gonna call you Nikki
smoke'n this kid like i'm a hippy - fuck this shit i'm through playing
I set you up for this lyrical ass slaying-
a super hero gang bang and you've been Iron Fisted
you got a histirectomy while your clit was twisted-
you've been raped
for god's sake- somebody hand this dutch bitch a smoke and pancake- cuz my rhymes reighn Marvelous!
C.S. Master of Kung Fu taking Charge of this.........



B.a.r.n.

yo, i rock jeans, blow hot steam, sick rhyme schemes
fuck you up like soldiers charging in terrorist bomb scenes
fuck eric, im the emcee thats not seen
army boy got dreams, theyre obscene
charging cocks, and being fucked, by a whole swat team
youd make a fine charging cock machine
id make a better flag cause i stay on top of things
charging soldier is a whack emcee
something i could never be
thats like growing dreadlocks when on chemotherapy
then theoretically, pen and paper is a better recipe
alphabetically, im coming after u, like the letter v
im make it harder for this whack emcee, thats my specialty
you better be, trying to rap ahead of me,
cause im sick in the head, could fuck you up with mental telepathy
expect nothing less of me, this top pedigree
rhyme assasin, blasting, with syllable weaponry
i rotate, and dislocate your spine if we spar
i battle you, rattle you if youre trying to be hard
im dutch motherfucker, that means im rhyming abroad
rhyme is black jack an b.a.R.n is like a primary card
you secondary, thats why soldiers gotta fight with a squad
but genetically charging soldier is designed to be flawed
yesterday i spit game at his dame and she paused
to let me see a thick frame and outline it with drawers
you think this is your chance and this battle is finally yours
but see im deadlier than having cyanide in your pores
slowly yet certain you got ripped to bits, my dynasty tours
the only one that could kick doper multirhyme would be god

BRASSKNUCKLED PAI MEI
11-07-2005, 04:21 PM
hmmmmmm........let me re read this and I'll drop my well explained vote

444trumpets
11-07-2005, 04:52 PM
barn coming wit funny shit
charge ripped man its a hard one vote charging soldier
barn got shills tho

RockD
11-07-2005, 07:57 PM
Fya blap blap both mcees came with the heat
danm this was hard b.a.r.n was tight all ways thru
but CSwas murda all way thru

Vote = CS

danm now i dont feel as bad by loosin to B.a.r.n ill mcee but CS got this one.

Eddy
11-07-2005, 08:21 PM
omg damn mite have o go wit barn,even tho it was so close

v=barn

Dae Ja Nae
11-07-2005, 09:00 PM
Charging Soldier......

Got's your twenty kid what you gonna do?
No man can stand against the deadly hands of Shang Chi Master of kung- fu
With savage fists of fury too quick and blury to see through-
Jap slapped barn becuase punchin' women won't be cool- ... hahaaa ... nice
When I get hold of this lady i'm gonna PUNISHER like Frank Castle
titty twist barns nipples full circle like her tassels
i'm an ass-hole fartin' in your mouth with no manners
leaving the after taste of shitty grammar
Smashing barnboy like my name was Bruce Banner-
I'm Incredible- this kids a dutch brownie- Highly edible
it's Got my mind juiced like Xavier-
call up one of your ex-men to be your savior
see kid your still green, while emcee's I B gobblin
I'm so mean like Annie Wilkes I'll leave you Hobblin
a Ghost Writer weaving rhymes like a spider--man my styles sticky
lettin' peeps know your my bitch with a big hickey
they call you barn but i'm gonna call you Nikki
smoke'n this kid like i'm a hippy - fuck this shit i'm through playing
I set you up for this lyrical ass slaying-
a super hero gang bang and you've been Iron Fisted
you got a histirectomy while your clit was twisted-
you've been raped
for god's sake- somebody hand this dutch bitch a smoke and pancake- cuz my rhymes reighn Marvelous!
C.S. Master of Kung Fu taking Charge of this.........



B.a.r.n.

yo, i rock jeans, blow hot steam, sick rhyme schemes
fuck you up like soldiers charging in terrorist bomb scenes... lol ... owned
fuck eric, im the emcee thats not seen ... ;)
army boy got dreams, theyre obscene
charging cocks, and being fucked, by a whole swat team
youd make a fine charging cock machine
id make a better flag cause i stay on top of things
charging soldier is a whack emcee
something i could never be
thats like growing dreadlocks when on chemotherapy
then theoretically, pen and paper is a better recipe
alphabetically, im coming after u, like the letter v
im make it harder for this whack emcee, thats my specialty
you better be, trying to rap ahead of me,
cause im sick in the head, could fuck you up with mental telepathy
expect nothing less of me, this top pedigree
rhyme assasin, blasting, with syllable weaponry
i rotate, and dislocate your spine if we spar
i battle you, rattle you if youre trying to be hard
im dutch motherfucker, that means im rhyming abroad
rhyme is black jack an b.a.R.n is like a primary card
you secondary, thats why soldiers gotta fight with a squad
but genetically charging soldier is designed to be flawed
yesterday i spit game at his dame and she paused
to let me see a thick frame and outline it with drawers
you think this is your chance and this battle is finally yours
but see im deadlier than having cyanide in your pores
slowly yet certain you got ripped to bits, my dynasty tours
the only one that could kick doper multirhyme would be god




CS came with a more solid verse ... the second half alone fucked B.a.r.n.'s up ... he held it down with both, his word play and punches!!!

Props to you both, but my vote goes to ...

CS

Peace

Ballad Ballistik
11-07-2005, 09:31 PM
Got's your twenty kid what you gonna do?
No man can stand against the deadly hands of Shang Chi Master of kung- fu
alright opener

With savage fists of fury too quick and blury to see through-
Jap slapped barn becuase punchin' women won't be cool-
if they were so quick you could see through them

When I get hold of this lady i'm gonna PUNISHER like Frank Castle
titty twist barns nipples full circle like her tassels
nice line

i'm an ass-hole fartin' in your mouth with no manners
leaving the after taste of shitty grammar
not a bad line but not of my liking

Smashing barnboy like my name was Bruce Banner-
I'm Incredible- this kids a dutch brownie- Highly edible
started nice but what is a dutch brownie

it's Got my mind juiced like Xavier-
call up one of your ex-men to be your savior
oxymoron ? ex-men dont exist so does xavier

see kid your still green, while emcee's I B gobblin
I'm so mean like Annie Wilkes I'll leave you Hobblin
nice reference to annie kathy bates stuff

a Ghost Writer weaving rhymes like a spider--man my styles sticky
lettin' peeps know your my bitch with a big hickey
well dude given dude hickeys is gay

they call you barn but i'm gonna call you Nikki
smoke'n this kid like i'm a hippy - fuck this shit i'm through playing
I set you up for this lyrical ass slaying-
ok
a super hero gang bang and you've been Iron Fisted
you got a histirectomy while your clit was twisted-
nice jab
you've been raped
for god's sake- somebody hand this dutch bitch a smoke and pancake- cuz my rhymes reighn Marvelous!
finisher
C.S. Master of Kung Fu taking Charge of this.........



B.a.r.n.

yo, i rock jeans, blow hot steam, sick rhyme schemes
fuck you up like soldiers charging in terrorist bomb scenes
jeans steam bomb line killed it
fuck eric, im the emcee thats not seen
army boy got dreams, theyre obscene
charging cocks, and being fucked, by a whole swat team
youd make a fine charging cock machine
emcees want to be seen no ? the ho reference took awhile to get the charging cock machine

id make a better flag cause i stay on top of things
charging soldier is a whack emcee
something i could never be
nice punch

thats like growing dreadlocks when on chemotherapy
then theoretically, pen and paper is a better recipe
alphabetically, im coming after u, like the letter v
nice line still rocking the syllables of E

im make it harder for this whack emcee, thats my specialty
you better be, trying to rap ahead of me,
cause im sick in the head, could fuck you up with mental telepathy
nice foresight with the blind verse

expect nothing less of me, this top pedigree
rhyme assasin, blasting, with syllable weaponry
check mate still flowing

i rotate, and dislocate your spine if we spar
i battle you, rattle you if youre trying to be hard
im dutch motherfucker, that means im rhyming abroad
rhyme is black jack an b.a.R.n is like a primary card
still flowing ruff


you secondary, thats why soldiers gotta fight with a squad
but genetically charging soldier is designed to be flawed
yesterday i spit game at his dame and she paused
to let me see a thick frame and outline it with drawers
you think this is your chance and this battle is finally yours
but see im deadlier than having cyanide in your pores
slowly yet certain you got ripped to bits, my dynasty tours
flowing tuff should of spelt drawers differently like drawls


the only one that could kick doper multirhyme would be god
weak god didnt rhyme

but over all barn was just heavy handed in this
i have to give it to barn ...1 vote barn

ElusiveFugitive
11-07-2005, 09:34 PM
Charging Soldier......

Got's your twenty kid what you gonna do?
No man can stand against the deadly hands of Shang Chi Master of kung- fu
With savage fists of fury too quick and blury to see through-
Jap slapped barn becuase punchin' women won't be cool-
When I get hold of this lady i'm gonna PUNISHER like Frank Castle
titty twist barns nipples full circle like her tassels
i'm an ass-hole fartin' in your mouth with no manners
leaving the after taste of shitty grammar
Smashing barnboy like my name was Bruce Banner-
I'm Incredible- this kids a dutch brownie- Highly edible
it's Got my mind juiced like Xavier-
call up one of your ex-men to be your savior
see kid your still green, while emcee's I B gobblin
I'm so mean like Annie Wilkes I'll leave you Hobblin
a Ghost Writer weaving rhymes like a spider--man my styles sticky
lettin' peeps know your my bitch with a big hickey
they call you barn but i'm gonna call you Nikki
smoke'n this kid like i'm a hippy - fuck this shit i'm through playing
I set you up for this lyrical ass slaying-
a super hero gang bang and you've been Iron Fisted
you got a histirectomy while your clit was twisted-
you've been raped
for god's sake- somebody hand this dutch bitch a smoke and pancake- cuz my rhymes reighn Marvelous!
C.S. Master of Kung Fu taking Charge of this.........


Charging Soldier's got my vote (not that it counts, but still)
The rhyme scheme flowed real nice and punches hit plenty harder than BARN
love that pancake line lol

ONE LOVE

T-ribe
11-07-2005, 09:41 PM
Let me put my two pennies in.... C.S maintained a more solid flow with countless punches, that also converted into solid combos... B.a.R.n had some nice lines in but really not enough substance to win this one. Peace Gods....

V=Charge.n S SOLID.

b.a.R.n.
11-08-2005, 06:18 AM
thanks for all comments, keep m coming. peace

hollywoodrealty
11-08-2005, 07:30 AM
i think barn had the best 4 bar set when he wrote.....

thats like growing dreadlocks when on chemotherapy
then theoretically, pen and paper is a better recipe
alphabetically, im coming after u, like the letter v
im make it harder for this whack emcee, thats my specialty



but unfortuantly the battles wasnt about 4 lines, it was about 24 lines, and charging soldier held it down te whole time with balance, plus the occasonal really sick line. my favorite lines from soldier were the msot imprtant, his finish....


a super hero gang bang and you've been Iron Fisted
you got a histirectomy while your clit was twisted-
you've been raped
for god's sake- somebody hand this dutch bitch a smoke and pancake- cuz my rhymes reighn Marvelous!
C.S. Master of Kung Fu taking Charge of this.........


and with that in mind, i vote 4 charging soldier, but it was a good battle for sure, peace

Potent1
11-08-2005, 08:32 AM
GOOD SHYT b.a.r.n, mad props to both but you really stepped up your game.

TeknicelStylez
11-08-2005, 10:28 AM
Yea this was an ILL battle of many yet to come

b.a.R.n.
11-08-2005, 11:24 AM
thanks potent1, i must admit i did my fucking best on this verse, i think its my best yet, in english that is

BRASSKNUCKLED PAI MEI
11-08-2005, 11:55 AM
Charging Soldier......

Got's your twenty kid what you gonna do?
No man can stand against the deadly hands of Shang Chi Master of kung- fu
With savage fists of fury too quick and blury to see through-
Jap slapped barn becuase punchin' women won't be cool-
When I get hold of this lady i'm gonna PUNISHER like Frank Castle
titty twist barns nipples full circle like her tassels
i'm an ass-hole fartin' in your mouth with no manners
leaving the after taste of shitty grammar
Smashing barnboy like my name was Bruce Banner-
I'm Incredible- this kids a dutch brownie- Highly edible
it's Got my mind juiced like Xavier-
call up one of your ex-men to be your savior
see kid your still green, while emcee's I B gobblin
I'm so mean like Annie Wilkes I'll leave you Hobblin
a Ghost Writer weaving rhymes like a spider--man my styles sticky
lettin' peeps know your my bitch with a big hickey
they call you barn but i'm gonna call you Nikki
smoke'n this kid like i'm a hippy - fuck this shit i'm through playing
I set you up for this lyrical ass slaying-
a super hero gang bang and you've been Iron Fisted
you got a histirectomy while your clit was twisted-
you've been raped
for god's sake- somebody hand this dutch bitch a smoke and pancake- cuz my rhymes reighn Marvelous!
C.S. Master of Kung Fu taking Charge of this.........



B.a.r.n.

yo, i rock jeans, blow hot steam, sick rhyme schemes
fuck you up like soldiers charging in terrorist bomb scenes
fuck eric, im the emcee thats not seen
army boy got dreams, theyre obscene
charging cocks, and being fucked, by a whole swat team
youd make a fine charging cock machine
id make a better flag cause i stay on top of things
charging soldier is a whack emcee
something i could never be
thats like growing dreadlocks when on chemotherapy
then theoretically, pen and paper is a better recipe
alphabetically, im coming after u, like the letter v
im make it harder for this whack emcee, thats my specialty
you better be, trying to rap ahead of me,
cause im sick in the head, could fuck you up with mental telepathy
expect nothing less of me, this top pedigree
rhyme assasin, blasting, with syllable weaponry
i rotate, and dislocate your spine if we spar
i battle you, rattle you if youre trying to be hard
im dutch motherfucker, that means im rhyming abroad
rhyme is black jack an b.a.R.n is like a primary card
you secondary, thats why soldiers gotta fight with a squad
but genetically charging soldier is designed to be flawed
yesterday i spit game at his dame and she paused
to let me see a thick frame and outline it with drawers
you think this is your chance and this battle is finally yours
but see im deadlier than having cyanide in your pores
slowly yet certain you got ripped to bits, my dynasty tours
the only one that could kick doper multirhyme would be god

b.aR.n. you had a nice flow but it lacked punch


Soldier just kept delivering punch after punch...

Vote Soldier

Aqueous Moon
11-08-2005, 12:58 PM
Charging Soldier pummels PG poetry wit punches that punishes bitch ass floetry.

b.a.r.n staps a hell of a vest you one of the best and yo flow is nothing less.

Peace

$inista
11-09-2005, 01:06 AM
props to both emcees i had 2 read this sevral times & enjoyed both verses, i must say barn you really steped ya game up in this battle, i like 2 see cats improve
vote=CS
I have nothing bad to say 4 me it was pretty close but i give it 2 CS to he was more consistant and jabs tighter nice word play 2
barn ya verse was tight but you could have just tweaked it abit more like right here

"you better be, trying to rap ahead of me,
cause im sick in the head, could fuck you up with mental telepathy
expect nothing less of me"
& over here
i rotate, and dislocate your spine if we spar
i battle you, rattle you if youre trying to be hard
im dutch motherfucker, that means im rhyming abroad

this weakend ya verse I know you could of flip it better, these lines are wasted you didnt really say much, you need 2 keep gunning 4 da neck example:

"im make it harder for this whack emcee, thats my specialty
you better be, trying to rap ahead of me,
cause im sick in the head, could fuck you up with mental telepathy
expect nothing less of me, this top pedigree
rhyme assasin, blasting, with syllable weaponry
i rotate, and dislocate your spine if we spar
i battle you, rattle you if youre trying to be hard
im dutch motherfucker, that means im rhyming abroad"

compared to

im make it harder for this whack emcee, thats my specialty
your not better Be, trying to rap ahead of me but Im to
sick in the head mentally, fuck you up with powers that be telepathy
another emcee less of me, trying to add up this top pedigree
rhyme assasin, blasting, with syllable weaponry
i rotate like swords & decapitate your head when i spawn
i slither like snakes that rattle & battle hard, this be barn
da dutch motherfucker, that means im smokin this broad

overall a good verse but remember every bar counts.. straight cut thraot nucca

b.a.R.n.
11-09-2005, 08:18 AM
^
yo thanks $inista for the feedback. i see your point, really do, but in your 'version' i lose the multi's

spine if we spar
trying to be hard
rhyming abroad
primary card
fight with a squad
desinged to be flawed
etc...
multirhyme would be god

and this is where i thought i was rhyming at my best, nahmean...difficult. but i see what you mean tho and i appreciate the feed. CS's verse was ill and i can see the different styles, hes comin with more personal punches than me. respect to CS. peace

$inista
11-09-2005, 09:36 AM
I feel ya best was here

yo, i rock jeans, blow hot steam, sick rhyme schemes
fuck you up like soldiers charging in terrorist bomb scenes
fuck eric, im the emcee thats not seen
army boy got dreams, theyre obscene
charging cocks, and being fucked, by a whole swat team

& here

charging soldier is a whack emcee
something i could never be
thats like growing dreadlocks when on chemotherapy
then theoretically, pen and paper is a better recipe
alphabetically, im coming after u, like the letter v
im make it harder for this whack emcee, thats my specialty

good shit

Visionz
11-09-2005, 04:04 PM
alphabetically, im coming after u, like the letter v

I thought this line was fuckin dope, creative way of lookin at shit. props B.a.r.n. peace

TeknicelStylez
11-09-2005, 04:17 PM
Yea and he killed that by making it a multi and everything.

whatradio
11-09-2005, 09:00 PM
yoooooooo, ill fuckin battle!!!
both came strong, no bullshit
good metas, strong punches, wordplay superb.....
I love this shit.

tha god concept
11-10-2005, 08:48 PM
tyght battle yo

both emcees had nyce punches and werdplay...both came nyce

but i was feelin barns verse a little more....

he dropped a nyce piece rite there yo

vote = barn

Visionz
11-12-2005, 06:56 PM
Chargin Soldier movin on to the conference finals in an off the wall battle 4-2, B.a.r.n., although you're not movin on, I felt like you still came w/ a top notch verse and represented ur skills to the fullest. Thanks for throwin down for this one like ya did and props to C.S. for his verse as well. Verses like these is what this comp is all about, peace and respect to both emcees, as well as all the judges and those that posted ur feedback.1