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Habitat
02-25-2006, 03:53 PM
im callin out dusk, another quick 4 bar battle for fun,

4 bars... (8 lines) k dusk? haha

and the votes, need to be judged by all of the following:

-multies/rhymescheme
-mettas/punches
-personals
-vocab/creativity (no basic and played out lines)

with explanation for each

this is so only someone who actually knows what they are talking about and understands everything thoroghly can vote.

oDoUoSoKo
02-25-2006, 04:27 PM
im game u go first since u challenged

Tainted-Adversary
02-25-2006, 04:30 PM
I hope the flows going to be good..dusk make sure to use his name..you might win

oDoUoSoKo
02-25-2006, 04:33 PM
lol, nothing better than a sore loser, j/k taint, i will

Verbatim
02-25-2006, 04:49 PM
don't worry dusk...habitat isn't seriously battling and he's not here to win, and you already know i'm going to vote for you as well as everybody else, cuz i'm a dickrider. but make sure to check out WWW.ILLESTLYRICS.COM!

just bustin chops...lookin forward to a good battle

oDoUoSoKo
02-25-2006, 04:54 PM
should i say thx to a comment like that?...lol anyway, w/e cool lets get it goin

Verbatim
02-25-2006, 05:13 PM
lol nah, go ahead and battle...in some other threads they were talkin about people on the site d1ckriding...i always vote based on which verse i think is better...lookin forward to a good battle from BOTH of yall...despite whatever smack taint and habitat been talkin

oDoUoSoKo
02-25-2006, 05:17 PM
despite whatever smack taint and habitat been talkin

u can say that again (don't)

lets go habitat

Redskull
02-25-2006, 05:26 PM
damn u cleanin up huh? lol sup its been a long time huh? start this battle man

oDoUoSoKo
02-25-2006, 05:31 PM
the return of dawn, hey man, they still aint change ya shit, damn.

start battlin dude! 1

Habitat
02-26-2006, 11:40 AM
haha, yea well a few battles in here really seemed like dickriding, cause the more talented verse wasnt getting the votes, but aright ill drop somethin quick i gotta go to work


hmm, kids on this site ridin dicks like mafia police informers/
so Dusk is about ta get "lit up" by the "Don's"(dawn's) orders/

this netcee facin true-greats he gotta pay his "Dus K?" (dues)/
this pool que-breaks over his fused-plates/ (bone plates)

contusions and bruisin, left in 2 pieces that i crack-yer-name-in/
cant comprehend the lyrical attack-yer-facin lasarations as i smash-yer-face in/

verbal onsloughts drop kids on-spot/
the plots-lost when you cross me, even when my rhymes are just off-the-top/

100pr00f
02-26-2006, 11:51 AM
on-spot and off-the-top
dont rhyme

unless u doing those cat -n-the-hat rhymes

spot, top , pop, cop,

lol

oDoUoSoKo
02-26-2006, 04:09 PM
^^^^lol

habitual bitch get ridiculed and kicked critical/
conditon you pittiful shit lick my squidward tenticles (squids have tentacles)/

invinclible spick rippin before you cough ya drops (spit ya shit)/
its funny u mention dickriding why dont u get "off the top" (off my dick)/

on the spot, bomb ya knot with bars that leave u guys dead (illestlyrics.com)/
me and dawn just rhyme, im sure u and taint share- a- twin- size- bed (the small beds, implying ur gay)/

keep the hat on ur head cat illest- lyrics- has- baybed- ya (cat in the hat rhymes^^, and babyed as in..ur a baby)/
these pussy rappers like habitat keep flappin theyre labia's(pussy lips)/

(im sure u can tell y im using parenthesis's alot)

oDoUoSoKo
02-26-2006, 04:31 PM
we done rite? vote

Dagalien
02-26-2006, 04:54 PM
This was a very hard choice for me. Both of you did really well with the battle, both using each others names to create your lines.

After reading this about 2-3 times though

My vote is for Dusk, I liked his lines a little more. He had the advantage of going second and so he was able to use your lines against you. If it had been the other way, maybe my vote would be changed.

Dusk used how you used a cat in a hat rhyme against you
Also how he used your words off the top to go against you.

Again, my vote is for dusk

oDoUoSoKo
02-26-2006, 04:56 PM
thx but wtf is a dagalien

MCSorrow
02-26-2006, 05:34 PM
Vote= Dusk

Habitat's verse didnt seem like it was aimed at dusk, Could have used that same rap in any battle. I thought it was a strong showing though I liked this line,
"Contusions and bruisin, left in 2 pieces that i crack-yer-name-in/
cant comprehend the lyrical attack-yer-facin lasarations as i smash-yer-face in/"

Dusk's Verse on the other hand was dirctly aimed at Habitat and his crew also had some good punchlines this one being my favorite ,
"Me and dawn just rhyme, im sure u and taint share- a- twin- size- bed"

oDoUoSoKo
02-26-2006, 05:37 PM
thx man..but watch out..u may be called a dickrider ,lol

2-0

MCSorrow
02-26-2006, 05:40 PM
lol yeah almost afraid to vote

4-Bar Killer
02-26-2006, 05:49 PM
Vote= Dusk

Habitat's verse didnt seem like it was aimed at dusk, Could have used that same rap in any battle. I thought it was a strong showing though I liked this line,
"Contusions and bruisin, left in 2 pieces that i crack-yer-name-in/
cant comprehend the lyrical attack-yer-facin lasarations as i smash-yer-face in/"

Dusk's Verse on the other hand was dirctly aimed at Habitat and his crew also had some good punchlines this one being my favorite ,
"Me and dawn just rhyme, im sure u and taint share- a- twin- size- bed"

co-sign. I think dusk had a advantage by responding. I also agree that Habitat's verse didn't seemed pointed at dusk. I also agrees with you on the point that Habitat's third line def. was his best.

My vote goes to dusk too, even though both verses was ill. Dusk was more like a punchline verse which imo is best in a battl.e

oDoUoSoKo
02-26-2006, 05:53 PM
i think thats it, unless habitat wants to accuse yall of riding my dick,lol

good battle, i won by tko but as always ya could leave ur thoughts and votes behind, but..THIS BATTLE IS DONE

Habitat
02-26-2006, 08:15 PM
first of all, if you read the rules, then none of the votes count, but it doesnt matter.

i wont accuse anyone of dickriding, lol im an emcee i wont be a bitch, but WTF are people sayin my verse wasnt aimed at him for? it was a keystyle before i went to work, i am going to explain the mettas that show it is aimed at him...

Dusk is when it is dark, dawn is when it is "lit up"..."lit up" also means to be shot, such as something a "mafia Don" would do to an informer. (don/dawn)= wordplay and a personal to "dusk"

second, Dus K=Dusk (its called nameplay)


therefor the verse was aimed at dusk

k i guess im done anyways. but oh yea... who ever said i had cat-in-the-hat rhymes, is my next battle, that is far from basic, many of my rhymes in that verse were at least 4 syllable mutlies.

so, i cant remember who it was, but im battlin the kid who said cat in the hat cause thats bullshit

oDoUoSoKo
02-26-2006, 08:45 PM
so ur saying i didnt win because they didnt use ur vote stencil?

look, u did very good man, but this "guideline" strictness is bs, i think they explained enuff, and whether they did it ur way, i still would have won (not to sound conceited) i thought u were my best comp. in a long time.

until we meet again..peace and dont bs

Habitat
02-26-2006, 09:31 PM
i said it didnt matter... man you like to throw around the word bullshit alot

hmm, vote stencil? i set rules, expecting votes to be broken down to be explained, but apparently, fuck rules?

anyways, sign up to illestlyrics man, we will battle there

oDoUoSoKo
02-26-2006, 09:33 PM
i dont like that site, sorry for the word bullshit

im sorry but im done wit u 2

oDoUoSoKo
02-26-2006, 09:35 PM
and u can call me scared pussy wack w/e, because i dont care anymore

Habitat
02-26-2006, 11:49 PM
hahaha, aright whatever, there is already a battle set up for you, just post

UNdissPUTED
02-27-2006, 01:46 AM
Why is Habitat so eager to battle people on that piece of shit hideously layed-out, unknown, forty-membered site? Even the buttons at the top are fuckin cheap ass hell taken straight from microsoft clipart. I bet you every "member" is Habitat under a different name trying to make his trinket of a battle site look popular.

Habitat
02-27-2006, 10:12 AM
hahahahaha, youre a bitch, you would get killed by every member on that site, its still being worked on, it crashed a little while ago and the person is rebuilding it and starting over, and its not about the cheap buttons...

its about the lyrical skill on that site, get past the buttons and read somethin there

oDoUoSoKo
02-27-2006, 06:13 PM
Why is Habitat so eager to battle people on that piece of shit hideously layed-out, unknown, forty-membered site? Even the buttons at the top are fuckin cheap ass hell taken straight from microsoft clipart. I bet you every "member" is Habitat under a different name trying to make his trinket of a battle site look popular.

lol