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T-ribe
03-02-2006, 02:33 PM
3 to win
keep to under 30 lines


Dusk You Bomb first..

oDoUoSoKo
03-03-2006, 05:31 PM
rappin for delight kwit yappin and taste the steel
im the raptor on the right about to make ya face a meal
waste the skiilll, on a tasteless eel, oh well practice, i might as well
reveal that this hoes not navaho, hes probably white as hell
still wants to try to make somethin out of nothing with a mex smile:mexico:
comin out ya butt grin after gettin punished by tekstyle
yes child, dusk knows the trouble of ya'll gay chumps
love to cut thru a couple concrete warriors and make em clay punks
say what? ribe u sound like uve been but t-raped
shape up, ite? leave u see thru like paper bags wit cheese steaks
for petes sake, where u been? u seen my last spit spars?
i eat state penetentuarys for din, and sh*t bars
get hard! wit ya tribe of half way crooks and quarter felons
ya b!tch got my d!ck spittin seeds like its eatin watermelons
while u out scarfin melons, im sparrin hellsing and warrin wit hells king(melons as in heads)
in this disaster the masta, killin em and makin bells ring
well things is gettin out of hand, have i crossed the line
im forgettin that ur not a man, ur sack is tossed behind
hidden, uve lost ya mind ribe go home and spend some time alone
cuz when i rhyme im prone to send virus's to ur RIBE-asomes
like a clone, ur not exactly me ur just a copy g
the venom left in u shows up in ya drug test' like poppy seeds
got me b? ill pre-scribe some d-rugs for the "thugs" in ya t-ribe
to re-leave some of ur dizziness from ur long d-ride
see twice when h-a-n-d's fly between eyes
these tribes, are couch potatoes, homie im the CHEESE fries
y 30 lines? i hurt these mimes wit just 8 + 8
c'mon from "dusk til- hol up what'd u say phukk face?
that titles taken son, dont make thoughtless puns
dog try to kill me with a f 'in phone, but he used a cordless one
record this rum - ble, before u spit sum bull.


1 to zip, t-ribe nice battle, until............we meet again

31 lines and a half!!!!! lol

T-ribe
03-04-2006, 05:43 AM
Dusk homie, your rhymes reak of mustt(foul Funk)
Your bitch is so bust, I have 2 add a paper bag and crush
your off beat rhymes got you wipen crust, and such
off your dirty lips,
because your spitt'en shit
wanna step to my blood line an I'll expose a bitch
Bring up tekstyles, like your his child
If this is 8mile, than your the white boy on trial
B-rabbit, with a bad habbit
Fuckin with warriors, that wage war and wont have it
Like I said befor its from Dusk till dawn
his mothers hard-on , is why his virginity's gone
Please come strong, if you wanna fuck with a Kong
my people is the banwagon, everybody wants to jump on
The high and mighty, straight kill whitey
If you throw a party, please dont invite me
It's likely, Ill crush your lady Buffy
Most you pecker woods know not to trust me
Don't get huffy and puffy over the verbals
I could see it already your duckin in you shell like turtles
Its Ok to take off your high heels and your gertels
you make my blood curdle, with the thought
That your a bitch who rocks a cock
dyed his skin to look like Pac
masterbates inside a sock, my god!!!
If I'm lyin creator, please strike me with a lightning rod
Dusk's name is probably Todd ..... Humburger , or sum thin
He frontin like a G, when he sit down to pee
Swears he holds the key to real hip hop
Duke thought the term pop and lock
was how u shot a glock,
He's dumb as rocks, that fell off of a moutain
While he boyscoutin , I punk him for his cookie money
He thought it was funny, till he hit the floor like Liston, Sunny
Mahammed Ali Raps

T-ribe
03-04-2006, 05:46 AM
Both of us went over on the line count
Oh well, That ll add to the flavor

Germillion
03-04-2006, 08:33 AM
Imma vote for T-ribe.

BRASSKNUCKLED PAI MEI
03-04-2006, 04:03 PM
Why are you voting?? If you dont explain your vote with the voting guidelines posted in the sticky they DO NOT COUNT!!

BRASSKNUCKLED PAI MEI
03-04-2006, 10:48 PM
0-0 VOTES NEEDED

oDoUoSoKo
03-05-2006, 03:21 PM
vote plz

cap
03-05-2006, 05:10 PM
flow- t-ribe
wordplay- dusk
creativity- dusk
vocabulary- dusk
punches- dusk

dusk's verse was just amazing
one of the illest ive seen on the corp
keep it up man

vote=dusk

oDoUoSoKo
03-05-2006, 05:12 PM
thx man, apreciated

1-0

oDoUoSoKo
03-05-2006, 09:35 PM
vote

hollywoodrealty
03-06-2006, 12:31 PM
ok ima vote like this



dusk:
flow 8.5
wordplay 8.5
creativity 8.5
vocabulary 8.5
punches 8.5

t-ribe:

flow 8
wordplay 8
creativity 8
vocabulary 8
punches 8


so as u can see, dusk barely took this one for me, i give him extra credit bcuz he went 1st, but it was close, however dusk hit home for me better then t -ribe, i vote for dusk

oDoUoSoKo
03-06-2006, 04:40 PM
thx for votin on my battles man, its been hard tryin to concentrate, especially since i hate the new rules but thx

2-0 vote ya

BRASSKNUCKLED PAI MEI
03-07-2006, 04:58 PM
Keep Voting

WARPATH
03-09-2006, 02:02 AM
dusk:
flow -1
wordplay-2
creativity -2
vocabulary -1
punches -1

t-ribe:

flow-2
wordplay-1
creativity -1
vocabulary-1
punches-2



Dusk came with some dope witty wordplay, mad creative, but the punches tried to use a lot of personals and felt some of them were.......dooo dooo doooo........but I do reconize it can be hard to diss your opponent so you need to find somthing to draw material from, I've read a lot of battles on here, mainly the teksytles vs. T-ribe- the one dusk mentions, and I got say- dick riding another battler is not the way to set up a punch. What hurt dusk, was the flow fell off half way through and remained sloppy. He tried to sugar coat his verse and it back fired a little bit.

Tribes flow was pretty constant through out, the lines were short swift and to the point- Like quick sword cuts- or hitting bitch's pussy dry, not giving her enough time to get wet- the punches weren't as creative but they were funnier, which I feel is more crucial to winning a battle- he reversed the personals by playing the race card, which was low blow but considering dusk played it first we'll let it slide.......

Both opponents were showing a decent grasp for syntax-

Scoring this it's a tie, since we can't have that-

Tribe issued a challange to anyone Dusk excepted and rised to the occasion- arms got chopped, innocent bystanders got blood squirted on them, but in the end, a boy scout got jacked for his cookie money.

Vote Tribe

T-ribe
03-09-2006, 02:57 PM
Peace God
Good lookin on the lines you droped
That makes it 1-2

Visionz
03-13-2006, 11:19 PM
both verses was nice but it was Dusk who seperated himself with the punches, like how you built off his sig, that shit had me laughin
this was another one
(for petes sake, where u been? u seen my last spit spars?
i eat state penetentuarys for din, and sh*t bars)
there were some more nice ones in there.............T-ribe, ya verse was solid and consistent but the punches just weren't as consistent as Dusk's.
peace to both emcees

oDoUoSoKo
03-14-2006, 06:33 PM
cool 3-1, much love eric

T-ribe
03-14-2006, 11:10 PM
Solid, I'll take dat one
Dusk you came quite nice on tha vrs
I'll get back at cha

ilzPotent
03-19-2006, 10:03 AM
3 to win.... err dusk I think you won...

T-ribe
03-19-2006, 08:07 PM
Your crazy meat
it's first to three wins
that why I said I'll get bak at cha
You won this battle, but a remach is in order

BRASSKNUCKLED PAI MEI
03-27-2006, 12:52 AM
Votes Needed

oDoUoSoKo
03-27-2006, 10:37 PM
I Frikin New It

T-ribe
03-28-2006, 02:11 PM
well den lets get some more votes

Ironlungz
03-28-2006, 02:29 PM
- t-ribe - dusk
flow 7 - 8
wordplay 8 - 7
creativity 6 - 8
vocabulary 8 - 7
punches 6 - 8

35 vs 38

Battle was CLOSE... but...
vote: dusk

oDoUoSoKo
03-29-2006, 09:22 PM
much peece

BRASSKNUCKLED PAI MEI
03-31-2006, 06:25 PM
dusk:
flow -1
wordplay-2
creativity -2
vocabulary -1
punches -1

t-ribe:

flow-2
wordplay-1
creativity -1
vocabulary-1
punches-2



Dusk came with some dope witty wordplay, mad creative, but the punches tried to use a lot of personals and felt some of them were.......dooo dooo doooo........but I do reconize it can be hard to diss your opponent so you need to find somthing to draw material from, I've read a lot of battles on here, mainly the teksytles vs. T-ribe- the one dusk mentions, and I got say- dick riding another battler is not the way to set up a punch. What hurt dusk, was the flow fell off half way through and remained sloppy. He tried to sugar coat his verse and it back fired a little bit.

Tribes flow was pretty constant through out, the lines were short swift and to the point- Like quick sword cuts- or hitting bitch's pussy dry, not giving her enough time to get wet- the punches weren't as creative but they were funnier, which I feel is more crucial to winning a battle- he reversed the personals by playing the race card, which was low blow but considering dusk played it first we'll let it slide.......

Both opponents were showing a decent grasp for syntax-

Scoring this it's a tie, since we can't have that-

Tribe issued a challange to anyone Dusk excepted and rised to the occasion- arms got chopped, innocent bystanders got blood squirted on them, but in the end, a boy scout got jacked for his cookie money.

Vote Tribe

Now thats a VOTE :z Thanks