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Treazon
03-07-2006, 02:48 PM
ok ill set it off first, rules are simple 2 verses 20 max lines first to 3 votes wins.

ill drop...

Treazon
03-07-2006, 03:01 PM
Luther Large is the target, punchlines make you wanna act like a carpet
blood red, layin down seein' more stars than the one at the Oscars
you're just a school-yard scrapper, battlin a boxer
we all know your odds are slim, your light is dimmed
cuz like my past opponents your hope will be thin
Treazon is grim and Six is heartless, ill make you thin out cuz your garbage
ya wake up face down in the alley, i wake up on a non-stop to Maui
what i drop on a weekend covers ten times ya year salary
Luther beatin' Six thats a fallacy, hip hop police mad at me
cuz what i did to your chances of winning is a national tragedy
shoulda stayed away from this Battlefield my words are explosive
cuz i'll make Large feel small, verses poisoned and corrosive
ya'll observe the chemical change as he's internally roasted
rap skills you lack, Six has a sick surplus
you and ya crew inchin back muttering "Six please dont hurt us"
but the less you fight back the more brutal the murders
i hope you strike back atleast make this a contest
cuz im tempted to end it fast and im just bein honest


one.

Luther Large
03-07-2006, 03:59 PM
Catch mad stitches and get a taste from these lyrics i boast/
mics ive mastered along with pens that ive broke/
metaphors soar through your nasal only to do damage like ganja smoke/
yo comparison of me to you is like converse to pro-keds/
chain smokers and dope heads/
step to this and get left "ass out" like jennifer lopez/
the truth is you suck your only praised by a selected few/
who do you think your steppin to with payless shoes/
i'm straight up delectable/
dumb fuck i cut your vocabulary short like you hated your vegetables/
when it comes to your battles from now on pick and choos'em/
cuz as long as it's you doin the battelin aint nobody else losin/
i have nothin else to say about you that hasnt already been provin/
but actually fuck it cuz with so many flaws son i'm bound to find sumthin/



it's been a long time with this but ive still been battelin personaly

Treazon
03-07-2006, 06:03 PM
aiyyyyyooo
you talk about my flaws like you've seen my shit befo'
bitch all you'll see is the back of ya eyelids as you hit the flo'
messin' with a kid like me ain't safe no mo'
son i told you to come hard like ya momma told me
but you didn't come at all just like a girl told me
no peace in ya restin', show you how a coffin is lonely
no blessings, no time for "if only's", bullets don't have homies
and neither do you, Treazon's playin' cupid in uniting you two
your right im praised only by a selected few -
those i havent battled, cuz those that i have, hate me dude
with your shallow insults i know you dont mean to be rude
but dont hate on my payless shoes, just cuz they worth more than you
your rhymes couldn't touch me man your guns couldn't bust me
its just your sad attempt that turns out the scene ugly
trust me, you should stay out of the forum, bitch dont step to me
so sell all ya lyrics maybe get matches for 'em, just cuz they free
your not worth a damn thing Luther, and everybody knows it
so just go back to your soother child don't fuck with this poet



one.

Luther Large
03-07-2006, 07:19 PM
call the coppers call the fire department and bring out the paramedics/
i spit so sick my saliva has started an epidemic/
my ryhmes are far from shit son i'm anti-septic/
i'm quick to get this ducklaced man just throw in the towel/
your life's in jeoprady fuckface you wouldnt be an "emcee" if you sold all your vowels/
front on this and get rocked just like adidas/
cocksucker you couldnt (w)rap on the birthdate of jesus/
capped and ate up like reeses/
wrapped up in plastic and after the battle smashed up in pieces/
blastin fools like you my raps could power the weak/
you aint sick son the reason they call you nasty is cuz you aint showerd in weeks/
you weak fuck you aint from the streets that i know for a fact/
you suck the
only decent cat to come out of canada is ummm fuck it cuz there aint 1 black/
so what makes you think a rapper of your stature can even atempt to change that/




yes i'm very rusty

nice battle

VOTES!!!!!!!

Treazon
03-07-2006, 07:27 PM
yeah nice battle man.... ok lets get some votes (explained atleast a bit)...

first to 3 wins



peace

MauiLife
03-07-2006, 09:47 PM
Treazon

Luther I like your style but overall I think treazon beat on the vocab and wordplay area.

good shit overall for both though but my vote goes 2 treazon

Luther Large
03-08-2006, 10:17 AM
Votes!!!!!!!!!

Visionz
03-08-2006, 02:00 PM
This was a decent battle. I broke shit down for real yesterday but the damn site logs me off and my words w/ it so yall get the abridged version here. But basically I gotta say that LL took this one. There was some filler in the verses but I think that the punches that were on point were hitting harder than what Treazon was bringin in this one.
Yo, Luther I get that feelin you kinda goin through that same shit I am were you tryin to shake off the rust. It's takin me a whole minute to really get things back on that level I know they should be at. I know you're deadly when things are workin right . I'm betting it comes back pretty quickly.

Here's the highlight line for me from both emcees...... (Treazon)

Luther Large is the target, punchlines make you wanna act like a carpet
blood red, layin down seein' more stars than the one at the Oscars(originall with creative wordplay)

no peace in ya restin', show you how a coffin is lonely
no blessings, no time for "if only's", bullets don't have homies
and neither do you, Treazon's playin' cupid in uniting you two ( like the rawness of the lyrics here)

nicest lines out of the battle for you here. As advice I'd say to try and spice up the word play a bit more. The flow not bad and it rhymed and all but not a whole lot had that "ooohhhh damn!!!" factor for me.


for LL

yo comparison of me to you is like converse to pro-keds/
chain smokers and dope heads/
step to this and get left "ass out" like jennifer lopez/(creative and had me laughin)

i'm quick to get this ducklaced man just throw in the towel/
your life's in jeoprady fuckface you wouldnt be an "emcee" if you sold all your vowels/(creative line here)

cocksucker you couldnt (w)rap on the birthdate of jesus/(another crafty one)

I could tell there was some rust, true indeed, but you did get enough gems in there to take the battle. Respect to both emcees

Luther Large
03-08-2006, 06:40 PM
^I am rusty glad sum1 else knows how it feels



VOTES!!!!!!!!!!! pleez

ilzPotent
03-08-2006, 06:59 PM
treazon

flow - 3
wordplay - 3
creativity - 4
vocabulary - 5
punches - 4


Luther Large

flow - 5
wordplay - 4
creativity - 4
vocabulary - 5
punches - 5

vote = luther large

good battle homies

Luther Large
03-09-2006, 10:16 AM
Votes!!!!

Luther Large
03-09-2006, 01:24 PM
Votes!!!!

^what he said

Treazon
03-09-2006, 02:13 PM
patience, they will come..

BRASSKNUCKLED PAI MEI
03-09-2006, 05:21 PM
2- 1 Ll

BlaK FuRYaN
03-10-2006, 08:52 AM
flow ..................LUTHER
wordplay............LUTHER
creativity...........LUTHER
vocabulary.........LUTHER
punches.............LUTHER


WHAT I LIKED ABOUT TREAZON WAS THE WAY HE REPLIED IN HIS SECOND VERSE...WHICH WAS TIGHT....DEFINATE POTENTIAL....

VOTE:LUTHER

Luther Large
03-10-2006, 09:56 AM
that's it 3-1

i'd like to give a special shout out to all the voters:W


good battle treazon

Treazon
03-10-2006, 05:32 PM
yeah peace luther


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