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Knok-A-Fella
06-25-2005, 01:12 PM
im tryna broaden my horizons so i thought id try battlin

im an amatuer and just doin it cos im bored

Rulz
1 verse (cos im quite busy at minute)
how mnay lines u want

first to 3 votes

Bless. 1

Sicka than aidZ
06-25-2005, 03:33 PM
im just gonna rap away...

Sicka than aidZ
06-25-2005, 03:52 PM
yo, u just gonna get knocked up bitch comin with no text claiming u aint shit.../
if u dont spit on this than ima be pissed cuz my Download just quit on me bitch../
fuck it,...im mad as hell now,...too sober too walk around...real mean an shit about breakdown with the gat an fuckin shoot up the neighbors with as many rounds that r in the nearest four pound.../
yo,...and i aint even mad at you,...imagine what id do if I was kid.../
prolly put my fist thru this screen,..track your IP,..find out where u live an blow your whole fuckin block to bits.../
yo, your a nobody with nothing but a faggot ass name.../
kick your shit quick homie,...we wanna know why u think u can battle with the big names.../
this is like your resume... aint even a match yet.../
leave me hanging like G vs OG askin for feed on a verse that cant be met.../
so yeah money,...this is pre-round one.../
fuckit i can t rap worth shit if im pissed off and not havin fun with it son.....

Tres.Bo.
06-25-2005, 06:20 PM
i'll battle how bout a minimum of 10 each?

Knok-A-Fella
06-26-2005, 05:32 AM
aight den
u post first then me

Bless, 1

inifiniti
06-29-2005, 10:56 AM
still wanna battle

crastuf
06-29-2005, 10:58 AM
any of ya'll still wanna battle?

Knok-A-Fella
06-29-2005, 03:03 PM
seemin tho that tres.bo aint battlin i'll battle u inifiniti

Crastuf bites lyrics

u drop first inifiniti

many lines as u want

Bless, 1

Dae Ja Nae
06-30-2005, 09:00 AM
I keep looking in these threads, but I don't see any battles going on :( ... dang

Knok-A-Fella
06-30-2005, 01:38 PM
heres my verse seemin as tho every1 scared to go first

im pakin rhymes like bullets in my bulldog 44
gun u down like berkowitz, murder this bitch thru his car door
im too raw just like the earths outer surface im hardcore
5 bullets spray u like 77, im above the law
but if u want war im as dangerous a hiroshima
holdin my challace in my hand im the lyrical grim reaper
whos comin after fake rappers and fukers who cant rhyme
ur bars are like cassidys not worth my time
so if u think u can beat me motherfuker think again
cos my bars are horrendous deliverin rhymes with poison pens


memba this my first battle

Bless, 1

inifiniti
06-30-2005, 04:05 PM
sorry about the wait i was away

look ya couldn't show me up if ya tilted my head back
im a new school rapper puttin phoenix on da map
so if u wanna step up then thats fine
but ur gunna be like michael "cummin in a little behind"
knok a fella thinkin ya rap too swift
knok a fella stands for the fellas ya knock boots wit
i don't care if it's ur first battle rap
i treat battlers like spandex an don't cut em no slack

Dae Ja Nae
06-30-2005, 04:39 PM
Damn ... this is a toss up right here ... let me read them again ...

Dae Ja Nae
06-30-2005, 04:48 PM
knok-a-fella

im pakin rhymes like bullets in my bulldog 44
gun u down like berkowitz, murder this bitch thru his car door
im too raw just like the earths outer surface im hardcore
5 bullets spray u like 77, im above the law
but if u want war im as dangerous a hiroshima
holdin my challace in my hand im the lyrical grim reaper
whos comin after fake rappers and fukers who cant rhyme
ur bars are like cassidys not worth my time
so if u think u can beat me motherfuker think again
cos my bars are horrendous deliverin rhymes with poison pens


inifiniti

look ya couldn't show me up if ya tilted my head back
im a new school rapper puttin phoenix on da map
so if u wanna step up then thats fine
but ur gunna be like michael "cummin in a little behind"

( ^^ well damn!! )
knok a fella thinkin ya rap too swift
knok a fella stands for the fellas ya knock boots wit
i don't care if it's ur first battle rap
i treat battlers like spandex an don't cut em no slack

I'm gonna go with Knock-a-fella on this one.

Infiniti's "Michale line" was sick as hell (I liked that one ;)), but line for line, Knock-a-fella held it down better IMO,

100pr00f
06-30-2005, 04:51 PM
damn phat ............im sorry but ima give it to................ inifiniti.......
he brangs mad metas.....

my fave line

"but ur gunna be like michael "cummin in a little behind"
knok a fella thinkin ya rap too swift
knok a fella stands for the fellas ya knock boots wit"

100pr00f
06-30-2005, 04:53 PM
1-1

Idiom
06-30-2005, 05:13 PM
quite nice if that really is your first battle..
but you lost...

since it is a battle rap, try not to mention yourself so much
remember you're trying to diss your opponent not saying things about you.

i'm this and i'm that is played out..punch your opponent, dont say i'ma punch
you, if you get what i mean..

inifiniti, deadly as always, tight, tight
this was rather genious
"but ur gunna be like michael "cummin in a little behind"
vote : inifiniti

100pr00f
06-30-2005, 05:59 PM
2-1 with infiniti the lead

Dae Ja Nae
06-30-2005, 07:21 PM
quite nice if that really is your first battle..
but you lost...

since it is a battle rap, try not to mention yourself so much
remember you're trying to diss your opponent not saying things about you.

i'm this and i'm that is played out..punch your opponent, dont say i'ma punch
you, if you get what i mean..

inifiniti, deadly as always, tight, tight
this was rather genious
"but ur gunna be like michael "cummin in a little behind"
vote : inifiniti
Okay ... I see now ... but is it always about the punch lines? What about the content of the rhyme as a whole? I'm not trying to being a smart ass, I really just want to know. Yall know I'm a poet 1st, the battle stuff is a little new to me.

crastuf
06-30-2005, 07:34 PM
them's nice bars, especially by knok

Idiom
06-30-2005, 07:34 PM
well of course your content means alot, you cant win with punchlines if your shit doesnt make sense, everything is important just the punchlines is where you win most of your battles......

for instance

i don't care if it's ur first battle rap < lead
i treat battlers like spandex an don't cut em no slack < punchline

get my drift??

100pr00f
06-30-2005, 08:00 PM
are they votes..........idiom and crastuf

crastuf
06-30-2005, 08:22 PM
me being a new battler too, my vote is for knok

Idiom
06-30-2005, 08:40 PM
yeah my vote went to inifiniti

inifiniti
06-30-2005, 08:48 PM
thanks for the votes and crastuf you got some sick lines yourself for a beginer

100pr00f
07-01-2005, 07:34 AM
ok inifiniti wins..............3-2

close battle way to go from both .... some good punches and word play........peace

Knok-A-Fella
07-02-2005, 12:21 PM
aight its all kool

inifinit u a battler for sure

Bless, 1

Sicka than aidZ
07-02-2005, 10:37 PM
damn phat ............im sorry but ima give it to................ inifiniti.......
he brangs mad metas.....

my fave line

"but ur gunna be like michael "cummin in a little behind"
knok a fella thinkin ya rap too swift
knok a fella stands for the fellas ya knock boots wit"http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v646/jameztwo/smileyprops.gif
yep^cosign...funny as hell infinite......

im not voting, pm me if u need one, looks like u have enuf

BLU-WURRIAH
08-18-2005, 11:28 AM
Fuck U,u,u,
O Yeah Yo Mama Too
Dont Think U Gangsta Cuz U Have A Fredship Wit "clue"

Im Standin Here In Muh B-boy Stance
Muh Ryhmez Soo Scary I Made U Shit In Yo Pants!

Yo' Ryhmez Arr Wack Yo' Ryhmez Arr Smelly
Nigga U Hidin' In Tha Closet Wit R.kelly

2 B Rapped And Taped And Posted All Ova The' Innanet Ill Beat U Ill Punch U Like Wat I Do To Muh Pet!


Yo' Skin Soo Blaq U Touch Yo' Self All Tha' Tyme
Wen U Scatch Yo' Self It's Like Blaq On Blaq Crime!

Im Only 13 And I Fuck Dis' Nigga Up
Now Remebah U Got Dissed By Tha "blu-wurriah"!

hollywoodrealty
08-18-2005, 11:45 AM
blu take a hike

imitation is suicide
11-07-2005, 12:55 PM
quickly blood spillin, no drug dealin,
crazy ass fool, who loves dealin,
weak mcs their cards instead of rollin dice,
the stake claimes for your life,
endure the strife,
endure the addiction, probably could metion,
hardcore gangstas, spend time in penitations,
fucked up nation, makes me mention,
the thought of redemption,begining of creation,
my shit is all up in yo face like a criminal case,
like a jury judging you sad to see the long face,
sprayed like a wall that is sprayed with no taste........
...................check mate......................

Visionz
11-08-2005, 12:54 AM
if that was in response to Blu, ya just murdered him....and Blu I know ur young so just take it as advice to leave jokes u heard on the street outta battles, if you heard 'em so has everyone else. Originallty goes a long way. Yo, Suicide nice verse especially when considerin age...
endure the addiction, probably could metion,
hardcore gangstas, spend time in penitations,(tight cause its the truth, and nice how u changed the word up to fit the rhyme scheme)

my shit is all up in yo face like a criminal case,
like a jury judging you sad to see the long face,(nice imagery, but watch urself to avoid being redundant w/ your vocab, endure, endure, face, face) just some pointers homie, ya got talent and a good sense of flow so keep it up. peace

hollywoodrealty
11-08-2005, 08:53 AM
ya this is hard, knock had good flow, but it just seemed like he used a line or 2 that i might of heard ina rap song, so didnt seem so original, on the other hand, infiniti had a rough 1st 4 lines, but the last 6 were very ill, so ima go with infiniti on this one, vote infiniti