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Visionz
03-08-2006, 04:32 AM
1 round, you tell me how many votes, it' dont matter to me


Maui is that ill grass to grow, must be why you getting smoked like hydro
Life would be harder serving time on deathrow, you getting killed quick from the undertow flow
No recesitation from the CPR, you couldn't hold weight if you were Pablo Escobar
I'll leave your eyes blinking like a VCR, you couldn't hit the right note if you were Jimmy's guitar
Dr. Kevorkian, battlin' me is the assisted suicide of rap,
I let the trap snap back to watch the neckbone collapse from the fatal grasp of my mental synapse
I reach out like dendrites to expose fake types gassed out on self-hype
You could be Wesley Snipes your Blades still wouldn't swing right
Go head, stay in denial like whitey's after the OJ trial
You can't take me, I smile at any attempts, I stay above your game like the Goodyear blimp
I got Butch's blade to slay you gimps, the style is deadly this is just a glimpse





.........from your judging, I imagine your skills are at least decent. I didn't want you to have to wait too long to showcase 'em. peace

MauiLife
03-08-2006, 02:45 PM
Yo.....heres my verse...good luck


as I Kick back relax
and blaze up the lush trees
Ill send Unseen
into exile like Rushdie
on a blood spree
you're at the top of the list
I lay you 6 feet horizontally
by vertically slitting your wrist
I have the gift of gab
studied by scientists in labs
your style worn down
like heroin addicts with jazz
I have the illest style
yours small in comparison
your embarrassing to rap
and every african american
I got you takin prozac
turn you mentally bi polar
eric unseen
I rip your splean out your molars
I cast shadows on the solar
your attack falls on deaf ears
with OJ references?
its become abundanley clear
your cliched sentecnes
and attempts at buffoonery
makes me spit like humpback whales
its madd lunicy
its cool to see
that I'm giving you pause
your weak style is masked
by you grasping at straws
my claws are like wolverine
the defininiton of viscious
maliscious
unseen str8 rhymes like bitches

Visionz
03-08-2006, 02:51 PM
i could be an emcee talent scout, nice verse homie. respect

MauiLife
03-08-2006, 03:10 PM
Yea Thx. You dropped a nice verse too, let's see if we can get some votes.

Luther Large
03-08-2006, 04:05 PM
eric m-life
flow 7.5 7.0
crtvy 7.0 7.5
wrdply 6.5 6.5
pchlns 7.5 6.5
vcab 7.0 7.5

nice battle ya'll

but eric barley took it maui all you need to do is make sum of your lines sound more believable cuz when you said "buffoonery" that was corny it looked forced plus you had no real punchlines it sounds but other than that you got it down

ps.you'll have to drop stronger against a solid ryhmer like eric

peace

BRASSKNUCKLED PAI MEI
03-09-2006, 05:35 PM
1-0 Keep Voting

Liquid Lines
03-10-2006, 05:34 AM
Eric Unseen all the way, everthing was better, espaciallly his punchlines, creativity and wordplay.

BlaK FuRYaN
03-10-2006, 08:44 AM
flow - MAU
creativity - TIE
wordplay - ERIC
punchlines - ERIC
vocab - MAU

VOTE:Ericunseen

hollywoodrealty
03-11-2006, 07:13 PM
i gotta give this one to mauilife, he had consistently good lines throughout the rhyme, my fav line was

"on a blood spree
you're at the top of the list
I lay you 6 feet horizontally
by vertically slitting your wrist"


so it was close but mauilife gets my vote, peace

oDoUoSoKo
03-12-2006, 04:23 PM
eric m-life
flow 7-7.5
crtvy 8-8.5
wrdply 8-8.25
pchlns 8-8.25
vcab 9-9

eric ive seen alot better from u, but either way,good- and maui u did pretty good 2

oDoUoSoKo
03-12-2006, 04:24 PM
vote on my battles and finish them up so ben cood close em plz