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Habitat
03-17-2006, 06:21 PM
im stressed out cause of my ex..aka "hobitch", lmao, so im gonna keystyle lol.

turning the page, yearning for days, concerning this cage/
perpetual chains, scars-left from heated arguments burning my face/
the hurt in my brain, is returning to stay/
and destroy my concience, as i deploy this nonsense/
my offset scriptures are godsent/
my sanity is my last bet, but its hooked in hypnosis and the traps set/
hopeless raps get...
corrosive to my self respect, and i cant help regret.../
cant help regret when i fell..forget/
wanna forget the moments when i was holdin the coldest most soul less/
monster with rose lips/
and kind eyes hiding whats inside its ferocious emotionless hostess...its hopeless/
could have hid my eyes but i chose ta look/
sitting with my lifes story before me, and its so unfamiliar though i wrote tha book/
so i disappear in a confusing mist/ feeling the uselessness/
looking in the mirror like "i donno who this is"/
an abused invisionist/
with suicidal recitals lacking the muse to slit his wrists/
so chain smokes cigarittes/
just hopin it did the trick/

last couple lines were prewrite but they seemed to fit into what i was keystyling so i used it.

hmm, definately gonna work on this more, and make it into a song called "suicidal recitals"

tell me whatcha think, peeace

Father N Dangerous
03-17-2006, 06:41 PM
im stressed out cause of my ex..aka "hobitch", lmao, so im gonna keystyle lol.

turning the page, yearning for days, concerning this cage/
perpetual chains, scars-left from heated arguments burning my face/
the hurt in my brain, is returning to stay/
and destroy my concience, as i deploy this nonsense/
my offset scriptures are godsent/
my sanity is my last bet, but its hooked in hypnosis and the traps set/
hopeless raps get...
corrosive to my self respect, and i cant help regret.../
cant help regret when i fell..forget/
wanna forget the moments when i was holdin the coldest most soul less/
monster with rose lips/
and kind eyes hiding whats inside its ferocious emotionless hostess...its hopeless/
could have hid my eyes but i chose ta look/
sitting with my lifes story before me, and its so unfamiliar though i wrote tha book/
so i disappear in a confusing mist/ feeling the uselessness/
looking in the mirror like "i donno who this is"/
an abused invisionist/
with suicidal recitals lacking the muse to slit his wrists/
so chain smokes cigarittes/
just hopin it did the trick/

last couple lines were prewrite but they seemed to fit into what i was keystyling so i used it.

hmm, definately gonna work on this more, and make it into a song called "suicidal recitals"

tell me whatcha think, peeace


this shit was ill yo, you good with da rhymes really diggin ya style. i'll be on da lookout for ya. keep blessin and stay up

Habitat
03-18-2006, 12:09 PM
thanks alot man, im just lookin around for a beat for this right now, once i find the right one ill write the rest :D

BRASSKNUCKLED PAI MEI
03-18-2006, 12:28 PM
yeah I'm feelin it!!

Habitat
03-18-2006, 05:28 PM
just thinkin of some lines for the second verse, these are the rough idea, when i use them ill anty up the rhymes in them

this is my attempt to fight off what the war wind brings/
but its so hard to pull out of a downword spiral with clipped wings/

free yet helpless like a puppet with clipped strings/
torn between several emotions and the rip stings/

Habitat
03-19-2006, 12:53 AM
in this world of disposable relationships how am i supposed to find my insignificant other/


how can you turn the page when you keep youre life a closed book/