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Ronin
06-08-2005, 03:18 PM
collab with a kid called sub

Sub-Zero
I shoot up ya brains, to heat up your cranium/
Iím sicker than poisonous gas Ďn Depleted Uranium/
A Primal beast, spliced w/ the genes of an Alien/
Just My presence alone, could turn Jesus to Atheist/
My lyrics travel like Signals, from Cellular Phones/
N I strike you like Metal, caught in Electrical Storms/
The Arch-Angel Lord, swingin the blazein Swords/
Decapitating All of the Beasts, in Satanís Horde/
Iíll Break Their Horns, Till Their Face gets Torn/
Drain they blood, n use it To Decorate My door/
Iím a Change the Norm, beyond its Basic Form/
Dropping Nuclear Weapons, of the Information War/
hand on my Gat, for the Prophecies thatís coming/
Hell On Earth, We The Economy will Plummet/
A Devilish time, you canít walk the streets In public/
Filled w/ High Crime rates, Robbery n Gunmen/
Itís the Sub-Zer0, Commin with Ronin the Samurai/
Enemies of the State, Tracked on Globe by a Satellite/
Iím a Trojan n Battle knight, Holding a Jagged knife/
Kill you, To Summon ya Ghost in the Candle light/
I be spittin venom, to burn through strips of denim/
You canít see me, like the Illuminatiís symbolism/
I smack up you Stage Imposters, n take you Hostage/
N crack ya skull like when Jesus Breaks the crosses/
I Reconfigure cogs of Fate, bustin with this one line/
n Stabbing Deíjall The monster In his only One eye/

Ronin
we abominal savages, distorting time in lifes passages
anarchists, visit Belfast to plant timed packages
touch the flow and your a masocist, even on some passive shit
ill send you home body quarted in 4 ambulance
the darkness is hazardous, society a realm of wicked
the sickness is explicit, displacing Christian physics
walls built hope diminished, i'm in it so fuck a cynic
Cracken guarding the passages for peace thats infinite
crush a structure, 2 infact got blazed for war
a period of black blood is the Middle Eastern menapause
the end of the chance for peace, realisation of beleif
rivers of scarlet in the street of those deceased
meet the cops, leak glocks alls watched by black-ops
ill be sippin shots with satan, horns locked in Ragnor Rock
pop locks, break-and entry into mind-fields
my coming is in messages, life time highlight reels
footage stored, puppets scorned at your free form
and when the beast bored, the child deceived more
a free fall, decisions made through the terresstrial
wheres your celestrial?, as they control you like a sentinal
they got the best of you, they ain't a better Jew
Zion locked down, there schemeing miles ahead of you


and a political free written verse

yo, im sick of politics white men in suits
discussing the nation, and mistrusting the youth
misinterperating the truth to fools willing to be abused
by systems gridlocking your mental attributes
look at labour, their power, the euro refferendum
ignore the views of the populus, and the war diddnt end em
get George Galloway, and we'll leave em in mounds
he shreaded the U.S senate, fuck backin down
check bush rockin the crown...of thorns, he thinks hes jesus
the commission playing god, his father like promethius
givin fire to the people, on middle eastern plains
fuck their quest for oil, burn black gold in flames
and you think i aint sane? im a conspiracy theorist?
then i think your sheep, you dont listen like your earless
fuck what your piers did, i cant abide by their notions
im flowin information to the point of changin your emotions
while u mentally comotosin, set the ball in motion
to knock down police state idealists, ill sacrifice their devotion
like the Bohemian Grove, when alex Jones broke in
and filmed ritual sacrifice, slipped in like a Trojan
fuck em, and whats with Blair discussing orange suits?
for community service, well heres the fuckin truth
what would they rather make the headlines today?
the truth? or criminals lookin like their from Guantanamo bay?
shits played and you dont see it like your speachless
i guess its comfortable herding, with evidence you dont beleive us
well eat a dick then, and stay nested
your lifes comfortable, untill more wars invested
and Russia gets involved, with the middle east
fuck Israel, they suplyin Iran, so fake jews best retreat
fuck the settlements, like spanish villas watchin over
Palestinians dieing, because they lie about Jehova
fucking european swine, you dont belong there
Zionist scum, your truths more cloudy than bong air
why is anti semetism brough up and discussed?
when orthadox Jews PROTEST about zionist mistrust
dealings with hitler, visits to Mussolini
sandwhiched both sides flaming like panini
now i aint saying the Holocaust wasnt terrible
but these fucks use it to take land, bend the truth that aint indelible
you see these german fucks diddnt wanna be assimilated
self rightious cunts, when time came they never hessitated
ran from poland and europe to another peoples land
with the backin of the Brittish, left blood in the sand
and now theyll never be peace, every city blood runs through the streets
gun crime at an all time high, clips gettin emptied
so whats your mental state, do u care about the truth?
or are u happy paying taxes, and not questioning the suits?

Ronin
06-08-2005, 03:28 PM
the second one i wrote to the krs, evidence and lyrics born song on www.tripplecity.com (http://www.tripplecity.com) audio page

BRASSKNUCKLED PAI MEI
06-08-2005, 03:29 PM
That was sick

BRASSKNUCKLED PAI MEI
06-08-2005, 03:31 PM
Yo that first verse is a Immortal Technique Verse!!WTF!!!

Ronin
06-08-2005, 03:38 PM
what u mean?

002
06-08-2005, 04:02 PM
i remember seein a preview of this shit... pure illness. raw shit, no stick up ya ass, nahmsayin. dunno about that Immortal Technique shit. couldn't find a match. peace

BRASSKNUCKLED PAI MEI
06-08-2005, 04:55 PM
what u mean?
subzero took that verse from immortal technique

002
06-08-2005, 04:58 PM
a yo, bigben, you got any link to the Technique verse?

BRASSKNUCKLED PAI MEI
06-08-2005, 05:02 PM
I know its of Revolutionary volume 2

I shoot up ya brains, to heat up your cranium/
Iím sicker than poisonous gas Ďn Depleted Uranium/
A Primal beast, spliced w/ the genes of an Alien/
Just My presence alone, could turn Jesus to Atheist/

I remember listening and saying to myself damn thats some sick ass lines
it may be the track 4th branch

Ronin
06-08-2005, 05:06 PM
i swear, techs never said that shit man

EDIT: i hadnt seen spokens, the rhyme words are similair but thats about it

002
06-08-2005, 05:15 PM
The kingdoms of Africa and Mesopotamia
Machine gunnin' your body with depleated uranium
This is the age of micro chips and titanium
The dark side of the moon and contact with aliens

thats from Point Of No Return, although he used the same words, the references are different...
^^^ that is from Poin of no return, but it's not in SubZero's verse/ wtf?!?

BRASSKNUCKLED PAI MEI
06-08-2005, 05:18 PM
My bad My Bad My apologies!! to SubZero and Ronin

BRASSKNUCKLED PAI MEI
06-08-2005, 05:22 PM
I deleted my posts My Apologies again Thanks for clearing this up Spok3n

FUJIKIMA
06-08-2005, 08:09 PM
Come Hear!

Microphone Fiend
06-08-2005, 09:50 PM
nice work

Ronin
06-10-2005, 03:11 PM
uppin, any old heads like big ben wanna collab on some old school shit like before?

Ronin
06-11-2005, 06:33 AM
what about bigben, james, 002, tuco etc

temple of darts was good like 2 years back but all these new kids came and started ruining it

002
06-11-2005, 06:52 AM
yea. the Temple was insane in the Psykosus dayz. it's good to see bigben still droppin his rhymes.

Ronin
06-21-2005, 06:39 PM
baited breath i waited, her skin smooth and tanned
hormones escalated, in my mind i take her hand
the 8th wonder, dreaming of sand oceans and making plans
but i ran, i diddnt ask cus my heart aint on demand
the plane land, she dont step off that type of shit
my smile hides the facade of my nervous layrnyx
i cant manage, stranded on a foreign planet
should i scam it? and mask emotions like a bandit robin clerks and vanish
fuck it, who am i? whats my position
im akward, lacking ambition in my diction
my face hides my age like an ironic contradiction
for me forgin visions in this corrupt system
of purity. im trippin, i should book that physician
holdin weight like a freight, body and mind collaborate
mental states uncertain of how she'd contemplete i might be great
and we could levetate through stars in a quilted climate

times slayed minutes gone, years pass what am i doing
walkin on glass, the shards of pain further proving
moving to confession stomach clamps, im not interesting
i forgot to mention, how she looks in my invention
mental images, film reel patched into perfect
palpatations bellow as i beat beneath the surface
im hurtin lips twisting, im talking shit
complimants mean nothing, if she dont return it
thinkin bout it, 1 life why'd i wait?
hormones shake my rhymes become words i reiterate
conversatin, flowin spectacular
accuments empower confidence heals the fractures
words come pouring, the statues movement no longer laboured
the smile that lasts a second, is one to be savoured
'the one that got away' i shouldve asked, i will
cus u cant correct the past, but the future aint sealed

just some emotional shit i wrote, goes well with tonedeffs - porcelain beat

:loser: :looking:

BlaK FuRYaN
06-22-2005, 04:18 AM
Damn even tha jagged swordsman got a soft spot......lol

I have to say, it's different... i like some comparrisons you made....

I even got my own version on audio....on a marriage tip....

But anyways i'm still waitin for you to drop them hidden archives....

one

Ronin
06-22-2005, 04:59 AM
hidden archives?

ill probably be writing more lately, in that mind state

BlaK FuRYaN
06-22-2005, 05:20 AM
hidden archives?

ill probably be writing more lately, in that mind state
In tha mind state of whut youv'e jus skripted?

Whut! You in love or suin......?

GuardianOne
06-22-2005, 07:52 AM
Yah that's something we don't usually get from you or most of the others it was a good verse, i hope that's what you were thinking?

Peace
PS: Somethings are better said than done, or other wise (i don't know who said that but just had to put it accross)

Dae Ja Nae
06-22-2005, 08:06 AM
baited breath i waited, her skin smooth and tanned
hormones escalated, in my mind i take her hand
the 8th wonder, dreaming of sand oceans and making plans
but i ran, i diddnt ask cus my heart aint on demand
the plane land, she dont step off that type of shit
my smile hides the facade of my nervous layrnyx
i cant manage, stranded on a foreign planet
should i scam it? and mask emotions like a bandit robin clerks and vanish
fuck it, who am i? whats my position
im akward, lacking ambition in my diction
my face hides my age like an ironic contradiction
for me forgin visions in this corrupt system
of purity. im trippin, i should book that physician
holdin weight like a freight, body and mind collaborate
mental states uncertain of how she'd contemplete i might be great
and we could levetate through stars in a quilted climate

times slayed minutes gone, years pass what am i doing
walkin on glass, the shards of pain further proving
moving to confession stomach clamps, im not interesting
i forgot to mention, how she looks in my invention
mental images, film reel patched into perfect
palpatations bellow as i beat beneath the surface
im hurtin lips twisting, im talking shit
complimants mean nothing, if she dont return it
thinkin bout it, 1 life why'd i wait?
hormones shake my rhymes become words i reiterate
conversatin, flowin spectacular
accuments empower confidence heals the fractures
words come pouring, the statues movement no longer laboured
the smile that lasts a second, is one to be savoured
'the one that got away' i shouldve asked, i will
cus u cant correct the past, but the future aint sealed

just some emotional shit i wrote, goes well with tonedeffs - porcelain beat:loser::looking: Damn even tha jagged swordsman got a soft spot......lol

No doubt ... :) ... this was very well put together Ronin.

Peace

Ronin
06-22-2005, 11:24 AM
i mean in the writing mind state

BRASSKNUCKLED PAI MEI
06-22-2005, 12:21 PM
Nice piece....this s a side you have just revealed keep building!!

002
06-22-2005, 03:47 PM
word. some real shit. 1

Ronin
06-23-2005, 11:33 AM
lol i asked her out today and made a fool of my badself

CHAMONE

shit was like anpoleon dynamite but i have to laugh

Killer Falcon
06-24-2005, 03:26 PM
very good verse. the first one was especially good, i can relate a lot to the content and you've got some interesting rhyme schemes. good to see another style as well. keep up the good work

peace

Ronin
06-27-2005, 01:08 PM
on some brittish political shit, check it out

Ronin:

whats the purpose of electing parties for a nations welfare
when we get virus' in hospitals, seeking health care
and you don't see how those gone private, with the wealth fare
cus we kept in the same boat beliving its dealt fair
so let me kick it, with prod on some English politics
shit you should know, but dont care to admit it
for instance, did u know how the NHS is funded?
the lottery son, poorly paid dr's and nurses
the shits ridiculous, getting old people addicted
gambling with pensions, till their lifes end's been scripted
we got a social divide, and in my life since 85'
Thatcher flooded coal mines, and practically chastised
English industry, thousands of jobs lost, fuck her
and now Rovers gone, steel works lost to Russia
now Blair talks about the E.U like its compulsery
but the single euro government idea cant be sold to me
cus its one step closer to a world controlled by one
a single government, do u foget how the west was won?
from Raegenomics in America, children playing with guns
to companies melting ...from floating they funds
i ain't proud of the empire, a Christian scheme of retribution
but im proud of the industrial revolution
the engineering movement, as we head toward a gridlock
and us taxpayers just keep on workin the shit jobs
fundin a purpose, we have no beleif in
and to find superlatives, you'd be reaching
i'm fleeing, this place is past its best
as the red cross fades on st Georges chest


Greivous Bodily Harm

With a poundin' of feet we march towards Downing Street
Surroundin' police demanding the right to profoundly speak
Our thoughts on global warmin', war and starvin' nations
Racial equality, NHS that waits months before carvin' patients
Scarred by hatred, international alliances make a tandem of evil
We need to take power back, put it in the hands of the people
It's not about swing seats, rigged ballots and catchy slogans
It's about revolutionaries with knowledge like me and Ronin
Unfoldin' plots and conspiracies, ministers get paid the dividends
Ignoring the state of welfare, look at the poverty we livin' in
It's disgraceful, a pack of animals that are devout to war
Passin' Acts that get overlooked in the House of Lords
Ever since the Wind Rush, they just speak galvanised lies
But now the expose has been released for Summer 2005
The 60's was a terrible decade, the mass hatred of blacks
The 70's were no better, now Asians were facin' attacks
The 80's showed no improvement, the BNP was gainin' force
The 90's marked the hip hop generation and racists facin' off
A new millenium of madness, now everybody's out to play the game
The face of power changes but government politics stay the same

Knok-A-Fella
06-27-2005, 01:21 PM
very deep, emotional lyrics on par with some immortal techniques lyrics

fukin true lyrics from tru greats

this peice is wot makes this forum great

Bless, 1

M.I.C Diesel
06-27-2005, 01:39 PM
the shits ridiculous, getting old people addicted
gambling with pensions, till their lifes end's been scripted


Yeah I like that shit - from a next angle, I allways looked at it as a tax raise, couple more tanks & all that, but that shits correct right there aswell man. You know them old folk done been spending all their muller (that they worked their whole life for).

Still ill ridiculous, Good to see some real heads up in here still aswell.

PEACE.

Ronin
06-27-2005, 03:40 PM
woah! mic diesel, my old brummie counter part

whats up man, how u been in the green?

BRASSKNUCKLED PAI MEI
06-27-2005, 04:15 PM
I Like this alot Ronin PEACE


yeah lets crack this foundation i'm not talking invasion educate these nations,
give'em truths to feed like water gives hydration wilderbeast are in migration,
tangled webs weaved the nations spiderwebs woven trapping with temptation...

BlaK FuRYaN
06-27-2005, 05:05 PM
on some brittish political shit, check it out

Ronin:

whats the purpose of electing parties for a nations welfare
when we get virus' in hospitals, seeking health care
and you don't see how those gone private, with the wealth fare
cus we kept in the same boat beliving its dealt fair
so let me kick it, with prod on some English politics
shit you should know, but dont care to admit it
for instance, did u know how the NHS is funded?
the lottery son, poorly paid dr's and nurses
the shits ridiculous, getting old people addicted
gambling with pensions, till their lifes end's been scripted
we got a social divide, and in my life since 85'
Thatcher flooded coal mines, and practically chastised
English industry, thousands of jobs lost, fuck her
and now Rovers gone, steel works lost to Russia
now Blair talks about the E.U like its compulsery
but the single euro government idea cant be sold to me
cus its one step closer to a world controlled by one
a single government, do u foget how the west was won?
from Raegenomics in America, children playing with guns
to companies melting ...from floating they funds
i ain't proud of the empire, a Christian scheme of retribution
but im proud of the industrial revolution
the engineering movement, as we head toward a gridlock
and us taxpayers just keep on workin the shit jobs
fundin a purpose, we have no beleif in
and to find superlatives, you'd be reaching
i'm fleeing, this place is past its best
as the red cross fades on st Georges chest


Greivous Bodily Harm

With a poundin' of feet we march towards Downing Street
Surroundin' police demanding the right to profoundly speak
Our thoughts on global warmin', war and starvin' nations
Racial equality, NHS that waits months before carvin' patients
Scarred by hatred, international alliances make a tandem of evil
We need to take power back, put it in the hands of the people
It's not about swing seats, rigged ballots and catchy slogans
It's about revolutionaries with knowledge like me and Ronin
Unfoldin' plots and conspiracies, ministers get paid the dividends
Ignoring the state of welfare, look at the poverty we livin' in
It's disgraceful, a pack of animals that are devout to war
Passin' Acts that get overlooked in the House of Lords
Ever since the Wind Rush, they just speak galvanised lies
But now the expose has been released for Summer 2005
The 60's was a terrible decade, the mass hatred of blacks
The 70's were no better, now Asians were facin' attacks
The 80's showed no improvement, the BNP was gainin' force
The 90's marked the hip hop generation and racists facin' off
A new millenium of madness, now everybody's out to play the game
The face of power changes but government politics stay the same

kummin from London i here you man loud an clear.....its crooked politrix down here....

This was nicely skripted, i cuddnt have sed it betta myself.....


peace Ronin and GBH

Ronin
06-27-2005, 05:27 PM
peace all, thanks for the feed man

Dae Ja Nae
06-27-2005, 09:01 PM
on some brittish political shit, check it out

Ronin:

whats the purpose of electing parties for a nations welfare
when we get virus' in hospitals, seeking health care
and you don't see how those gone private, with the wealth fare
cus we kept in the same boat beliving its dealt fair
so let me kick it, with prod on some English politics
shit you should know, but dont care to admit it
for instance, did u know how the NHS is funded?
the lottery son, poorly paid dr's and nurses
the shits ridiculous, getting old people addicted
gambling with pensions, till their lifes end's been scripted
we got a social divide, and in my life since 85'
Thatcher flooded coal mines, and practically chastised
English industry, thousands of jobs lost, fuck her
and now Rovers gone, steel works lost to Russia
now Blair talks about the E.U like its compulsery
but the single euro government idea cant be sold to me
cus its one step closer to a world controlled by one
a single government, do u foget how the west was won?
(^^ on some real isht right here!!)
from Raegenomics in America, children playing with guns
to companies melting ...from floating they funds
i ain't proud of the empire, a Christian scheme of retribution
but im proud of the industrial revolution
the engineering movement, as we head toward a gridlock
and us taxpayers just keep on workin the shit jobs
fundin a purpose, we have no beleif in
and to find superlatives, you'd be reaching
i'm fleeing, this place is past its best
as the red cross fades on st Georges chest


Greivous Bodily Harm

With a poundin' of feet we march towards Downing Street
Surroundin' police demanding the right to profoundly speak
Our thoughts on global warmin', war and starvin' nations
Racial equality, NHS that waits months before carvin' patients
Scarred by hatred, international alliances make a tandem of evil
We need to take power back, put it in the hands of the people
It's not about swing seats, rigged ballots and catchy slogans
It's about revolutionaries with knowledge like me and Ronin
Unfoldin' plots and conspiracies, ministers get paid the dividends
Ignoring the state of welfare, look at the poverty we livin' in
It's disgraceful, a pack of animals that are devout to war
Passin' Acts that get overlooked in the House of Lords
Ever since the Wind Rush, they just speak galvanised lies
But now the expose has been released for Summer 2005
The 60's was a terrible decade, the mass hatred of blacks
The 70's were no better, now Asians were facin' attacks
The 80's showed no improvement, the BNP was gainin' force
The 90's marked the hip hop generation and racists facin' off
A new millenium of madness, now everybody's out to play the game
The face of power changes but government politics stay the same

Both of yall dropped some real heavy knowledge ... mind's eye dilation fo' sho'. So many of us are completely oblivious to the hidden evils of this world. Mostly because it's going on right in plain view ... and what better disguise is there, really ... NONE.

There's nothing better than the unveiling of informative jewels, and you have both provided us with that!!


Stay up,
Dae

kell16
06-27-2005, 09:12 PM
hot shit, just fire

one of my favorite joints on this here site 4 real

knowledge droppin niggas Greivous and the king ronin

hot shit, i'm speehless

peace kings

M.I.C Diesel
06-28-2005, 06:09 AM
woah! mic diesel, my old brummie counter part

whats up man, how u been in the green?
Ha Ha!!!

I've been quite splendid man!
The Green has been, well, as wack as the Green allways is!!! Full of stray dogs, & stray kids!
I should have some finished Albums, E.ps around the end of July/August, So I'll arrange to link you in Solihull (The centre of all that is shite!) & pass you a couple of copies, still interested in linking at some point to see if you can spit those scripts.
Stay marvellous, & keep writing!
PEACE

Ronin
06-28-2005, 12:29 PM
peace man

Ronin
06-28-2005, 01:34 PM
Ha Ha!!!

I've been quite splendid man!
The Green has been, well, as wack as the Green allways is!!! Full of stray dogs, & stray kids!
I should have some finished Albums, E.ps around the end of July/August, So I'll arrange to link you in Solihull (The centre of all that is shite!) & pass you a couple of copies, still interested in linking at some point to see if you can spit those scripts.
Stay marvellous, & keep writing!
PEACE
woah missed this, yeah id link you bro, just dont expect me to be some gutter super mc type person, im just an average big tall fat kid from the mean streets of shirley who likes writing

lol

002
06-28-2005, 01:40 PM
cant wait to hear this shit. peace

M.I.C Diesel
06-29-2005, 07:35 AM
woah missed this, yeah id link you bro, just dont expect me to be some gutter super mc type person, im just an average big tall fat kid from the mean streets of shirley who likes writing

lol
As long as you real that's all that counts towards everything..
Too many tupperware emcees out there. You always come across as yourself & someone that scripts from the soul. You might surprise yourself when you spit those lyrics on some audio. I know I always say it, but I will get round to contacting you & arranging a time to reach down. I'll let you hear some of the tracks that we've got towards the album when I link first, to see what you think. It's always good to get feedback from true heads.
PEACE.

Ronin
07-01-2005, 12:54 PM
uppin

Nexodus the Nth Entity
07-01-2005, 01:02 PM
for instance, did u know how the NHS is funded?
the lottery son, poorly paid dr's and nurses
the shits ridiculous, getting old people addicted
gambling with pensions, till their lifes end's been scripted

cus its one step closer to a world controlled by one
a single government, do u foget how the west was won?
from Raegenomics in America, children playing with guns
to companies melting ...from floating they funds

the engineering movement, as we head toward a gridlock
and us taxpayers just keep on workin the shit jobs
fundin a purpose, we have no beleif in
and to find superlatives, you'd be reaching
i'm fleeing, this place is past its best
as the red cross fades on st Georges chest


dope verse, Tech-like, held your own with the content and going for those multis, and crafted a nice piece for us to absorb

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Greivous Bodily Harm

With a poundin' of feet we march towards Downing Street
Surroundin' police demanding the right to profoundly speak
Our thoughts on global warmin', war and starvin' nations
Racial equality, NHS that waits months before carvin' patients

Unfoldin' plots and conspiracies, ministers get paid the dividends
Ignoring the state of welfare, look at the poverty we livin' in
It's disgraceful, a pack of animals that are devout to war
Passin' Acts that get overlooked in the House of Lords

The 60's was a terrible decade, the mass hatred of blacks
The 70's were no better, now Asians were facin' attacks
The 80's showed no improvement, the BNP was gainin' force
The 90's marked the hip hop generation and racists facin' off
A new millenium of madness, now everybody's out to play the game
The face of power changes but government politics stay the same

near flawless....great multis & content, in combination with Ronins each complement the others.....both shoud be proud of this piece....
definitely not to be slept on

Ronin
07-05-2005, 06:26 AM
uppin chamone

Ronin
07-29-2005, 05:51 AM
Sub-Zer0

Iím a cat that be spittiní heat, to rap Iím an Enemy/
Jus My fist alone could crack the statue of Liberty/
Iím crazy, cause I just ainít filling my brain right/
During attacks we running drills at the same time/
They killin Civilians, and piss on they Grave sight/
Blowing us up, strikiní buildings with plane flights/
Expose Ďem like demons, in the middle of day light/
I slash anywhere, that the Tip of my Blade Strikes/
The Swordsman, comminí to Impale you fat fucks/
Iím more electrifying, than Tazors In Bath Tubs/
The system is bloated, like the face of a fat slut/
ĎN your own minds the thing caging you cats up/
The commando, Spit Shells That a smoke u guys/
Breath gas from chemtrails that control ya mind/
Masonic cats, claiming to heed the word of Christ/
But worship the goat heads, N summon Poltergeist/
break down the steel barriers, when I Unload Clips/
Pierce the Labyrinth Walls of the Matrix control grid/
Cut through electro magnetic rays, from phones ní/
Microwaves, N shit to manipulate your Emotion/
I kill you, Letting the metal from my Magnum fly/
N then Iíll Torcher your Soul after the after life/



Ronin:


yo, we strapped with c4 ridin the public service
and when we explode, theyll blame Al Qauda insurgents
cus their the scapegoat for murder, paranioa and ayatollahs
turn the average person to anti islamic street soldiers
fuck holdin heat, ill throw the sun at the government
mine and subs wrath is the highest form of punishment
i eat their lies, and kill their wives for nourishment
till we rise, the dawn skies rain encouragement
we marked men, insurgents pipe boming parliment
meek pollers enjoyed the hareem of harlequins
that slain kelly when he was informed on the weaponry
iraq never had,the basis for war essentially
who measures lifes cost? why arent their deaths equal
we programmed to hate, eye of evil since the first steeple
and the key that frees you, the red pill for the people
is for me to beat you, till their lies are see through
one time for the constitution, show me ya warface
cus with my pen i orchestrate the demise of a war state
locked down, a solo party choose the wests fate
right now is foreplay, just wait till they penetrate

!=MatheMaticS=!
07-29-2005, 05:58 AM
fuck that whole collab was ill, sub that would be some nice shit for audio, tazors in bath tubs fuck that was classic.


ronin spat fire about the shit in the uk at the minute, the concepts were all tight the vocab was sick and the flow was tight overall a very nice drop, i like seeing you guys collab you bring heat


keep up the good work peace

002
07-29-2005, 08:49 AM
this shit would impress Immortal Tech , nahmsayin/...

politics shit, w/ some street shit in it... lovin it. dope rhymes, Ronin... Sub was ill too

feelin this shit. peace

Ronin
07-29-2005, 09:08 AM
thanks people

Killer Falcon
07-29-2005, 09:40 AM
both were tight, there were a lot of good lines in both. sub had some very nice punchlines, ronin had some dope metaphors and imagery. good mix of styles. keep posting this was a nice collab to read

peace

martyr
07-29-2005, 10:28 AM
...nice collabo... good politicing in there... nice flows the both of you... i was feeling it through out... it read real well i felt... i liked how you both touched on the matrix... sub i liked the lines from "....brain right" to "...cats up" made the verse... that was my favourite part... ronin, i liked "...public service" to "...harlequins".... the rest of the verse was good but that part was just hotter... i liked the collab, it was a good read... as with all your stuff ronin, it would sound greatover a beat... keep scripting the both of you... peace...

BRASSKNUCKLED PAI MEI
07-29-2005, 10:53 AM
Sub-Zer0

Iím a cat that be spittiní heat, to rap Iím an Enemy/
Jus My fist alone could crack the statue of Liberty/
Iím crazy, cause I just ainít filling my brain right/
During attacks we running drills at the same time/
They killin Civilians, and piss on they Grave sight/
Blowing us up, strikiní buildings with plane flights/
Expose Ďem like demons, in the middle of day light/
I slash anywhere, that the Tip of my Blade Strikes/ That just flows off the Lips
The Swordsman, comminí to Impale you fat fucks/
Iím more electrifying, than Tazors In Bath Tubs/
The system is bloated, like the face of a fat slut/
ĎN your own minds the thing caging you cats up/ Ha ahahaahha Nice
The commando, Spit Shells That a smoke u guys/
Breath gas from chemtrails that control ya mind/
Masonic cats, claiming to heed the word of Christ/
But worship the goat heads, N summon Poltergeist/
break down the steel barriers, when I Unload Clips/
Pierce the Labyrinth Walls of the Matrix control grid/
Cut through electro magnetic rays, from phones ní/
Microwaves, N shit to manipulate your Emotion/
I kill you, Letting the metal from my Magnum fly/
N then Iíll Torcher your Soul after the after life/



Ronin:


yo, we strapped with c4 ridin the public service
and when we explode, theyll blame Al Qauda insurgents
cus their the scapegoat for murder, paranioa and ayatollahs
turn the average person to anti islamic street soldiers
fuck holdin heat, ill throw the sun at the government
mine and subs wrath is the highest form of punishment
i eat their lies, and kill their wives for nourishment
till we rise, the dawn skies rain encouragement
we marked men, insurgents pipe boming parliment
meek pollers enjoyed the hareem of harlequins Hell yeah
that slain kelly when he was informed on the weaponry
iraq never had,the basis for war essentially
who measures lifes cost? why arent their deaths equal
we programmed to hate, eye of evil since the first steeple
and the key that frees you, the red pill for the people
is for me to beat you, till their lies are see through
one time for the constitution, show me ya warface
cus with my pen i orchestrate the demise of a war state
locked down, a solo party choose the wests fate
right now is foreplay, just wait till they penetrate

Encore!! Loved it to all the rest on this site...Step ya game up

Ronin
07-29-2005, 11:05 AM
thanks people, appreciate the feedback

peace

Definitive X
07-29-2005, 11:05 AM
Incredible...the British conspiracy theories are very little-known to the U.S. population...keep it up...

Tell
Everyone
About
Crimes of
Hate...that's the true meaning of TEACH...

100pr00f
07-29-2005, 11:08 AM
pretty nice..one of the best so far..i woulk like to see another

Ronin
07-31-2005, 03:19 AM
thanks, uppin

ElusiveFugitive
07-31-2005, 09:35 PM
Good collaboration, this piece is hot! I really liked how you intertwine the street style verse by Sub Zero with Ronins political flow. Especially liked Ronins feel, rhyme pattern and once again the message, but both were dope. Keep the ink flowing

ONE LOVE

Ronin
08-03-2005, 07:24 AM
back to the top faggits

Dae Ja Nae
08-04-2005, 01:21 AM
back to the top faggits :yes:


COT DAMN!!! ... I knew this was gonna be a blazer just on the strength of Ronin, but Sub Zero, you laid some tight shit down too. Peace and props to you both!!

Ronin
08-04-2005, 07:52 AM
thanks man, appreciate the feed, anymore?

PsYkOsUs
08-04-2005, 10:33 AM
very solid... flows were onpoint, lyrics were strong:

Blowing us up, strikiní buildings with plane flights/
Expose Ďem like demons, in the middle of day light/

mine and subs wrath is the highest form of punishment
i eat their lies, and kill their wives for nourishment
till we rise, the dawn skies rain encouragement
we marked men, insurgents pipe boming parliment
meek pollers enjoyed the hareem of harlequins

those are the lines i liked the most... your styles are so similar that it makes for a flawless collabo... again very solid... keep doin' what you do...

PEACE

PSY

Ronin
08-06-2005, 06:25 PM
peace psy, any more?

BlaK FuRYaN
08-06-2005, 06:32 PM
I definately can relate to whut you spittin right there for real....and im currently writing my own version of views on those subjects concerning the bomings in brent.....
shits to close to home....

nice work

Ronin
08-19-2005, 04:30 PM
wrote this to the 8 steps to perfection instru while back, peace *(:)

from the sand dunes in iraq, red stained and bloody
to the bassline on tracks, i smash and stay gully
my talents lovely, from a mind thats mad muddy
ive killed so many rhymes its beyond funny
on some mafia shit, ransom notes in my scripts
details to fam members im keepin in crypts
bring ya lyrics, cus son you wont be missed
when i pierce your brain with your own nose bridge
my dark dialect, only bettered in introspect
all penman respect, got more connections than the internet
my intellect? unrivalled, its a sin to flex
fuck it, i leave kids mental channels interplexed
nothings perfect, but my flows the golden chalice
and those that searched it, felt the wrath of my malice
pains innacurate, when im blastin domes and maimin habitat
and smash discs in backs with kings divine lariat
we ride chariots and toss bolts at the savage path
the titan was graphed to cast his wrath on faggot cats
the message has, lost its place in flurried tasks
mind scapes grasped plucked and placed in a Pandoras flask


the gift of the gab illin when inkin on papyrus
writing so tyrants cant subdue my inner iris
i sit in silence, and meditate with eyes closed
and imagine violence, when our lifestyles de-throned
the media age, cancer domes from mobile phones
and cancer homes in ghettos from heros packin chrome
old women sit alone, now their fam is fully grown
and see cities fall, cus' man is bully prone
taking sour tones with careers and money prospects
we're deeper than that, toes touch the base of lochness
the cop threat is daunting, eye scans and finger prints
id cards, THINK, they move agressive when you flinch
whats perfection, what defines my ideology?
my auto biography stinks of dead pan comedy
and im too wrapped up in 3d technology
to realise each change is the same fuckin monotony
a world where peace sounds like an anomalie
and we dont care when civilians die horribly
i just might commit seppakku to lie horizontaly
honorably while my soul is one with the astronomy

J.T.S.
08-19-2005, 04:46 PM
Flowed like water, got me ready to wrote!

Father N Dangerous
08-19-2005, 04:50 PM
the message has, lost its place in flurried tasks
mind scapes grasped plucked and placed in a Pandoras flask

^genius

BlaK FuRYaN
08-19-2005, 05:25 PM
wrote this to the 8 steps to perfection instru while back, peace *(:)

from the sand dunes in iraq, red stained and bloody
to the bassline on tracks, i smash and stay gully
(intro neatly placed, makes me wanna read on)
my talents lovely, from a mind thats mad muddy
ive killed so many rhymes its beyond funny
on some mafia shit, ransom notes in my scripts
details to fam members im keepin in crypts
bring ya lyrics, cus son you wont be missed
when i pierce your brain with your own nose bridge
my dark dialect, only bettered in introspect
all penman respect, got more connections than the internet (lol...)
my intellect? unrivalled, its a sin to flex
fuck it, i leave kids mental channels interplexed
nothings perfect, but my flows the golden chalice
and those that searched it, felt the wrath of my malice
pains innacurate, when im blastin domes and maimin habitat
and smash discs in backs with kings divine lariat (liked this line)

we ride chariots and toss bolts at the savage path
the titan was graphed to cast his wrath on faggot cats
(i dont think the end of these two line went well together)

the message has, lost its place in flurried tasks
mind scapes grasped plucked and placed in a Pandoras flask


the gift of the gab illin when inkin on papyrus
writing so tyrants cant subdue my inner iris (this line was nice)
i sit in silence, and meditate with eyes closed
and imagine violence, when our lifestyles de-throned
the media age, cancer domes from mobile phones
and cancer homes in ghettos from heros packin chrome
old women sit alone, now their fam is fully grown
and see cities fall, cus' man is bully prone
taking sour tones with careers and money prospects
we're deeper than that, toes touch the base of lochness
the cop threat is daunting, eye scans and finger prints
id cards, THINK, they move agressive when you flinch (yep, i can vouch for that...!)

whats perfection, what defines my ideology?
my auto biography stinks of dead pan comedy(lol....)
and im too wrapped up in 3d technology
to realise each change is the same fuckin monotony
a world where peace sounds like an anomalie
and we dont care when civilians die horribly
i just might commit seppakku to lie horizontaly
honorably while my soul is one with the astronomy
simple ending...definately recieved the message fru this script....i think this was put together nicely....it had fluidity in its reading......but um still bedda then you........j/k

nice work peace

Ronin
08-20-2005, 07:45 AM
thanks

GuardianOne
08-21-2005, 04:50 AM
Its quite an interesting verse. Although some parts seemed to lose the flow but you captured it well again.

Peace
PS: Keep posting

Ronin
08-21-2005, 06:34 AM
yeah 1st verse is better, second is patchy i kinda lost interest with it

Ronin
08-22-2005, 05:53 AM
uppin

Racailla
08-22-2005, 02:01 PM
Nice one - some words you use might never been used in rap before ;)
word up

BRASSKNUCKLED PAI MEI
08-22-2005, 04:26 PM
Damn ronin thjatwas a nice verse I like the content..PEaCE

Ronin
08-25-2005, 02:22 PM
thanks for the feedback

noel411
08-25-2005, 04:35 PM
I think you showed me the first half of this before? Really nice shit, both verses. Aside from about 2-3 bars, it didn't fall off at all. Nice piece.

Life-Giving-Sword
08-25-2005, 05:58 PM
flowed nice...rhymes tight

TUCO
08-26-2005, 11:27 AM
Its quite an interesting verse. Although some parts seemed to lose the flow but you captured it well again.

Peace
PS: Keep posting
no homo

Ronin
08-26-2005, 04:44 PM
peace, thanks

i know its patchy in some bars

rofl at the tcm animation

002
08-28-2005, 04:17 AM
ive killed so many rhymes its beyond funny

lovely line... the way i see it...

i sit in silence, and meditate with eyes closed
and imagine violence, when our lifestyles de-throned

i just might commit seppakku to lie horizontaly

ONE

Ronin
08-28-2005, 04:43 AM
thanks bro

Ronin
10-14-2005, 08:30 AM
in the nuclear dawn when the skies are torn
a new hatred was born from man to slay all
when civil liberty falls, our minds will mourn
cus the devils scorn crushes immaculate thought
a world of pawns, herded by sheppards
with demononic calls projected in a message
a war fought, middle eastern land was severred
our impestilence pays reverence forever
and political relevance means nothing
when the machine payrolls its own mal-function
our bias contorts war faught in news reports
marine corps slain in vain by rebel force
my sword is forged from the souls of the wicked
applaud the hoard force and your fueling the gimmick
the sinner kneels timid, asking god for forgiveness
but he desserted when arm construction was finished
mans limit reached, when the streets errupt
politics is like music, the scenes corrupt
facists for love, war crimes dont deduct
econamy crash and an asylum flood
born of bad blood the younger brothers building
haunted in the jux and taken for the pilgrims
exposing the corrosion, land mass left tainted
crimson tides break a maps grass scarlet painted

feedback appreciated, peace

BlaK FuRYaN
10-14-2005, 02:23 PM
in the nuclear dawn when the skies are torn
a new hatred was born from man to slay all
when civil liberty falls, our minds will mourn
cus the devils scorn crushes immaculate thought
a world of pawns, herded by sheppards
with demononic calls projected in a message
a war fought, middle eastern land was severred
our impestilence pays reverence forever
and political relevance means nothing
when the machine payrolls its own mal-function
our bias contorts war faught in news reports
marine corps slain in vain by rebel force
my sword is forged from the souls of the wicked
applaud the hoard force and your fueling the gimmick
the sinner kneels timid, asking god for forgiveness
but he desserted when arm construction was finished
mans limit reached, when the streets errupt
politics is like music, the scenes corrupt
facists for love, war crimes dont deduct
econamy crash and an asylum flood
born of bad blood the younger brothers building
haunted in the jux and taken for the pilgrims
exposing the corrosion, land mass left tainted
crimson tides break a maps grass scarlet painted

feedback appreciated, peace
i had to quote the whole nine cause i felt this skript had allot of releveance to our current affairs....
I felt this was crafted nice to give a brief insight into certain running the bemused ppl are unaware of of....

Thanx

jjh_38
10-15-2005, 03:02 AM
yea.. i couldn't really find one particular line to quote either... not that that's a bad thing... every line jus kinda hads its place... i liked how your rhyme scheme read... the internals really tied it together and the entire verse had a nice movement to it... read well.. not crazy ass bullshit flow.. but still somewhat unpredictable, u kno... i thought it was pretty good overall.. keep em comin.... peace

K.E.G.
10-15-2005, 07:08 AM
inspired by your threads

I repent but I dred the day that commeth overtop the sky the returning rocks plummit
Drummer boy stuttered i have no gift to bring
Just the ending i march to offer back the constant kingdom
Holding the globe and I'm down with double u i predict sequel to W two
So now I gotta drum rhythms while running
A talent only for incredible crews
making front page of the news Nubian rebels against a majority of Jews
As home turf battles blew off the brothers were louting the booze.
George Walker Bush accused but he got away clean passed
Acme shrapnol going off like Looney Toons
On the wake of something exsplosive all rise to the end of you.
Get blind during World War 3 leave nothing left like Einstein concieved
And step over sticks and stones and piles of bloody bones the global end of you and me.

Ronin
10-15-2005, 09:16 AM
thanks man

hopefully ill have more soon

Dae Ja Nae
10-15-2005, 10:19 AM
in the nuclear dawn when the skies are torn
a new hatred was born from man to slay all
when civil liberty falls, our minds will mourn
cus the devils scorn crushes immaculate thought
a world of pawns, herded by sheppards
with demononic calls projected in a message
a war fought, middle eastern land was severred
our impestilence pays reverence forever
and political relevance means nothing
when the machine payrolls its own mal-function
our bias contorts war faught in news reports
marine corps slain in vain by rebel force
my sword is forged from the souls of the wicked
applaud the hoard force and your fueling the gimmick
the sinner kneels timid, asking god for forgiveness
but he desserted when arm construction was finished
mans limit reached, when the streets errupt
politics is like music, the scenes corrupt
facists for love, war crimes dont deduct
econamy crash and an asylum flood
born of bad blood the younger brothers building
haunted in the jux and taken for the pilgrims
exposing the corrosion, land mass left tainted
crimson tides break a maps grass scarlet painted

feedback appreciated, peace
Ronin, everything you write is always so on point lyrically. You seem to pull out the stops every time. This whole piece was a powerful display of imagery, but the highlighted lines actually made my hair stand on end. I love to read words that are influenced by real life issues, and you always manage to satisfy the reader in me by doing just that.

This really hit home ...

Peace

Ronin
10-15-2005, 01:08 PM
thanks alot for the feedback jae

Nexodus the Nth Entity
10-15-2005, 02:14 PM
a world of pawns, herded by sheppards
with demononic calls projected in a message
....
our bias contorts war faught in news reports
marine corps slain in vain by rebel force
my sword is forged from the souls of the wicked
applaud the hoard force and your fueling the gimmick
the sinner kneels timid, asking god for forgiveness
but he desserted when arm construction was finished
mans limit reached, when the streets errupt
politics is like music, the scenes corrupt
facists for love, war crimes dont deduct
econamy crash and an asylum flood
both parts stood out to me...
obviously the latter more so, it just felt seemless and did a nice job as such....the simple analogy to politics and music was solid...as was the comment about the soliders slain in vain....kept the references current and general so all can relate, making it a nice piece for all to relish...


exposing the corrosion, land mass left tainted
crimson tides break a maps grass scarlet painted
nice finisher, the image is what counts....can't deny that

keep it relevant
-- Nth --

noel411
10-15-2005, 11:09 PM
Although it is a pity that you've been born into a environment of pale, pasty faced devils, I really do enjoy your writing a lot. Your shit always flows so smooth. The whole structure, and rhyme schemes and all always seem to fit so well together. Plus you always have a worthwile message. Such a shame you've been cursed with that god awful accent, because your verses would convert so smoothly to audio.

Ronin
10-16-2005, 06:25 AM
english accent>>austrailian accent

we have sick mcs over here and we beat u at cricket

thanks for the feed though

noel411
10-16-2005, 05:53 PM
The Aussie accent is awesome. You love it and you know it.

It's sad that you devils over there actually find it worthy of note when you beat us in sports. For us beating you guys is just another boring day at the office. At least you did cause us all to hang our heads in utter shame for a day, by beating us at something.

Ronin
11-04-2005, 12:54 PM
we always been better at shit like football than you which is most important

noel411
11-04-2005, 08:15 PM
Well if you want your people to be represented as sissy little pansies who lie on the ground crying hysterically every time somebody gives their padded shins a little tap, then I guess you could use soccer as your claim to fame. Unless you meant real football, in which case you surely must be joking?

ElusiveFugitive
11-13-2005, 10:31 PM
in the nuclear dawn when the skies are torn
a new hatred was born from man to slay all
when civil liberty falls, our minds will mourn
cus the devils scorn crushes immaculate thought
a world of pawns, herded by sheppards
with demononic calls projected in a message
a war fought, middle eastern land was severred
our impestilence pays reverence forever
and political relevance means nothing
when the machine payrolls its own mal-function
our bias contorts war faught in news reports
marine corps slain in vain by rebel force
my sword is forged from the souls of the wicked
applaud the hoard force and your fueling the gimmick
the sinner kneels timid, asking god for forgiveness
but he desserted when arm construction was finished
mans limit reached, when the streets errupt
politics is like music, the scenes corrupt
facists for love, war crimes dont deduct
econamy crash and an asylum flood
born of bad blood the younger brothers building
haunted in the jux and taken for the pilgrims
exposing the corrosion, land mass left tainted
crimson tides break a maps grass scarlet painted

Ronin...wicked verse brother. Every line was brilliantly placed and seamlessly flowed to the next.. content was stirring and emotionally charged and the rhyme schemes kept me guessing. Great read

ONE LOVE

Ronin
02-03-2006, 07:01 PM
add your best shit and still amount to less
cus my punches over most heads, like valuevs
battlin mes like mensa, an intelligence test
always dope, pesscimists dont imagine less
need wings to join, the level im on though
drop more mcs than kobe drops threes on Torronto
heats on flow, so youll never win the come back
ill employ surgeons to cut off ya nutsack
your girls dirty, pussy got mud flaps
lead to her boudwa with fuckin cum tracks
i know you wack, pullin bum raps out ya ass crack
you couldnt drop dope shit after hash flap jacks
back smacked, see you in hell later
you aint matter, in my particle accelerator
left scratched and cut, crossin the fader
cross my path, then ill battle you son, like lord vadar
you germs in the cut, im like anti septic
ill rock you, 1-2 and make you spasm like epileptics


some quick shit i wrote the other day, expect to see some real good stuff like the old days ill write soon

Paper_Soulja
02-04-2006, 08:36 AM
ayo

Ronin think his lyrics are runnin things, but in reality he aint nothing big
I own da punchez like i was gunnin kingz, leave'n ronin with bigger holez in his chest then onion rings!!

36chambers
02-04-2006, 08:46 AM
^^^this aint the battle thread bro...

Paper_Soulja
02-04-2006, 08:56 AM
oh... in that being said...

add your best shit and still amount to less
cus my punches over most heads, like valuevs
battlin mes like mensa, an intelligence test
always dope, pesscimists dont imagine less
need wings to join, the level im on though
drop more mcs than kobe drops threes on Torronto
heats on flow, so youll never win the come back
ill employ surgeons to cut off ya nutsack
your girls dirty, pussy got mud flaps
lead to her boudwa with fuckin cum tracks
i know you wack, pullin bum raps out ya ass crack
you couldnt drop dope shit after hash flap jacks
back smacked, see you in hell later
you aint matter, in my particle accelerator
left scratched and cut, crossin the fader
cross my path, then ill battle you son, like lord vadar
you germs in the cut, im like anti septic
ill rock you, 1-2 and make you spasm like epileptics

this was a pretty decent verse, your barz were short at first, then grew longer n expanded as you kept going, which was really your only flaw in the concept of this verse. other then that your wordplay n vocab was on point n the concept was above par. keep blessin

BRASSKNUCKLED PAI MEI
02-04-2006, 11:51 AM
Peace Ronin & White N Dangerous

Ronin
02-04-2006, 02:48 PM
chea,just threw some quick punchlines together to drop something

whats up ben anyway?

Ronin
02-05-2006, 07:40 PM
ps cracker and dangerous diddnt even rhyme properly

:confused:

Ronin
02-05-2006, 08:05 PM
un finished obviously by the abrupt ending of the second verse

its written to the tragedy khadafi beat - hood

disillussioned by a false premice
got me censored like right wing islamic clerics
move left till the wounds in septic
the past is nicer, so i revert to metric
scribe eccentric diabolic dialect
ageless angles increase capacity in introspect
the jugganaught, outta hell with a pitchfork
projectin war in my collective thought
rose up, and got my prose cut
forged by blacksmiths and buffed up....to rough mugs
till the words can cut, erasing life
the street sinner is iller without grabbin a mic
and the flows tight, followin the crows flight
over land once serene and now it grows plight
and mouve light pans over the populus
scanning for rebelion and blocking its oesophagus
and if these words seem monotonous...
its cus apathy presents fortune to honour us
cock-blockin serpents to end blood lines
and cut ties so Rothchilds cant front lies
run syths over the necks of evil aryans
reduced us to nothing, like Roman proletarians
and i know the knowledge we learned is scarin em
cus they fear rebellion in this media aquiarium

cut the bullsit version of political correctness
its racist and un-ethical
cus when you forget race and accept flesh
they loose their hold on out stretched tentacles
methodical in movement i aim to soothe heads
who spoon fed, and consume till they fruit-less
i call em the doomed dregs
cus my scorn alones enough.... to burn through flesh

BlaK FuRYaN
02-06-2006, 08:11 AM
This verse is decent...little gems here and there still...

I totally agree with the 2nd verse in regards to rasicm...look forward to the completed version.

peace

Ronin
02-06-2006, 11:28 AM
what up black

i heard your audio and its fuckin nice

100pr00f
02-06-2006, 12:01 PM
looks good

u should try and get a mic and record some shit


peace

Ronin
02-06-2006, 04:35 PM
thanks

hopefully will one day :cool:

BlaK FuRYaN
02-08-2006, 10:03 AM
what up black

i heard your audio and its fuckin nice

peace Ronin, rispek for takin time out to peep me out too...

Still waitin on an audio from you too bruh!

ElusiveFugitive
02-14-2006, 10:11 PM
disillussioned by a false premice
got me censored like right wing islamic clerics
move left till the wounds in septic
the past is nicer, so i revert to metric
scribe eccentric diabolic dialect
ageless angles increase capacity in introspect
the jugganaught, outta hell with a pitchfork
projectin war in my collective thought
rose up, and got my prose cut
forged by blacksmiths and buffed up....to rough mugs
till the words can cut, erasing life
the street sinner is iller without grabbin a mic
and the flows tight, followin the crows flight
over land once serene and now it grows plight
and mouve light pans over the populus
scanning for rebelion and blocking its oesophagus
and if these words seem monotonous...
its cus apathy presents fortune to honour us
cock-blockin serpents to end blood lines
and cut ties so Rothchilds cant front lies
run syths over the necks of evil aryans
reduced us to nothing, like Roman proletarians
and i know the knowledge we learned is scarin em
cus they fear rebellion in this media aquiarium

cut the bullsit version of political correctness
its racist and un-ethical
cus when you forget race and accept flesh
they loose their hold on out stretched tentacles
methodical in movement i aim to soothe heads
who spoon fed, and consume till they fruit-less
i call em the doomed dregs
cus my scorn alones enough.... to burn through flesh


Solid verse Ronin, good to see you again bro. I'm always impressed with your writing, this is no exception. Would def like to hear you on audio. Keep the ink flowin'

ONE LOVE

BRASSKNUCKLED PAI MEI
03-04-2006, 03:36 PM
heres ya personal thread