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tha god concept
03-23-2006, 05:51 AM
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1 verse

5 votes

tha god concept
03-23-2006, 06:08 AM
yo erics getting married and im his best man
cause his wifee said his sex life is waaaaaaay to bland
he needs a hand and a job

watch concept beat his face blacker than rob's
phat lip tongue whipped slobs

im waay to scary yo
fill up eric wit more holes than a box of cheerios
watch me lick up cereal bowls
rhymes hotter than coals
waxin friends n foes
on another level thats unknown

hiphop cyclone 10 x's meaner
my after math is that of 10,000 katrinas
turnin men into ballerinas
downin O.E by the litres

and by the way....
i juss called erics ass and his style got played
like the 06 olympics
juss cause man evolved from apes dont mean he can talk sum gimp shit
a whimp bitch....stool pieogon fuckin herb
imma mafia hit man clippin feathers off birds

dont say a word...like your a mute
i use 2 give emcees respect and you was among the few
now your jew
without the big nose
clown ass nigga without the big shoes n clothes

leave you froze
cause you no im so ill
my rhymes be extacy like the buzz from pillz

buck you like deals
a deer in the head lights
i get gifted and lifetd when the sky's light

blinds me....

takin over 200 cops to find me
im grimee
like sum blue n red guts be slimmee
rewind me
so you can hear the whole tape

and check out how eric unseen got verbally raped


1muthafuckinhunid!!!!!!!!!!!!1goddammit!!!!!

tha god concept
03-23-2006, 06:28 AM
daam.....i killed that 1 yo lol

Visionz
03-23-2006, 11:53 PM
no doubt nice shit homie, just checked it out after watchin the NCAA. Check for the darts AAaaaAhhh....

Visionz
03-24-2006, 01:18 AM
The buzzer beater with a heater
straight outta Austin, Texas
National syndication with the way that I wreck this
Verbal blast to the solar plexis
Better wake up from those dreams of you holdin my erectis
That's on some homo shit and this dick is not for homo lips
You're better off blocking that shit out like a total eclispe
Your OE sips can't fuck with the blunts and spliffs, Fuck a Riff
Raft, battle Cat, tryin to make friends half-way across the map,
You should be like E.T. and phone your ass home, I don't
fuck with those I've never known outta my own timezone
That ain't a deadly poem, that 's a style washed up like sediment
You even type with a speech impediment, grasping for pocket
lint where their used to be cash, cause reality gotta hold of
you and whipped ur ass, that life flashes fast and what you
don't grasp wont last, that why married man for you is only
a thing of the past
I get beserk when its time to slang dirt
Knew you was pussy by the way u squirt
What work? I ain't get no new packages,
Talk is for amateurs, but I won't expect
you to know, You babble when you
talk just like you flow.
Concerted efforts locked in like a jigsaw puzzle
I grab a muzzle to silence those barks
Murderous from out the dark with poison darts
To freeze hearts of those lesser emcees
Break out the X-ray vision but you can't see me
Realize to who you steppin, concealed weapon
I carry with me at all times, cause I pull back
and blast with one of these rhymes and it's the
end of time by design, cause I murder with mine
And fuck it' you can all get in line and get crushed
like orange rinds, Watch it as I drink the juice to get
loose, I got more heart than the lil' red caboose
I go moose huntin on those frontin in northern exposures
Killin a little bastard child so your family receives closure
While the voltures feast off your rotten carcus
I leave your soul left shook like a pair of maraccas
I'm the number one headknocka, decapitatin' w/ helicopters
Sittin on a rocker, you don't belong underneath my porch
City kid will still be a coon's ass to get torched
Deadly aim with an assassin's rifle, I fire on you cat's
that trifle, You not the Eiffel, I tower while you fall.
Droppin Concepts like the Berlin wall.

tha god concept
03-24-2006, 03:59 AM
dope battle homie!!!


votes...

Visionz
03-24-2006, 09:17 PM
if you readin this and u battle in here, please understand that votin is part of the culture.......please dare to contribute (but read the shit out loud before you do), peace

EZA Da Infamous
03-25-2006, 09:18 AM
The buzzer beater with a heater
straight outta Austin, Texas
National syndication with the way that I wreck this
Verbal blast to the solar plexis
Better wake up from those dreams of you holdin my erectis
That's on some homo shit and this dick is not for homo lips
You're better off blocking that shit out like a total eclispe
Your OE sips can't fuck with the blunts and spliffs, Fuck a Riff
Raft, battle Cat, tryin to make friends half-way across the map,
You should be like E.T. and phone your ass home, I don't
fuck with those I've never known outta my own timezone
That ain't a deadly poem, that 's a style washed up like sediment
You even type with a speech impediment, grasping for pocket
lint where their used to be cash, cause reality gotta hold of
you and whipped ur ass, that life flashes fast and what you
don't grasp wont last, that why married man for you is only
a thing of the past
I get beserk when its time to slang dirt
Knew you was pussy by the way u squirt
What work? I ain't get no new packages,
Talk is for amateurs, but I won't expect
you to know, You babble when you
talk just like you flow.
Concerted efforts locked in like a jigsaw puzzle
I grab a muzzle to silence those barks
Murderous from out the dark with poison darts
To freeze hearts of those lesser emcees
Break out the X-ray vision but you can't see me
Realize to who you steppin, concealed weapon
I carry with me at all times, cause I pull back
and blast with one of these rhymes and it's the
end of time by design, cause I murder with mine
And fuck it' you can all get in line and get crushed
like orange rinds, Watch it as I drink the juice to get
loose, I got more heart than the lil' red caboose
I go moose huntin on those frontin in northern exposures
Killin a little bastard child so your family receives closure
While the voltures feast off your rotten carcus
I leave your soul left shook like a pair of maraccas
I'm the number one headknocka, decapitatin' w/ helicopters
Sittin on a rocker, you don't belong underneath my porch
City kid will still be a coon's ass to get torched
Deadly aim with an assassin's rifle, I fire on you cat's
that trifle, You not the Eiffel, I tower while you fall.
Droppin Concepts like the Berlin wall.


im a vote for eric unseen cos his verse was overall better and had better punches

Ironlungz
03-25-2006, 02:06 PM
EU vs TGC
flow 8 vs 5
wordplay 8 vs 6
creativity 7 vs 8
vocabulary 7 vs 6
punches 8 vs 7

TOTAL 38 vs 32

Vote: Eric Unseen

BRASSKNUCKLED PAI MEI
03-26-2006, 11:21 PM
Ironlungz I remember you from way back when you first started posting here, So I will ask you tp please use the outline for voting just copy and paste the catagories from the Liquid Swords sticky thanks...

PeacecaeP

Visionz
03-27-2006, 11:09 PM
bump, bump

Eversick666
04-01-2006, 01:25 PM
yo, my vote is tha god concept for sure,if eric wanna write poetry send the shit to ya momz!!!!
peace



eversick666

Visionz
04-01-2006, 04:17 PM
^did you read the shit? that ain't poety, it's called character assassination, but fuck it, btw where your battle verses rookie?

Eversick666
04-01-2006, 04:58 PM
ya i did read your shit your quite dope just givin my man props,just enterd the site like last week.the poetry shit just joshin will set up a battle one time soon. eversick666

ilzPotent
04-08-2006, 12:50 PM
Excellent battle gents....:clap:

GC vs EU - 1-5
flow 4 vs 5
wordplay 4 vs 4
creativity 4 vs 4
vocabulary 3 vs 5
punches 4 vs 5

not for nuthin but:

"The buzzer beater with a heater
straight outta Austin, Texas
National syndication with the way that I wreck this
Verbal blast to the solar plexis
Better wake up from those dreams of you holdin my erectis
That's on some homo shit and this dick is not for homo lips
You're better off blocking that shit out like a total eclispe
Your OE sips can't fuck with the blunts and spliffs, Fuck a Riff
Raft, battle Cat, tryin to make friends half-way across the map,
You should be like E.T. and phone your ass home, I don't
fuck with those I've never known outta my own timezone
That ain't a deadly poem, that 's a style washed up like sediment
You even type with a speech impediment, grasping for pocket"

was ridiculous....

Vote Eric

T-ribe
04-09-2006, 12:25 AM
God C vs Eric U
flow 4 - 5
wordplay 5 - 5
creativity 4 - 4
vocabulary 3 - 5
punches 4 - 4


Unseen held dat shit down from tha get. At no point did he take his foot off the gas. Concept had like a stop and go vrs, I thought it could have been more consistant. Way to wreck it on both parts.

Visionz
04-09-2006, 05:02 AM
4-1, much love for both the votes and the feedback

maestro wooz
04-09-2006, 02:19 PM
flow God Concept: 6 Eric Unseen: 9
wordplay 7 8
creativity 8 7
vocabulary 7 8
punches 7 9

unseen takes this, the verse was just one nice flow, concept had some nices punches but it fell off a little at times

Visionz
04-09-2006, 04:26 PM
5-1, thats a wrap.......peace to Concept and to everyone who voted. The votes and the feedback is much appreciated. peace

Luther Large
04-09-2006, 04:31 PM
fuck i just spent my whole time rading this to find out it's already over

so i'ma give my vote anywayz

eric took this 1 hands down

flow-erics was almost flawless
punches-eric worded his way better
vocab-def eric
creativty-eric
wordplay-eric

cat won in all aspects of the battle this was a really dope verse from u


peace.......