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06-27-2005, 10:05 PM
MURDEROUS......VERSE.......FROM........THE........ ..FRONT......LINES
SERVIN........YOU...........THIS.............CURSE ...........ON...........TIME
AND...........ARENT...........MINE...........ALLRI GHT........YEAH.......THEY
SWERVIN..........THAT ............OF............RHYMIN............SO.... .....CLEVERS'
MY..............GOOD...........DIAMONDS.........AR E...........FOR..........EVER
AFTER YOU READ THESE ROWS GO BACK AND READ THE COLUMNS,
JUST A STYLE IM WORKIN ON FOR COMPLEXITY
PEACE
Dae Ja Nae
06-27-2005, 10:15 PM
MURDEROUS......VERSE.......FROM........THE........ ..FRONT......LINES
SERVIN........YOU...........THIS.............CURSE ...........ON...........TIME
AND...........ARENT...........MINE...........ALLRI GHT........YEAH.......THEY
SWERVIN..........THAT ............OF............RHYMIN............SO.... .....CLEVERS'
MY..............GOOD...........DIAMONDS.........AR E...........FOR..........EVER
AFTER YOU READ THESE ROWS GO BACK AND READ THE COLUMNS,
JUST A STYLE IM WORKIN ON FOR COMPLEXITY
PEACE
MURDEROUS......VERSE.......FROM........THE........ ..FRONT......LINES
SERVIN........YOU...........THIS.............CURSE ...........ON...........TIME
AND...........ARENT...........MINE...........ALLRI GHT........YEAH.......THEY
SWERVIN..........THAT ............OF............RHYMIN............SO.... .....CLEVERS'
MY..............GOOD...........DIAMONDS.........AR E...........FOR..........EVER
MURDEROUS SERVIN AND SWERVIN MY VERSE ...
That was really cool :)
Peace
Dae Ja Nae
06-27-2005, 10:18 PM
I don't know why the org. post didn't line up correctly, but you can see the clolums well when you quote the post :? ... go figure
GuardianOne
06-28-2005, 02:43 AM
Nice imagination putting the verse in such a style (double meaning). But doesn't really make sense doing that (i mean the creativity-in content).But creatively its nice ,good thought there!!!!!!!!!!!
Peace
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