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ON POINT
06-27-2005, 10:05 PM
MURDEROUS......VERSE.......FROM........THE........ ..FRONT......LINES

SERVIN........YOU...........THIS.............CURSE ...........ON...........TIME

AND...........ARENT...........MINE...........ALLRI GHT........YEAH.......THEY

SWERVIN..........THAT ............OF............RHYMIN............SO.... .....CLEVERS'

MY..............GOOD...........DIAMONDS.........AR E...........FOR..........EVER



AFTER YOU READ THESE ROWS GO BACK AND READ THE COLUMNS,
JUST A STYLE IM WORKIN ON FOR COMPLEXITY

PEACE

Dae Ja Nae
06-27-2005, 10:15 PM
MURDEROUS......VERSE.......FROM........THE........ ..FRONT......LINES

SERVIN........YOU...........THIS.............CURSE ...........ON...........TIME

AND...........ARENT...........MINE...........ALLRI GHT........YEAH.......THEY

SWERVIN..........THAT ............OF............RHYMIN............SO.... .....CLEVERS'

MY..............GOOD...........DIAMONDS.........AR E...........FOR..........EVER






AFTER YOU READ THESE ROWS GO BACK AND READ THE COLUMNS,
JUST A STYLE IM WORKIN ON FOR COMPLEXITY

PEACE








MURDEROUS......VERSE.......FROM........THE........ ..FRONT......LINES

SERVIN........YOU...........THIS.............CURSE ...........ON...........TIME

AND...........ARENT...........MINE...........ALLRI GHT........YEAH.......THEY

SWERVIN..........THAT ............OF............RHYMIN............SO.... .....CLEVERS'

MY..............GOOD...........DIAMONDS.........AR E...........FOR..........EVER

MURDEROUS SERVIN AND SWERVIN MY VERSE ...

That was really cool :)

Peace

Dae Ja Nae
06-27-2005, 10:18 PM
I don't know why the org. post didn't line up correctly, but you can see the clolums well when you quote the post :? ... go figure

GuardianOne
06-28-2005, 02:43 AM
Nice imagination putting the verse in such a style (double meaning). But doesn't really make sense doing that (i mean the creativity-in content).But creatively its nice ,good thought there!!!!!!!!!!!

Peace