Metaphors

[Claustrofobic]

I’m like a pistol when I whistle
A Desert Eagle when I talk
Creating victims with my tongue in the dark
I’m like a pit bull when I bark
In the dark dwelling through the park
Satisfaction slaying more animals ever seen on Noah’s Arch


I’m like an author when I write
Flowing ink when I’m outta sight
Thinking in the middle of night
Blessing paper like Jesus Christ
I’m like the sun rising in the east
Ferocious like a fucking beast
Tracing down emcees and make ‘em meet my muthafucking teeth

I’m like a sword chopping of your head
Won’t be long before ya dead
Now analyze what I said
Before you was bleeding on your bed
With that body detached from your head
I’m like the ayatollah when I think
Needing medicine in my drink
Cause I’m sicka than HIV
Affecting the shit around me
Viruses spreading over the globe through biochemical TV

[Claustrofobic]

What yall thinks?

[TUCO]

ehhhhh

[MASTER PAI MEI]

Its creative

[Claustrofobic]

I’m like a big bag of weed getting high of my music
Burning through my songs too addictive too abuse it
I’m like an arson setting your thoughts on fire with my flamethrower
Your mind was playing games till’ it got played out now ya game over
I’m like a criminal letting of rhymes unable to comprehend
Violating the law, sipping henney’s and getting bent
I’m like a needle injected in your veins
Like blood rushing through your brains
Now you feelin’ me when I’m telling you I ain’t playin’ no muthafuckin’ games
I’m like King Midas with the golden touch
Turning your ass lifeless for talking too muthafuckin’ much
Now I got you in my clutch goin’ dutch on your ass
Smoking up your body usin’ your ash instead of grass
I recite my thoughts like Shakespeare
Shifting my shit through eight’ gear
Excelling speed limits in my mind while I break fear
I’m like a bomber dropping verses
Minimal with curses
Though aggressive with the style’s giving overtime to nurses
I’m like Michael Jordan when I jam
The number 1 is what I am
Breaking through you’re eardrums like a water current through your dam
Rushing through my hours like that dude Chris Tucker
No intention of slowing down for a part-time sucker
That’s why I’m deadly with this microphone, you stupid motherfucker
Giving your ass goose bumps like a nasty stimulation
Making you confused about the situation that ya facin'
Got your ass worried about your daughters I'll be tracin'

[Claustrofobic]

hows about that? betta?

[Sirkulayshun]

craaazzzy flo!!! ya flow is tight. an it aint really metaphors ur usin, their like similies but its real creative. yea the 2nd 1 is much better than the 1st but the 1st was still aight...keep it up

[Claustrofobic]

'preciate the love and the critic, ill post some more of this shit up in this mutha later on

[Raptica]

dawg u tite but lik they sed aint really metaphors. sik flow tho

[Claustrofobic]

I’m essential like your hart chambers similar to this dart banger
My rhyme’s keep more suspense to the end that you’re average cliffhanger
I’m like a Ghost Dog cause I would kill you for sho sho
Stayin’ on the lo’ tho’, knowledge I want mo’ mo’
Equalizing my chi-energy and balance in your dojo
Fuckin’ up the spines of you and that other homo
I’m like a perfectionist swingin’ swords with precision
Strikin’ vital nerves of bodyparts you’ll be missin’
You was usin’ em yesterday against peeps you were dissin’
Sittin’ in a wheelchair maybe now you will listen
I’m falling down on you motherfucka’s like an avalanche
Makin’ sure I’m deadly enough to disperse a second chance
Just realized I killed BOTH you motherfucka’s so I’mma do a SECOND dance

[Claustrofobic]

I'm I improving?

[Raptica]

hell ya bey ur rhymes r gettin better each time man.

keep it up

[Claustrofobic]

I’m shining down on earth like sunrays
Poetic heat in your face, rhyming with amazing grace
But deadly with a motherfucking sniper in my suitcase
My style’s switch like a chameleon
Asian to Brazilian
Unsuitable for children like a painting in your building
Unique like Ason aka the Ol’ Dirty Bastard
No father to my style’s and lyrics I have mastered
Captivated by the knowledge and the wisdom I have captured
Rhyming deadlier than bullets laying MC’s down in caskets
It’s over like a buzzer beater with Shaq breaking baskets….

[Claustrofobic]

Thats a wrap

[na diel]

sick wit it...peace