View Full Version : Metaphors

03-30-2006, 11:17 AM
I知 like a pistol when I whistle
A Desert Eagle when I talk
Creating victims with my tongue in the dark
I知 like a pit bull when I bark
In the dark dwelling through the park
Satisfaction slaying more animals ever seen on Noah痴 Arch

I知 like an author when I write
Flowing ink when I知 outta sight
Thinking in the middle of night
Blessing paper like Jesus Christ
I知 like the sun rising in the east
Ferocious like a fucking beast
Tracing down emcees and make 粗m meet my muthafucking teeth

I知 like a sword chopping of your head
Won稚 be long before ya dead
Now analyze what I said
Before you was bleeding on your bed
With that body detached from your head
I知 like the ayatollah when I think
Needing medicine in my drink
Cause I知 sicka than HIV
Affecting the shit around me
Viruses spreading over the globe through biochemical TV

03-30-2006, 11:18 AM
What yall thinks?

03-30-2006, 12:29 PM

03-30-2006, 02:40 PM
Its creative

03-30-2006, 03:32 PM
I知 like a big bag of weed getting high of my music
Burning through my songs too addictive too abuse it
I知 like an arson setting your thoughts on fire with my flamethrower
Your mind was playing games till it got played out now ya game over
I知 like a criminal letting of rhymes unable to comprehend
Violating the law, sipping henney痴 and getting bent
I知 like a needle injected in your veins
Like blood rushing through your brains
Now you feelin me when I知 telling you I ain稚 playin no muthafuckin games
I知 like King Midas with the golden touch
Turning your ass lifeless for talking too muthafuckin much
Now I got you in my clutch goin dutch on your ass
Smoking up your body usin your ash instead of grass
I recite my thoughts like Shakespeare
Shifting my shit through eight gear
Excelling speed limits in my mind while I break fear
I知 like a bomber dropping verses
Minimal with curses
Though aggressive with the style痴 giving overtime to nurses
I知 like Michael Jordan when I jam
The number 1 is what I am
Breaking through you池e eardrums like a water current through your dam
Rushing through my hours like that dude Chris Tucker
No intention of slowing down for a part-time sucker
That痴 why I知 deadly with this microphone, you stupid motherfucker
Giving your ass goose bumps like a nasty stimulation
Making you confused about the situation that ya facin'
Got your ass worried about your daughters I'll be tracin'

03-30-2006, 03:33 PM
hows about that? betta?

03-31-2006, 01:27 AM
craaazzzy flo!!! ya flow is tight. an it aint really metaphors ur usin, their like similies but its real creative. yea the 2nd 1 is much better than the 1st but the 1st was still aight...keep it up

03-31-2006, 12:03 PM
'preciate the love and the critic, ill post some more of this shit up in this mutha later on

04-01-2006, 02:54 AM
dawg u tite but lik they sed aint really metaphors. sik flow tho

04-01-2006, 08:23 AM
I’m essential like your hart chambers similar to this dart banger
My rhyme’s keep more suspense to the end that you’re average cliffhanger
I’m like a Ghost Dog cause I would kill you for sho sho
Stayin’ on the lo’ tho’, knowledge I want mo’ mo’
Equalizing my chi-energy and balance in your dojo
Fuckin’ up the spines of you and that other homo
I’m like a perfectionist swingin’ swords with precision
Strikin’ vital nerves of bodyparts you’ll be missin’
You was usin’ em yesterday against peeps you were dissin’
Sittin’ in a wheelchair maybe now you will listen
I’m falling down on you motherfucka’s like an avalanche
Makin’ sure I’m deadly enough to disperse a second chance
Just realized I killed BOTH you motherfucka’s so I’mma do a SECOND dance

04-01-2006, 08:25 AM
I'm I improving?

04-01-2006, 02:21 PM
hell ya bey ur rhymes r gettin better each time man.

keep it up

04-04-2006, 01:41 PM
I’m shining down on earth like sunrays
Poetic heat in your face, rhyming with amazing grace
But deadly with a motherfucking sniper in my suitcase
My style’s switch like a chameleon
Asian to Brazilian
Unsuitable for children like a painting in your building
Unique like Ason aka the Ol’ Dirty Bastard
No father to my style’s and lyrics I have mastered
Captivated by the knowledge and the wisdom I have captured
Rhyming deadlier than bullets laying MC’s down in caskets
It’s over like a buzzer beater with Shaq breaking baskets….

04-04-2006, 01:46 PM
Thats a wrap

na diel
04-05-2006, 05:03 PM
sick wit it...peace