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VernakuLa
04-02-2006, 10:19 PM
Allright we gonna have a battle for the ages

1 round 15-20 lines

first to five
3-0 is a ko

no hating and or dickriding or crew votes

NO EKSSTATIX

u accepted u go first

oDoUoSoKo
04-03-2006, 04:19 PM
lol u were lookin so u go first!!!, and eks is no more

Vernakular
04-14-2006, 02:53 PM
Yo whos dusk, dont know, hes six people at once tryna 'fight back'
His 'fronts' are breakin worse than the military fightin in Iraq
Who battles themselves just to get a point added to their reputation
You juggle dicks in your mouth, to say you ur ill and feel a burnin' sensation
In medical terms homie you got an indentity crisis complex
i be switchin names u b switchin personas like your in a fuckin contest
To beat yourself, you need help, just try to heed my warning
You pussy shit, you'll be bleedin your sheets in the mornin
Im facin juve time for smokin weed, you sweatin a playground detention
Your treated like a teacher cuz when u 'drop knowledge' no1 pays attention
Class dismissed poser, its over, your intels leakin...cracked
Not meanin a pheen i mean, even if u was 'the frog' u couldnt sell 'smack'
You should wear a bib, homie, you act like a baby
maybe hes crazy shoutin, "peeps vote for me dawn, bala, save me!"
I be bustin thick armor, your raps are slapstick meanin amatuer humor
Girls laugh at your dick point and be like "is that a tumor?"
You should change your name to Pluto, cuz you just aint hot
The shit outta my ass packs more heat than u or any of your freinds got,
Dont take this shit the wrong way, i dont mean your cold as in u kill ppl real quick
Im sayin your styles frozen in time, outta date, like a car with a gear shift




http://www.cereal.com/Breakfast-Cereals/smacks.jpg heres the smack i was talkin bout ment a drug or anything involving eksstatix

lucky im savin good shit for concept

TeknicelStylez
04-14-2006, 05:03 PM
roflamo exposed

Vernakular
04-14-2006, 05:45 PM
fine dude i guess ill change it but i do doubt that shrap was the first person to come up with that dude

oDoUoSoKo
04-14-2006, 08:40 PM
how many fuckin times i tol u to stop sayin the n word
ya style is old as fuck and ima knock out ya dentures
jus to ensure you dont talk as any user name
bruise your frame, chew on the 22 tool and loose your brain
whos the dame that bites lines and blows while he writes rhymes
and has as many losses as i have wins in my lifetime
u tried once to step to my set and were left intensive care
wettin ya bed, dawns win had u "pissed" pullin out ur extensioned hair
attention, where is the genius in masta that he claims exist
he must've left when he recieved the threat i gave, his names was switched
but he remained a bitch, basketball freak im'in night and day
"hey dusk wanna do audio? ill get my mic right away"
"FUCK no, AND stop sayin nigga", and he did so
genuis allah, vernakula cappah, masta, what a skitso
he'd apologize afterwards like a pussy, how sweet
now the only thing between me and that stank bitch is cow meat (beef, duh)
now beat..it, the clik u talk about so harshly
u once wanted to join but got ejected like a car seat
speakin bittin speeches when spoken spoke and told u cut it out
ya mom is suckin for ur nex brother ima nut it out

oDoUoSoKo
04-14-2006, 08:42 PM
dont change shit..stik to ya guns

oDoUoSoKo
04-14-2006, 08:56 PM
vote time yall, VOTE

TeknicelStylez
04-14-2006, 09:13 PM
2 character assasinations in a row

tu tiene un problemo mang

My vote in all areas goes to dusk... Real personal, Superb Flow, Multi Packed, Nice Range of Words, just an all around 'wiping the floor with kids' type of verse.

oDoUoSoKo
04-14-2006, 09:25 PM
gracia muchacho, la le dije a este maldito cabron que me deje qieto

1-0

Jimmy Focus
04-14-2006, 09:35 PM
ima go wit dusk

oDoUoSoKo
04-14-2006, 09:37 PM
lol much respect rap, but u gotta explain alot if u want that to count

Jimmy Focus
04-14-2006, 09:40 PM
aight i go wit dusk cause he used more effective punchlines against his opponent

Eddy
04-14-2006, 09:42 PM
hmm.. nice battle, and u might have to use the stencil vote thing in the guidelines rapsody

TeknicelStylez
04-14-2006, 09:45 PM
gracia muchacho, la le dije a este maldito cabron que me deje qieto

1-0

de nada hombre

Visionz
04-14-2006, 09:49 PM
Dusk all around had the better verse, harder punches, better lines. wittier, as well. Grim keep workin on those punches, again they seem like jabs at best. You take way too long to get to the point. Gotta learn that less is more. And if that wasn't a bite, how would you know who Spoken was referrin' to?

Eddy
04-14-2006, 09:51 PM
word up

i would vote...but cant

oDoUoSoKo
04-14-2006, 09:56 PM
2-0 until rap clarifiys his vote, unless ben thinks its ok, cuz he be tryin to g me latley...lol

Jimmy Focus
04-14-2006, 10:06 PM
sry i had to do sumthin right quik. ok ima use the way of voting like it says in the guidelines

flow=5
wordplay=5
creativity=5
vocabulary=4
punches=5

now is that a vote that can be counted

Vernakular
04-14-2006, 10:25 PM
fuck it im goin back to my old style

im losin to much this way trynna b creative n shit

oDoUoSoKo
04-14-2006, 10:28 PM
fuk yah, 3-0 THIS BATTLE IS DONE

but you can post feedback until its closed

Vernakular
04-14-2006, 10:29 PM
Dusk all around had the better verse, harder punches, better lines. wittier, as well. Grim keep workin on those punches, again they seem like jabs at best. You take way too long to get to the point. Gotta learn that less is more. And if that wasn't a bite, how would you know who Spoken was referrin' to?

becuz i didnt check it until he told me

the original line was

its a wrap not like saran

my line

fraid to be rapped up like saran would

MaShPG
04-14-2006, 10:30 PM
Vernak:

flow 7
wordplay 5
creativity 6
vocabulary 6
punches 8


Dusk

flow 8
wordplay 7
creativity 8
vocabulary 8
punches 7


Vernak: 32
Dusk: 40

VOTE: DUSK

Redskull
04-15-2006, 07:51 PM
Got His Ass Whooped

Ssc-2
Masta Penis-0