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CREEPY FOLLOWS
04-03-2006, 09:05 PM
Sabinnchung vs. Mister Wooz {8 man elimination process}

first to five wins
3-0 is a K.O.
no dickrider votes
24 maximum bars 2 rounds

sabinnchung
04-04-2006, 03:58 PM
aight guess i'm in after i said i'd drop for LL....here i go....soarking it off

keystyle

leave heads hangin on the horizon, i'm like Sylvester Stallone
faggit invested in hoe's but questioned his dough//1
call this kid Mr. Scruff McGruff the way this bitch don't rock
stitches from bats, wishin to drop a rags to riches rap//2
bitch couldn't make my dames run if he looked like Spud McKenzie
run or get the m16, lyrically murder Mister Wooz, i'm like love notes b//3
the poetic giant, flowing like titans cuz the gods be birthing from my brain
hurting your name n rep like i'm cutting yo vein (vain), neck n traits//4
said you was sick, i'll admit that, you caught the germ like that R Kelly teen
shank kids as i spank pricks wit da pistol, burns all over your realness feen//5
ayo, the anthrax i give all over you lookin like a spot pimple
i pop kids like bubbles, only reason we call you to ball cuz you drop your dribbles//6
seriously yo, how you supposed to eat cats wearing a bib
how you heard around the nation when your face resembles that of a chinese rib//7
verbally assault with the tongue like fucked up intercoms
think yo ass is hot, i'm sippin on yak while blasting with dons//8
how you supposed to post when my sickness brings down the boards
this ain't no science class but yo spits juss sizzles my core//9
you as hot as candle lit dinners, i'm rawer then doggy style
me n ya girl get wild, only time you buck-le is on the recieving end of the style//10
can i get something funky for you, hell your whole crew
i shoot up whole librarie's, like the Antichrist i live, you get to choose//11
shit, i'm more rugged then 50 Cents girls pussy
boy, something like 8 minutes to get this done, bets its better then yo writtens, geez//12

sabinnchung
04-04-2006, 07:35 PM
hurry up yo

i want to get the 2nd round done tonite

and i saw you on before

Luther Large
04-04-2006, 08:05 PM
ya'll should let me take mister wooz's spot in the battle^O^

sabinnchung
04-04-2006, 08:14 PM
ya'll should let me take mister wooz's spot in the battle^O^

i saw your battle wit CREEPY

take his place if you want

but i know for me its ;(

good night, i'm out till tomorrow.

oh yea, ask him first of course

ilzPotent
04-05-2006, 01:20 AM
mister wooz battles? coO

maestro wooz
04-08-2006, 05:58 AM
oh shit sorry i completley forgot i signed up for this. Ill drop something tommorow, my bad

sabinnchung
04-08-2006, 01:46 PM
oh shit sorry i completley forgot i signed up for this. Ill drop something tommorow, my bad

i hope you post

mister wooz
04-09-2006, 03:29 AM
aight guess i'm in after i said i'd drop for LL....here i go....soarking it off

keystyle

leave heads hangin on the horizon, i'm like Sylvester Stallone
faggit invested in hoe's but questioned his dough//1
call this kid Mr. Scruff McGruff the way this bitch don't rock
stitches from bats, wishin to drop a rags to riches rap//2
bitch couldn't make my dames run if he looked like Spud McKenzie
run or get the m16, lyrically murder Mister Wooz, i'm like love notes b//3
the poetic giant, flowing like titans cuz the gods be birthing from my brain
hurting your name n rep like i'm cutting yo vein (vain), neck n traits//4
said you was sick, i'll admit that, you caught the germ like that R Kelly teen
shank kids as i spank pricks wit da pistol, burns all over your realness feen//5
ayo, the anthrax i give all over you lookin like a spot pimple
i pop kids like bubbles, only reason we call you to ball cuz you drop your dribbles//6
seriously yo, how you supposed to eat cats wearing a bib
how you heard around the nation when your face resembles that of a chinese rib//7
verbally assault with the tongue like fucked up intercoms
think yo ass is hot, i'm sippin on yak while blasting with dons//8
how you supposed to post when my sickness brings down the boards
this ain't no science class but yo spits juss sizzles my core//9
you as hot as candle lit dinners, i'm rawer then doggy style
me n ya girl get wild, only time you buck-le is on the recieving end of the style//10
can i get something funky for you, hell your whole crew
i shoot up whole librarie's, like the Antichrist i live, you get to choose//11
shit, i'm more rugged then 50 Cents girls pussy
boy, something like 8 minutes to get this done, bets its better then yo writtens, geez//12

yo, i spit written raps
thats effective like kitten naps
when i touch the mic, a flash that obliterates ya cateracts
lyrically unquestionable
a thirst for mc's thats unquenchable
see your reppin conneticut
im not impressed, not a little bit
cause i constantly keep the blunt lit
while you constantlly lack wit
in your weak rhymes i had to read 7 times
cause they made about as much sense as shittin green dimes
and im knew to this rapping scene
so far its as scary as the brittish queen
the only guy i can follow is eric unseen
and as they say "protect ya neck"
cause maestro's about to be "one of the best yet"

TeknicelStylez
04-09-2006, 03:41 AM
You on that fresh start wooz???

Good luck mang, so far so good. Keep at it you'll be rapping like a pro in no time.

maestro wooz
04-09-2006, 05:03 AM
haha thanks man, smoking can do wonders with your imagination.

and theres no difference between the accounts, somethings fucked up with my cookies and sometimes i log in with this account or the "mister wooz" one and i dont notice it thats all it is

Visionz
04-09-2006, 06:42 AM
thanks for the shout out homie. Your lines is especially nice if you just startin writin'. Keep at it, you def. got a knack for it.

sabinnchung
04-09-2006, 12:00 PM
i'll get back at you when i'm smoked

fuck it, i'll do it sober

edit = verse

my shits ill enuff to name my ink like bic
since you get shit right i shove gats in your face like an illiterate
i stay strapped like a fannie pac
your nursery rymes need a nannie back
just keep it very cool or i'll get very rude
my ryhme technique varies dude
so watch your back like my bed
you spit like a faggit, queer better yet
take you to the chop shop or bring your soul to the damned
we all see yo shit like your ass is scanned
its a free for all on his face like poppin a cherry tonight
man put up a fight or get layed to rest by this guy
i know you don't like me god
i know you like my drops
i stay on the low like a midget
you ask so i give it
i shine at the night like the low n high tides
need to get clean, i freshen up like tide
i know you my number one fan, better yet feen
lusting to smack this bastard around like a motherfuckers wet dream
meet the youngest in charge
beat a batstards face in when my knuckles go on the charge
man i break your dollars all cuz i want a change
all cuz your face is pretty n i want it to break

sabinnchung
04-09-2006, 12:40 PM
am i better sober or drunk?

mister wooz
04-09-2006, 03:04 PM
alright, seriously who you tryin to kid
when you eat, what do you still wear a bib?
come in here acting like you know how to rap
but your missing skill, coherence, and tact
and they amount to less then even ya girlfriend's rack
'n im sorry i had to give you a verbal smack
but you suck, sorry its a fact
and around my way my name is preceded with an M R
cause i get respect you cant buy with a charge card
while your dad still wont let you listen to hip hop
the biggest decision i got
is bong or blunt?
"Umm, mister wooz would you like to sit in the front"
cause when i ride its as v.i.p
cause im something you only get on d.v.d
but dont watch me, WATCH T.V

maestro wooz
04-09-2006, 03:12 PM
http://www.fashionwatch.com/newsarchive/59fifty/camron.jpg

sabinnchung
04-09-2006, 04:35 PM
aight, vote i guess

what does that pic mean?

i think i got beat :ouch:

Visionz
04-09-2006, 06:54 PM
^ I think that you did too, in the first verse, especially, I often can't make sense of what you're sayin', being wordy doesn't neccessarily make a verse better, in every case Wooz was just direct and to the point and I think he took this battle because of it. You gotta work at knowin what you're trying to say and then conveyin' properly. peace to both emcess

sabinnchung
04-09-2006, 07:06 PM
^ I think that you did too, in the first verse, especially, I often can't make sense of what you're sayin', being wordy doesn't neccessarily make a verse better, in every case Wooz was just direct and to the point and I think he took this battle because of it. You gotta work at knowin what you're trying to say and then conveyin' properly. peace to both emcess

aight, cool. did i at least make my 2nd verse better? nevermind, i just read it (i don't really pay attention to my shit)

0-1

more VOTES

BRASSKNUCKLED PAI MEI
04-09-2006, 07:15 PM
flow - mw
wordplay - mw
creativity - sc
vocabulary - sc
punches - mw

3/2
VOTE
mister maestro wooz

Visionz
04-09-2006, 07:48 PM
aight, cool. did i at least make my 2nd verse better? nevermind, i just read it (i don't really pay attention to my shit) I thought ya second verse was an improvement over the first

maestro wooz
04-10-2006, 01:10 AM
3-0

good looks on the votes guys, lets get some more feedback, negative specifically

VernakuLa
04-10-2006, 01:25 AM
yo wooz lemme ask you something...r u new to rapping?

if u r ur better than i was when i started, try saying more you know

try to add punches, mutlies, and or rhyme schemes

1

maestro wooz
04-10-2006, 03:48 AM
ha nah im not really "new" to rapping. I mean ive been writing joke raps with friends and when fucked up weve been freestylying for years but only in the last month or so have i been writing shit and taking it a tad bit serious. Ah fuck it who am i kidding, im new.

CREEPY FOLLOWS
04-11-2006, 01:45 AM
yo, just checkin up on the battle and the votes are 1-0 in Wooz's favour, use the method that Ben used and your votes'll be counted

maestro wooz
04-11-2006, 11:40 PM
OFFICIAL votes please

Visionz
04-12-2006, 12:27 AM
I think that you did too, in the first verse, especially, I often can't make sense of what you're sayin', being wordy doesn't neccessarily make a verse better, in every case Wooz was just more direct and to the point and I think he took this battle because of it. You gotta work at knowin what you're trying to say and then conveyin' properly. peace to both emcess Civil Disobediance means refusing to take part in what you don't believe in, Wooz took this but fuck the points voting system. That's for dudes that don't know what to look for when voting. That shit don't apply to me. peace

BRASSKNUCKLED PAI MEI
04-14-2006, 12:56 AM
Civil Disobediance means refusing to take part in what you don't believe in, Wooz took this but fuck the points voting system. That's for dudes that don't know what to look for when voting. That shit don't apply to me. peace
I agree Eric is sound when voting!!

CREEPY FOLLOWS
04-15-2006, 08:17 PM
that's true, I'm not feeling the vote system either but I'm just trying to make it somewhat fair to everybody in the tourny, so let's get some votes in

CREEPY FOLLOWS
04-18-2006, 04:45 AM
fuck it, shit's taking too long so I'm a cast a vote even though I didn't want to 'cause I set this tourny up, but here it is:

flow-wooz
creativity-wooz
vocab-wooz
punches-S
wordplay-S

Mister Wooz gets my vote, but Sabinnchung keep workin on your flow, you got mad potential, I like it but it's kind of hard to make out what you say sometimes so I had to go with Wooz on this one, 2-0 is the vote count at this point

hazidus hitman
04-18-2006, 05:05 AM
for me sabinnchung took the battle.
his punches were phat and fairly direct.
wooz has the meanest vocabulary and twistin words up, but the flow was just realy repetative imo.

this was a phat line from sabinn "leave heads hangin on the horizon, i'm like Sylvester Stallone
faggit invested in hoe's but questioned his dough"

so my vote is: sabinnchung

good shit from both. keep it up

CREEPY FOLLOWS
04-18-2006, 06:22 AM
yo Hitman use the voting method how I used it to vote if you want Sabinnchung to receive his vote or else it won't count

hazidus hitman
04-18-2006, 06:44 AM
yo Hitman use the voting method how I used it to vote if you want Sabinnchung to receive his vote or else it won't count

sweet bro


flow-s
creativity-s
vocab-w
punches-s
wordplay-both! each was unique styles and very tallented

vote: sabin

CREEPY FOLLOWS
04-18-2006, 05:06 PM
2-1 in Wooz's favour, it's a race to 5 now

Burnz
04-18-2006, 06:25 PM
I vote Wooz

Burnz
04-18-2006, 06:28 PM
to make sure my vote counts
Creativity - Wooz
Flow - Wooz
Vocab - Wooz
Punches - wooz
wordplay - wooz

CREEPY FOLLOWS
04-18-2006, 07:26 PM
3-1 wooz's favour

CREEPY FOLLOWS
04-20-2006, 06:07 PM
race to five, let's get these votes so we can advance

CREEPY FOLLOWS
04-24-2006, 04:18 AM
let's get these fuckin votes in

Classic
04-24-2006, 04:29 PM
Sabbinchung's verses :
leave heads hangin on the horizon, i'm like Sylvester Stallone
faggit invested in hoe's but questioned his dough//1
(Decent opener here.)
call this kid Mr. Scruff McGruff the way this bitch don't rock
stitches from bats, wishin to drop a rags to riches rap//2
(No end-rhyme here. Messed up the flow. Half-decent here.)
bitch couldn't make my dames run if he looked like Spud McKenzie
run or get the m16, lyrically murder Mister Wooz, i'm like love notes b//3
(WTF was this end. Forced rhyme at the end with "b". Decent punch tough.)
the poetic giant, flowing like titans cuz the gods be birthing from my brain
hurting your name n rep like i'm cutting yo vein (vain), neck n traits//4
(Traits was a bad end-rhyme here. Multis nice though. Decent punch.)
said you was sick, i'll admit that, you caught the germ like that R Kelly teen
shank kids as i spank pricks wit da pistol, burns all over your realness feen//5
(Decent punch here.)
ayo, the anthrax i give all over you lookin like a spot pimple
i pop kids like bubbles, only reason we call you to ball cuz you drop your dribbles//6
(Good punch here.)
seriously yo, how you supposed to eat cats wearing a bib
how you heard around the nation when your face resembles that of a chinese rib//7
(Didn't quite get the end here. Decent punch.)
verbally assault with the tongue like fucked up intercoms
think yo ass is hot, i'm sippin on yak while blasting with dons//8
(Last line is braggin' on yourself, this is a battle. Not a "braggle". Half-decent here.)
how you supposed to post when my sickness brings down the boards
this ain't no science class but yo spits juss sizzles my core//9
(Could be mistaken for somethin' else here. Decent punch though.)
you as hot as candle lit dinners, i'm rawer then doggy style
me n ya girl get wild, only time you buck-le is on the recieving end of the style//10
(Decent punch here. Don't like the "I sex'd your girl" concepts. They're old too me. You can get more creative.)
can i get something funky for you, hell your whole crew
i shoot up whole librarie's, like the Antichrist i live, you get to choose//11
(This bar wasn't good at all. Bad bar.)
shit, i'm more rugged then 50 Cents girls pussy
boy, something like 8 minutes to get this done, bets its better then yo writtens, geez//12
(A forced rhyme at the end. A poorly executed one too. Bad closer.)



my shits ill enuff to name my ink like bic
since you get shit right i shove gats in your face like an illiterate
(This really made no sense. You'll shove a gat in his face cause he gets it right? Bad bar.)
i stay strapped like a fannie pac
your nursery rymes need a nannie back
(First line is braggin'. Half-decent punch ere.)
just keep it very cool or i'll get very rude
my ryhme technique varies dude
(More bragging. Poorly executed bar. Bad bar.)
so watch your back like my bed
you spit like a faggit, queer better yet
(More played concepts. "Your a fag". No originality here. Bad bar.)
take you to the chop shop or bring your soul to the damned
we all see yo shit like your ass is scanned
(Okay, you're elevatin' here. Decent punch.)
its a free for all on his face like poppin a cherry tonight
man put up a fight or get layed to rest by this guy
(You just dropped it again. Half-decent at best here.)
i know you don't like me god
i know you like my drops
(Bad bar.)
i stay on the low like a midget
you ask so i give it
(Bad bar, again.)
i shine at the night like the low n high tides
need to get clean, i freshen up like tide
(More braggin. You're not battling.)
i know you my number one fan, better yet feen
lusting to smack this bastard around like a motherfuckers wet dream
(Half-decent punch here. Climbin' the ladder again.)
meet the youngest in charge
beat a batstards face in when my knuckles go on the charge
(...Poorly executed. End-lining the same word doesn't work unless executed good. Bad bar.)
man i break your dollars all cuz i want a change
all cuz your face is pretty n i want it to break
(This didn't rhyme. Bolded part = mistake you for being gay. Bad closer.)




yo, i spit written raps
thats effective like kitten naps
(*YAWN* Bragging.)
when i touch the mic, a flash that obliterates ya cateracts
(This rhymed with nothing else. Why is this here?)
lyrically unquestionable
a thirst for mc's thats unquenchable
(You're not battling here.)
see your reppin conneticut
im not impressed, not a little bit
(Not real punch here. Bad.)
cause i constantly keep the blunt lit
while you constantlly lack wit
(Bragging. No real punch at end either.)
in your weak rhymes i had to read 7 times
cause they made about as much sense as shittin green dimes
(OKAY WE FINALLY START GETTING SOMEWHERE! Decent punch.)
and im knew to this rapping scene
so far its as scary as the brittish queen
the only guy i can follow is eric unseen
(Bragging. This is NOT BATTLING.)
and as they say "protect ya neck"
cause maestro's about to be "one of the best yet"
(Again, you're not battling here.)


alright, seriously who you tryin to kid
when you eat, what do you still wear a bib?
(Poor flip here. Bad execution. Flippin' and feedin' won't even count it in a battle for me. And you did it bad here.)
come in here acting like you know how to rap
but your missing skill, coherence, and tact
(Meh, half-decent at best here.)
and they amount to less then even ya girlfriend's rack
'n im sorry i had to give you a verbal smack
but you suck, sorry its a fact
(Played concept. Half-decent at best here.)
and around my way my name is preceded with an M R
cause i get respect you cant buy with a charge card
(Bragging. Half-decent at best with last line.)
while your dad still wont let you listen to hip hop
the biggest decision i got
(Bad bar. Poorly executed.)
is bong or blunt?
"Umm, mister wooz would you like to sit in the front"
(Poor execution. Didn't like.)
cause when i ride its as v.i.p
cause im something you only get on d.v.d
but dont watch me, WATCH T.V
(Bragging bragging bragging.)

Okay, overall. This battle was NOT GOOD.
Didn't impress me at all.
But in all truthness, Sabin brought it harder.
Harder punches more consistent.
BRAGGING DOES NOT CUT IT IN BATTLES!
IT'S ONLY TALK ON YOURSELF, BATTLING MEANS DISSING YOUR OPPONENT.
I know my breakdown is strict, but it's just how I do.
Y'all just need to ELEVATE!!!!!!
Keep battlin', it's the only way to get better.
Get creative wit punches, throw in some originality.
Stop usin' played concepts, etc.
Make those battles a "Classic".

Vote - Sabin

CREEPY FOLLOWS
04-24-2006, 06:54 PM
I know it's cheesy and all, but if you want your vote to count, just use the voting method above

hazidus hitman
04-24-2006, 07:20 PM
I know it's cheesy and all, but if you want your vote to count, just use the voting method above

haha bro, classic's voting method is hardout...probably takes him 30 minutes just to write up that shit AND it points out exactly what hes voting for even more so that the other style...that vote should count like that.
if voters do their lame ass "i vote @$%$# cos he was better" sorta shit then fair enuff...not bagging dude, just expressing
peace

andrem
04-24-2006, 08:31 PM
Flow - wooz
wordplay - tie
creativity - sabin
vocab - sabin
punches - wooz

wooz took this battle because sabin's flow was off. wooz was concise and stuck to a solid flow but had a weak ending to his second verse. but if both of these verses were spit, sabin's would sound alot weaker. wooz won with a good flow that guided powerful punches.

Vote-wooz

maestro wooz
04-24-2006, 08:37 PM
good looks on the votes and comments fellers

Classic
04-24-2006, 09:10 PM
Flow - wooz
wordplay - tie
creativity - sabin
vocab - sabin
punches - wooz

wooz took this battle because sabin's flow was off. wooz was concise and stuck to a solid flow but had a weak ending to his second verse. but if both of these verses were spit, sabin's would sound alot weaker. wooz won with a good flow that guided powerful punches.

Vote-wooz

I'd hate to break it to you.
But please, copy and paste THREE punches in woo's verse where he actually aims the punches at Sabin.
Let alone be powerful and guided.

andrem
04-24-2006, 10:57 PM
1.
yo, i spit written raps
thats effective like kitten naps
when i touch the mic, a flash that obliterates ya cateracts<

2
in your weak rhymes i had to read 7 times
cause they made about as much sense as shittin green dimes

3
come in here acting like you know how to rap
but your missing skill, coherence, and tact
and they amount to less then even ya girlfriend's rack


word, shits nothing special but still would hit harder in a non-internet battle. as i said, because the delivery was nicer, wooz' punches would hit harder in a real battle. trust me son.

CREEPY FOLLOWS
04-25-2006, 05:32 AM
4-1 in Wooz's favour, yo Classic if you want your vote to count, just follow the method, simple and plain, I don't normally agree to the method but that's how most of the peeps want it out here

Classic
04-25-2006, 04:55 PM
1.
yo, i spit written raps
thats effective like kitten naps
when i touch the mic, a flash that obliterates ya cateracts<
(This was not a punch. It was severly poorly executed. This was bragging.)
2
in your weak rhymes i had to read 7 times
cause they made about as much sense as shittin green dimes
(This was his BEST BAR, and it wasn't even that good.)
3
come in here acting like you know how to rap
but your missing skill, coherence, and tact
and they amount to less then even ya girlfriend's rack
(Weak bar, and VERY played concept.)

word, shits nothing special but still would hit harder in a non-internet battle. as i said, because the delivery was nicer, wooz' punches would hit harder in a real battle. trust me son.

It wasn't nicer. 90% of that dude's stuff was BRAGGING, not BATTLING.
And I think I explained my votes good enough.
I don't think anyone else other then you has a problem with it.

T-ribe
04-27-2006, 12:28 PM
Flow - wooz
wordplay - wooz
creativity - wooz
vocab - wooz
punches - wooz


It's a shut out for me, Wooz killed Sab. Just the way I saw it.
Even with the bragging he put it on him. Sab had no substance what so ever.

maestro wooz
04-28-2006, 12:25 AM
that wraps it up. Thanks to everyone who votewd and extra special thanks to everyone who voted for me

CREEPY FOLLOWS
04-28-2006, 01:31 AM
maestro-wooz advances to the second round, but who the fuck knows when that's even goin down