Ramen Noodles

[Albert_Napalm]

I held the heater in my drawers speaking to my moms
reservation fucked up just reaching for the bong
took time to learn from the elder gods but everything they teach to me is wrong
so I strive for perfection while candy rappers whine and cry for attention
it's in my life's work
end it all now and again just to see who it might hurt
but fuck it I'll learn
from the lessons they taught we ignite blunts
walking for power we're stalking to devour and consume on night hunts
brilliant werewolves
raw deal, leave you hanging in corn fields like scrare crows
bare hoes bare holes sworn to accept the beatings
met everything the aliens could offer except the meetings
so I rise and suprise polar bears with solar flares
beating congress and meeting to bomb death with a pile of folding chairs
glocks, d e's, shotguns, mac-teezys,
aye yo I'm holdin flare
golden stare with the apparel of pharoahs
piercing sight, my eyes are a pair of arrows
so who landed next can suspend me in the atmosphere just like planet x
damage necks
forensics can only examine techs
keep the L's fired/ hellfire keep the dragons vexed

[michael36forever]

I held the heater in my drawers speaking to my moms
reservation fucked up just reaching for the bong
took time to learn from the elder gods but everything they teach to me is wrong
so I strive for perfection while candy rappers whine and cry for attention
it's in my life's work
end it all now and again just to see who it might hurt
but fuck it I'll learn
from the lessons they taught we ignite blunts
walking for power we're stalking to devour and consume on night hunts
brilliant werewolves
raw deal, leave you hanging in corn fields like scrare crows
bare hoes bare holes sworn to accept the beatings
met everything the aliens could offer except the meetings
so I rise and suprise polar bears with solar flares
beating congress and meeting to bomb death with a pile of folding chairs
glocks, d e's, shotguns, mac-teezys,
aye yo I'm holdin flare
golden stare with the apparel of pharoahs
piercing sight, my eyes are a pair of arrows
so who landed next can suspend me in the atmosphere just like planet x
damage necks
forensics can only examine techs
keep the L's fired/ hellfire keep the dragons vexed

that was pretty tight. heres something i wrote with a few on the spot revisions. let me know what yall think. i know its a little rough around the edges but be for real and let me know.

i pour out my heart and soul
through my mouth tell my story whole
im givin you encrypted descriptions
of my memories and visions
if ya listen ta what im kickin
you wont hit-and-miss on ya mission
i can tell ya bout disaster and catastrophe
my life is one big tragedy
shakespearean play classic its a masterpiece
i know some people aint hearin me
thinkin they knowin everthing
but they dont know half of it
cause they aint been through shit
i learned as a little kid
an elders talkin im listenin

it aint finished yet. i dont feel like doin it