View Full Version : michael36forever's rhyme thread TELL ME WHAT YALL THINK

04-08-2006, 01:22 AM
this is just a thread where im gonna keep postin my shit and any shit i make and i want yall to tell me what you think.

04-08-2006, 01:23 AM
heres something i wrote with a few on the spot revisions. let me know what yall think. i know its a little rough around the edges but be for real and let me know.

i pour out my heart and soul
through my mouth tell my story whole
im givin you encrypted descriptions
of my memories and visions
if ya listen ta what im kickin
you wont hit-and-miss on ya mission
i can tell ya bout disaster and catastrophe
my life is one big tragedy
shakespearean play classic its a masterpiece
i know some people aint hearin me
thinkin they knowin everthing
but they dont know half of it
cause they aint been through shit
i learned as a little kid
an elders talkin im listenin

it aint finished yet. i dont feel like doin it

mister wooz
04-10-2006, 12:20 PM
not bad man