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Visionz
04-08-2006, 06:51 PM
Here it is, the Western Conference finalist in a two round duel to the death. Feedback is much appreciated. Look for the responses soon. peace



(ilzPotent)


I drop heavy on charging soldiers, like an avalanche of falling boulders
ugly head, no neck between 2 shoulders, sorry ya moms wouldnít hold ya
think she was cold, ilz colder, quick to fold ya, like a wack hand in poker
3 aces & a pair of jokers, you donít want war - you just a peace pipe toker
smokin chumps from boca to seattle, teflon indian bow with poison arrows
precise like the flight of a sparrow, cave ya chest in like two double barrels
illness your medicine man couldnít cure, if you was an animal youíd be a bore
rename you ass-is-raw, gettin tore by your rival Nava-hoe man-whores
shakin the feathers of your head dress on your knees proving you give head best
looking like a hobbit bitch named Bobbitt except potent one left you dickless
flowless, I could careless what you charge a soldier, this beatings for free
you could never see me, even if I was magnified by three, 7 bars and no moí
ill make you famous if you didnít know, roll ya in dutch, watch you burn slow
pine case shellacked with my flows, left stiff like a statue outside the local optimo







(Charging Soldier)


IlzPotent stretched open on the bed cot-
semen seeping out her pussy like some red snot-
plus flakes on her face, dried sperm from the head shot-
but I best not- go into in any more details-
just let be known this how I deal with you fat crack smokiní females-
free willy to fuck this whale of a lady- dumber than Jan Brady-
couldnít drop the pounds if she tried "trimspa baby"-
maybe you should go on a dick diet-
but thereís only way to keep this bitch quiet-
stuff her mouth with cock- go ahead, try it-
she likes that shit- even dikes with spiked rubber dicks get to hit-
callouses cover the sides of her slit-
plus thereís a plug sheís removes when she shits-
saved her from the wild and shaved her arm pits-
itís Charging Soldier the beast tamer!-
took a comb to her head lookiní like Cosmo Kramer-
she gotís the high score for taking dicks like an acclaimed gamer-
lamer then real bitches so she plays on the net-
to ugly to getí pinned up like a penthouse pet-
even jack off vets- reading Gallery cancelled their subscription-
cuz they seen your picture in the girl next door contest with the following inscription-
"Potent 1 from NY willing take on any guy whether you have a thick dick or a small fry, even multiple fellows are welcome to apply."
Why you ask is Potentís wild and vicious pattern of thought mad?
Itís cuz I caught her in the suspicious act of sucking on pussy clot pads-
then spittení in a nutritious, delicious, spaghetti pot lads-
trynna serve it to the Wu Corp grads- malicious like Fu Manchu-
But Shang Chi came to slap the shit out you- the Potent one
Iím just warming up to rinse your mouth out with some Potent cum.........

Visionz
04-08-2006, 08:19 PM
^we're goin two rounds on this one but I think you're qualified to vote......as a side note to the two emcees, post that second verse whenever you're ready but please keep ya builds to the round one verses if ya happen to be the second one to post just to keep things on the up and up. thanks and peace

ilzPotent
04-11-2006, 03:40 PM
The Judges for this battle and the one between Eric Unseen and What Radio are:

BigBen
Hollywood
Blak Furyan
$inista
the funky drunk
luther large
dusk

But opinions are welcomed...

Visionz
04-14-2006, 12:45 AM
this shit is mad tight battle right now, I'm glad to see both yall represent the Wu-Corp right with those two. So who wins?, shit I'm not a judge, I'm just gonna break it down commentator style.



First off, you got a clash between two different styles altogether. Ilz is coming thru with that mad technical style, packin in the multi's, and deadly punches mixed in together.

(think she was cold, ilz colder, quick to fold ya, like a wack hand in poker
3 aces & a pair of jokers, you don’t want war - you just a peace pipe toker)
----------not the only example by far, but this is a nice pair of lines here----


and then she tops that off with some crazy ass builds on Charging's name

(flowless, I could careless what you charge a soldier, this beatings for free)
---------that's the wit showin with this one----------


put it together, and you get one helluva verse



Charging Soldier is definetly coming with his own style on this one. CS don't focus on the technical side of the verse, he's goin straight up for the kid in the back of the class clowin ya' ass and does so in one, long consistent and pretty hilarious verse. It doesn't initially give you that ohh shit factor but the verse does the energizer bunny and just keeps goin & goin, getting crazier as it goes along. I'm not gonna quote any one lines cause you gotta look at this one as a whole.



I gotta say this one is just gonna come down to a judges perspective. We're not following the official wu-corp method, so it definetly matters more as to what appeals to the judges as fans of hip-hop. This is a battle that could go either.......Stay tuned

$inista
04-14-2006, 03:56 PM
good verses both emcees i had to read this a couple of times

ilzPotent

ilz colder, quick to fold ya, like a wack hand in poker
3 aces & a pair of jokers, you donít want war - you just a peace pipe toker
dope nice mutis

rename you ass-is-raw, gettin tore by your rival Nava-hoe man-whores
shakin the feathers of your head dress on your knees proving you give head best
eessh harsh

I could careless what you charge a soldier, this beatings for free
Nice personal

over all this is a nice verse good multis flow is hitting hard
over all a 4 out of 5

Charging Soldier

semen seeping out her pussy like some red snot- gross but in strange way I like the vision

to be honest this is the only line that stuck out in my head
I agree with unseen overal it is a good comical verse however I feel you could have been a bit more creative & came with some harder or more witty punches, you was swinging but it didn't connect with full force nah mean

a decent verse i felt like you kept building up but there was no eruption
a lot of comical jabs but no real hard punch
over all a 3 out of 5

:clap: I Applaud you both

WARPATH
04-22-2006, 04:16 AM
Oh shit..............this bitch rocks extra jumbo tampons- so you can say her flow is heavy-
wide set vagina spread, stained seats in the chevy- I can’t be mad-
I feel sorry for a girl that lost her cherry to her dad-
I Papi don’t stop me!!- jacked her ass up in the backseat of a jalopy
gave birth to a 23 chromosome fin baby copy-
I’ll smack this bitch sloppy till her face is corn beef-
Louder then porn queefs-
it’s the WAR CHIEF producin’ HOSTEL’ shit like Quentin-
press my penis flush against your nostril for tight spitten-
that’s why your brain tingles when I bust- call it the royal flush-
got you sneezing off the lust-
a Wu Corp gang bang, first up is a pleasing from the Dusk-
whipped out his baby tusk, don’t even giggle second up was Luther Little-
like a Vienna sausage on the griddle- meat to small to appease her appetite-
that’s what you get when you deal with hermaphrodites-
Bitch didn’t someone tell you I come from a tribe called smakahoe-
straight up attack a hoe, then arapaho in duct tape- chuck your body in the lake-
to bad shit floats- Feds found your body with a slit throat, minus your clitoris-
rinse your mouth out with bitter piss-
are you bitter miss? Salty in the least?
I give bitches head best but all I got from you was sour yeast-
grown men cower at the feast-
you need a shower beast cuz you wiped back to front-
I fell ill from the potent smell of baking bread in that cunt-
Silly stunts, my swisher’s sweeter then Garcia Vega
Played like mega farts so funky I need beeno- Finito!
I’m more unseen then Eric Incognito-
Jumped out the bushes and swiped Dora’s enchirito- you’ve been jacked-
matter fact I’m taking everything from the map to the back pack filled with nick nacks,
and the boots off that chimp- PIMP SLAPPED- and you loose- now sit your ass down in your thinking chair like blues clues- matter of fact I’ll leave three-
a nose drippin, yeast infected bitch, covered in pee..........

ilzPotent
05-09-2006, 11:06 AM
fat back bitch still sucking mamaís yak from her wrinkled left tit
a wayward child molesting lil dogs with a small dick and a clit
confused, do you stand or sit? no balls, a smelly slit under a zit,
home grown chump whose name translates easily from Lakota
charging a soldier to top the red light district's dick slurping quota
ass tucking for all from cows in minnesota to the inbred in Dakota
your greatest feat was being gangbanged by seven hairy midgets
you twitch and fidget with an ass widget, mouth full with 7 digits
nasty faggot with dwarf jizz facial dripping and you licking driblets
stashing nuts in ya cheeks for weeks just to increase your libido
this fucks illiterate or just plain dumb, what the fucks an enchirito?
wack lines topped with cheese please and corn like chips ala frito
homo textual glitches with a weaker flow than menopausal bitches
estrogen filled bars with an epithet sweeter than chocolate kisses
after seven ceremonies youíll be renamed chief dirty knees in ditches

ilzPotent
05-09-2006, 11:07 AM
BigBen
Hollywood
Blak Furyan
$inista
the funky drunk
luther large
dusk


Alrighty judges......

CherChezLaMarauder
05-12-2006, 01:51 PM
As A Forum Beat Writer, I'd Give Thumbs Up For Potent. I can take her on and be out on top

BRASSKNUCKLED PAI MEI
05-12-2006, 01:53 PM
I drop heavy on charging soldiers, like an avalanche of falling boulders
ugly head, no neck between 2 shoulders, sorry ya moms wouldn’t hold ya
think she was cold, ilz colder, quick to fold ya, like a wack hand in poker
3 aces & a pair of jokers, you don’t want war - you just a peace pipe toker
smokin chumps from boca to seattle, teflon indian bow with poison arrows
precise like the flight of a sparrow, cave ya chest in like two double barrels
illness your medicine man couldn’t cure, if you was an animal you’d be a bore
rename you ass-is-raw, gettin tore by your rival Nava-hoe man-whores
shakin the feathers of your head dress on your knees proving you give head best
looking like a hobbit bitch named Bobbitt except potent one left you dickless
flowless, I could careless what you charge a soldier, this beatings for free


it’s Charging Soldier the beast tamer!-
took a comb to her head lookin’ like Cosmo Kramer-

Round 1

Potent was creative came with the Multi's and wordplay on natives...

Charging lines lacked creativity and were easily expected...

Round 1 Potent


I’ll smack this bitch sloppy till her face is corn beef-
Louder then porn queefs-
it’s the WAR CHIEF producin’ HOSTEL’ shit like Quentin-
press my penis flush against your nostril for tight spitten-
that’s why your brain tingles when I bust- call it the royal flush-




ass tucking for all from cows in minnesota to the inbred in Dakota
your greatest feat was being gangbanged by seven hairy midgets
you twitch and fidget with an ass widget, mouth full with 7 digits
nasty faggot with dwarf jizz facial dripping and you licking driblets
stashing nuts in ya cheeks for weeks just to increase your libido
this fucks illiterate or just plain dumb, what the fucks an enchirito?
wack lines topped with cheese please and corn like chips ala frito
homo textual glitches with a weaker flow than menopausal bitches

after seven ceremonies you’ll be renamed chief dirty knees in ditches


Round 2

Charging started off good but U had so many punches at others it took away from who you were battling
Ilz again brang the heat with the Multis and some personal punches....

Round 2 Ilz


VOTE ILZ BY KO

Luther Large
05-12-2006, 02:00 PM
ILZ easily took the 1st round for me she had more creative punches

to tell ya'll the truth i wasnt feelin the whole twat semen drippin blow job style of rap ya'll used but ILZ used it less which was a relief and when she did use it it was mildly creative for what it was

and for round 2 i'd say chargin soldier took it but it wasnt enuff to take the battle

"I could careless what u charge a soldier,this beatins 4 free"- i really liked this line and i wish there were more of these in this battle instead of that gross shit

but anywayz

punches-ILZ
creativity-ILZ
Vocab-CS
wordplay-ILZ
flow- i dont really know so i guess this category is a tie

overall this battle was decent but it couldve been better as a whole the 1st round was good but the 2nd was dull

my vote=ILZ


peace to both ya'll.......

oDoUoSoKo
05-12-2006, 09:15 PM
illz did very good, and i always love her verses, but i was feeling charge on this 1

flow-cs
wrdply-cs
pnchs-cs
crtvty-ip
vcb-tie

BlaK FuRYaN
05-13-2006, 12:27 PM
Ill drop my vote later

Thai Gear
05-13-2006, 12:40 PM
Charging solider did a nice job I think he should win

Thai Gear
05-13-2006, 12:42 PM
ilzPotent got weaker in the middle and didn't end that well

BlaK FuRYaN
05-15-2006, 08:29 AM
flow.........ILZ P
wordplay....ILZ P
creativity......BOTH
vocabulary......BOTH
punches.....ILZ P

The humor in both verses was nuts...but ilz potent's return on the 2nd round was what got my vote....

VOTE: ILZ POTENT

$inista
05-16-2006, 12:55 PM
flow: potent
wordplay: potent
creativity: tie
vocabulary: tie
punches: potent

potent destroyed him with a shorter verse

soldier should of stayed focus on potent it hurt him when he started dissing other cats, good flow doe
tighest punch here

Iíll smack this bitch sloppy till her face is corn beef-
Louder then porn queefs-
itís the WAR CHIEF produciní HOSTELí shit like Quentin-
press my penis flush against your nostril for tight spitten-

the funky drunk
05-16-2006, 04:00 PM
flow - Ilz
Vocab - Tie
Punches - Ilz
Creativity - Ilz
Wordplay - Tie

yeah Ilz got this one ..

dont get me wrong y'all both came with the heat , this was a real nice battle most definately , i just feel that when it came to punches and shit , ilz just hit harder realy , nah'mean , dope battle , props

ilzPotent
05-16-2006, 08:37 PM
Good shyt Charging Soldier. Yeah I stuck to the 7 bars and no mo' but every line had a punch or more in it. Now if F*Radio would get his shyt together we could do the last duel. I still have your verse Eric.

Thank you judges for your votes. Battle On....

Im supposin me and eric gonna get a rematch.

WARPATH
05-17-2006, 01:37 AM
Congratulations to Illz for the win.:king: I know how hard it must've been on you.:tease:

I'd like to say one thing then i'm gonna retire my nunchucks in the battlefield.

Ever since me, and some of the other native peeps stepped onto the battle field, heads have been using are Native american culture against because we wear it proudly on our sleaves. References to our culture can only go so far, and I've seen border on good taste, to straight up hate.

Call me a whiney bitch, call me soar loser, call me what you want I won't be responding, but hear me out first.

How would you feel if everytime someone battled your they siad something like.........

Fucking beaner get capped at a Taco Bell after taking my order-
Put a collar around your neck so your head pops next time cross the border..........

I'll mail order your wife for a hand full of rice-
Smack you in your face just to fix your slanted eyes......

Ya'll Zulus be banging your chest like gorrillas in the mist,
Are you eating a watermelon, or is that a sist on your lips.......

Funking Bolgna smelling mother fucker, you all look the same,
Are you a Saltine Krakker, or a peckerwood with game.........

And another thing, some of ya'll even admit to having some native blood in you in one form or another. Wether it be from america, latin america, the caribbeans, natives are still natives. It bothers me when peeps don't see this kinda of hate right in front of their eyes, or engage in it themselves.

It's like if some called a north african a (insert racist term here), and the south african was like "ha ha he just called (insert racist term here)."

I know this is a battle field, and it's every man for himself, and I didn't even get inot sexism and in that sense i'm coming off as a hypocrite but, just try and see what i'm sayin here. Props to Illz for conquering in male a dominated forum.

I apologize if I offended anyone with my statments here. Charging Soldier deals in equality and believes all people are equal, and women should be held with the upmost respect.

ilzPotent
05-17-2006, 09:30 AM
Charging Soldier, the only reason I felt comfortable to take it there is because I am a spanish indian (taino) and I too wear my badge proudly. In no way, was my remarks meant to disrespect your culture. I have a profound respect for natives especially the ones who still live on reservations. I apologize if my comments to you have anything to do with your choice. I do regret your decision, you are definitely one of the wittiest texters I have faced.

Vernakular
05-17-2006, 05:11 PM
ilz took it in a landslide.

ilzPotent
05-23-2006, 09:09 AM
closed this thread eric.


what are we going to do if whatradio doesn't comeback? do you just advance? should we vote a new contestant?

CherChezLaMarauder
05-23-2006, 01:44 PM
*raises his hand*

Luther Large
05-23-2006, 01:50 PM
closed this thread eric.


what are we going to do if whatradio doesn't comeback? do you just advance? should we vote a new contestant?

yeah vote a new contestant :thumbup:

CherChezLaMarauder
05-23-2006, 01:52 PM
*waves hands and jumps up and down*

Visionz
05-23-2006, 03:58 PM
chea let's vote in a new contestant, I dont want to advance twice without gettin to really murk someone, but lets have someone that wasn't already eliminated, and someone who's proven themselves in the battlefield. lets hear some feedback yall. peace

Jesus Christ
05-23-2006, 06:36 PM
Yeah.............Vote for me let me play!

Visionz
05-23-2006, 07:15 PM
come on' homie, I know you aint 9 and that you were in the competition bracket to begin with. Nice try though.

Vernakular
05-23-2006, 07:43 PM
Id vote for spoken because well lets face it, hes the sickest emcee on the corp like i got some REAL ill shit of his

oDoUoSoKo
05-23-2006, 07:46 PM
me

oDoUoSoKo
05-23-2006, 07:47 PM
or spoken

Vernakular
05-23-2006, 07:48 PM
spoken easy

oDoUoSoKo
05-23-2006, 07:49 PM
well if its me and him then yah

Vernakular
05-23-2006, 07:51 PM
how bout ya fuckin just have a big battle and see who comes out on top lol

oDoUoSoKo
05-23-2006, 07:55 PM
he'd beat me hands down

Vernakular
05-23-2006, 08:01 PM
how the fuck is tek back in this

Visionz
05-23-2006, 08:04 PM
he's not, I'm pretty sure the thread is referring to maurauder

ilzPotent
05-24-2006, 07:44 AM
errr spoken is definitely a good contestant..... I'd really enjoy seeing you two go.

what do you say spoken you up for it?

Visionz
05-24-2006, 09:57 AM
I'm down for it, I guess here comes the tag-team I told KingShyt he'd need. :thumbup:

$inista
05-24-2006, 11:57 AM
where the fuck is radio i was looking forward to seeing that one mang nobody knows how to get in contact with the dude

Visionz
05-24-2006, 01:28 PM
I've sent him a pm and he said he was gonna drop in like a week, that was months ago. Shame really. I was lookin forward to the battle.

ilzPotent
06-22-2006, 09:47 PM
so whats up with this battle?