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04-10-2006, 08:34 PM
Drivin through the backwoods/regardless still a target/lurkinin the depths of a gauntlet/life shattered and haunted/blood tainted and faded/brain cells masticated/love spell he evaded/younger brother in a matrix from imperfect entity/with a timid personality/drained of its morality/ he and his brother compatible with negativity/the both of them had special connectivities/the average ghetto celebraties.

Father N Dangerous
04-10-2006, 10:10 PM
alright man, it is a good start i see sum potential in ya when it comes to vocab. i'll be keep an eye on ya. peace

Jay_Cross [7th sun]
04-11-2006, 01:52 PM
NAIZZ!!! Keep up, homie!!! I'm sayin' - It's good ;) And has something like - meaning! [P|3<3]

p.s. Too Pak is NOT dead, just hiding ;) :D

04-12-2006, 02:34 AM
thanks a lot for the positive feedback god

Jay_Cross [7th sun]
04-12-2006, 12:06 PM
Nou problem! ;)

05-23-2006, 09:59 AM
I shine brightly like a lone star in the constellation
always true to myself the nigga never fake
venemous as a snake
philosophical like scientology
controller of 360 degrees that 85 can't comprehend
i'm deadly as holocaust still more christian like than you'll ever be
you niggas will never see or get the picture so looks like I have to paint it
I study tricknology of a higher complexity than satan
but still blessed by the universe with beautiful fate
people act like their so positive
thats impossible nobodys perfect

manic lotus
05-23-2006, 12:28 PM
yo sick words man, definatly conveyin some emotion.. if ur lookin for feed tho.. the shit could use some work... try to even out your bars to flow better with a beat.. . play one while ya writin.. it helps.. keep postin.

05-23-2006, 01:14 PM
i feel the emotion in it...an im feelin the vocab alot..but i think u shud structure it better cuz it seemed like some of the words didnt rhyme or mayb i jus read it rong......^^^as said above try to write it with a beat..
but it was pretty good cuz i liked the way u put ur words together
keep it up

Father N Dangerous
05-23-2006, 01:36 PM
yeah so pretty much your rhyme scheme needs worked on cuz some of the bars where horrible becuase of it. anyway you can only get better so stay up and keep blessin -- I like the vocab tho

05-25-2006, 07:21 PM
as important was the keys also was the weed
the older brother failed to notice his bad seed
who's future looked very dim and grim
corrupted full of solemn greed and sin
clean face but backround was grimey as flim
physique was thin and brittle as tin
but could still take over a niggas strip
if the knockas saw him do it he would easily flee
thanks to his payments to the corrupted police
on the block 24/7 always tote heat
would chew fiends out givin his strip too much heat
on the side even had skanks on the creep
till he was one day scoped out, dropped instantly

05-25-2006, 10:32 PM
smack niggas upside the head with a 8 pointed star
slam weak emcees on stage and crush'em like cigars
spit that scientific biochemical shit
that niggas can't fuck wit
lyrical terrorist black exorcist
crucify ya favorite rapper
to the diamond cross thats hanging from his necklace
hotta than the sun I dare you to touch me
my radiation gammorays turns skins into putty
bop through ya block in fatigues skullt hats and black hoodies
drinking E&J puffing a honey dutch B
deprogram robots from illuminati thoughts
in this holy war where mental wars are fought
i'm off the radar with a force stronger than lord vader
its all gravy win born king mash niggas like potatoes
hot enough to freeze niggas the same as the north polar
solar soul controller rip ya flesh off
the reign of this king melts through ya umbrella leave you on ice like vanilla
your career lookin bleek like memphis on rocafella

p.s. this is singodsuperior's big brotha da god Born King from Mad Thinkah Productions.

Father N Dangerous
05-25-2006, 11:19 PM
ight this is very choppy and screwy, i hope this was say your first real attempt at doing this so, im sure with time you will elevate just work on i yo. the vocab, and wordplay, and most importantly the flow.

you'll get it peace

07-17-2006, 01:39 PM
around snakes i'm a quiet little nigga

wit brainwaves that slice like a liquid sword

my definition of a hore is someone who shows disrespect

we need niggas that stick together like cuban links

people are known to switch sides fast as a blink

for materials livin for the moment never for the true component

trying to bury me alive as I conformity

love me horing every person in sight

engagement to the highest negative caliber needs defecation

people killin themselves for matriculation

reachin social elevation through mental relaxation

patience non-existent to this nation

fighting temptations over and over

drunk or sober never lose your composure

virtues explode fast as a supernova

poisin spread through the mind of cobras

This divine universe gave me the first element so I search for the enlightened

being nosie in disgust lookin at the tarnished

reflectin on creating my vatican

engagement wit fake jewelery causes green skin

lyrics rough as a scorpions pinsir emcee from the digital platoon

break weed on the torah in vatican tombs on full moons

quietly wake up in the afternoon watch the planets revolve from a digital view

way past nanobots and philosophical been there done that but i'm still watchin

laugh when I see inaugarations of the illuminati

cold blooded daughter warm blooded reptillian

make people give praise to the all seeing eye

queen elizabeth on my bedside the sphinx on a lesh

caesar serving me grapes wit blood dripping from the fingerips

as I greet satin wit a hug before I meet Jesus for dinner

nanotechnology mental architect

steal the soul of any emcee that I fuckin wreck

hip-hop nowadays is a bloody mess

everybody that know it don't wanna confess

most performers at these venues don't make me pressed

I put my all to a song never commercial

don't have a lot of money but lyrics will hurt you

fuck thousand dollar jewels whats the worst that can do

stepin to me you must be a fool

wearin tight ass shirts thinkin that you cool

mentally physically you can't mess wit me

divine heretity comprehend the name

tolerance remains sane due to my cool swagger

make you a memory like caesar wit the dagger

up in the lab makin that plaster

gold lasts forever get your weight up

07-17-2006, 03:43 PM