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Locust
04-13-2006, 06:14 PM
I haven't dropped anything here for aaaages so heres an old song i wrote about me bitching about other rappers, any feedback will be appreciated



{Chorus x2}
Like working at MCdonalds i French fry rappers
I'm talking about the gangstas and the Hentai jackers
After i spit this verse youíll seem ten times wacker

Verse 1 (16 lines)
Yo, hereís some food for thought, you weak geaks..
You're feces, donít try to use the force to beat me
You nerds are never better with your star-trek steez
Spit whatevers clever, like it's a smart Technique
YOU donít even know what you're bitching about
You just wait for net-beef like you're fishing for cows
I figured you out, you got down right blind minds
Fuck you square-mcs that try to sound like Einstein
Like your sharpest knife in the box, you're measly
Tryna be raw, typing your thoughts on your pc
You hibernate in cyberspace with foolish shit talk
The kind that hates and violates the rules of hip hop
Ya shits on the inter-net like a swimmer with diarrhea
Thinking your intellects, donít give a shit bout the pioneers
These type of rappers are coming up globally
You nerds are so boring sheep count you to go to sleep

{Chorus x2}
Like working at m.cdonalds i French fry rappers
Iím talking about the ganstas and the Hentai jackers
After i spit this verse youíll seem ten times wacker

Verse 2 (34 lines)
You chocolate rappers are Kornier than Limp Bizket
But you clones keep coming up like your infinite
Killers, crack dealers, and all you rich gimmicks
That rap about the dope game but never lived in it
And your 24 inch rims with things imprinted
I could write all your albums in less than 10 minutes
You rap about the same shit how, your a G for life
Even if were a G you couldnít be before I
Cause Iím so bright that you cant even see me sun
And youíre a fake thug that carries a bb gun
Lyrically.. you rappers aint shit to me
Iíll snap your gat in half if your c-c-click is weak
But you aint really strapped, youíre just in a stricked school
Your crap floats to the top like your shitting in pools
Kids are thinking it's cool, they must be lunatics
These stupid kids are even rocking g-unit kicks
If you got dope beats theyíll play your candy vocals
Even if you hide in your crib staying anti social
Nowadays you don't even gotta earn respect
If your wearing ice your cool, but iíll burn your neck
Eat a rapper, cough up the chain and floss my teeth
You lossed the key to rap, i open the chamber forcefully
Youíre so shallow that you brag about your dick size
If you were riding a bike you wouldnít spit fly
First you were a ghetto child, now you live the rich life
What.. From selling Crack to Pedofiles and sick guys?
Like the diaper you're wearing, youíre full of shit
Pull ya wig when the bullets hit, give you a mullet bitch
You talk on how you busting shots with the hammer
But i know you be fucking cops with bannanas
Change your socks, it smells like you work for the law
You donít have a phat crib, you knock door to door
You canít even arrange a range or afford a ford
You travel with your trolly, cause youíre more than poor
You never 'share', cause you're 'broker' than most
So don't brag about your cash, cause right now..
Locusts what dope..






Copywrite © 2005 - 2006 Locust

Locust
04-14-2006, 07:05 AM
thanks for the feed homie..
yea i'll record it whenever i get a beat to go with it..
i didn't know you produce.. that'd be sick if you could hook it up man, fo schnitzel lol..

Locust
04-14-2006, 05:09 PM
up

Locust
04-17-2006, 01:22 PM
word thanks, ill get at you with something by tomorrow

Claustrofobic
04-17-2006, 02:20 PM
thats ill locust

Locust
04-17-2006, 02:25 PM
thanks man..

Claustrofobic
04-17-2006, 02:32 PM
how you come up with a chorus dude, I mean that chorus you used is pretty catchy, I got a few words written down now and I really can't think of a chorus for my shits

Jay_Cross [7th sun]
04-17-2006, 02:35 PM
Came out from my lips beating the balls lol :D :D :D Pretty cool ;) I have an idea "you should record this" :D :D :D :D :D :D [just foolin' around Sp0k3n ;) :)] But he's tallented, aren't he? To write the funny, a little bit weird TRUTH :D Man If I had born in USA... Damn! This ain't good... But you should hear what I can in my language... Breathin' the mic dust (for 6 months already) :D Where was I? Ah yeah... Locust - If all your rhymes are similar to this one - you're the genius ;) GZA almost :D :D :D Keep up homie! {|> | 3 < 3}

Claustrofobic
04-17-2006, 02:37 PM
']Came out from my lips beating the balls lol :D :D :D Pretty cool ;) I have an idea "you should record this" :D :D :D :D :D :D [just foolin' around Sp0k3n ;) :)] But he's tallented, aren't he? To write the funny, a little bit weird TRUTH :D Man If I had born in USA... Damn! This ain't good... But you should hear what I can in my language... Breathin' the mic dust (for 6 months already) :D Where was I? Ah yeah... Locust - If all your rhymes are similar to this one - you're the genius ;) GZA almost :D :D :D Keep up homie! {|> | 3 < 3}

its like I dont understand any word lol

12weLvE
04-17-2006, 02:56 PM
I like

Locust
04-17-2006, 03:00 PM
how you come up with a chorus dude, I mean that chorus you used is pretty catchy, I got a few words written down now and I really can't think of a chorus for my shits
whats the song about?
What i do is summarize what the verses are about in a few catchy lines (if the song has a topic).. usually the chorus is like 4 lines

Locust
04-17-2006, 03:02 PM
']Came out from my lips beating the balls lol :D :D :D Pretty cool ;) I have an idea "you should record this" :D :D :D :D :D :D [just foolin' around Sp0k3n ;) :)] But he's tallented, aren't he? To write the funny, a little bit weird TRUTH :D Man If I had born in USA... Damn! This ain't good... But you should hear what I can in my language... Breathin' the mic dust (for 6 months already) :D Where was I? Ah yeah... Locust - If all your rhymes are similar to this one - you're the genius ;) GZA almost :D :D :D Keep up homie! {|> | 3 < 3}
i dont understand everything you said but thanks anyway :thumbup:

TeknicelStylez
04-17-2006, 03:04 PM
Good shit loc, impressive with the multi's, I'm so used to seeing boring ass rhyme schemes on this sight. I'm all about multi's and flow and shit, definately gotta throw this on wax.

Jay_Cross [7th sun]
04-17-2006, 03:24 PM
i dont understand everything you said but thanks anyway :thumbup:

Slow mind? Maybe blind? Need some weed? Or just I was too sweet? Damn! :D :D :D Just wanted to say that your 'song' was outstandin'! ;) (I was so excited, so wrote a bunch of shit - not a normal post :D :D :D) Anyway - good work man, not simple and workaday - what can I say ;) :D :D :D :dududu:

Jay_Cross [7th sun]
04-17-2006, 03:26 PM
Wow..........that made no sense whatsoever LOL

Maybe need a translation? :D :D :D Or more wide imagination?

Locust
04-17-2006, 03:26 PM
Good shit loc, impressive with the multi's, I'm so used to seeing boring ass rhyme schemes on this sight. I'm all about multi's and flow and shit, definately gotta throw this on wax.
will do, thanks for the feedback..

Claustrofobic
04-17-2006, 04:36 PM
..

ElusiveFugitive
04-17-2006, 07:19 PM
Verse 2 (34 lines)
You chocolate rappers are Kornier than Limp Bizket
But you clones keep coming up like your infinite
Killers, crack dealers, and all you rich gimmicks
That rap about the dope game but never lived in it
And your 24 inch rims with things imprinted
I could write all your albums in less than 10 minutes
You rap about the same shit how, your a G for life
Even if were a G you couldnít be before I
Cause Iím so bright that you cant even see me sun
And youíre a fake thug that carries a bb gun
Lyrically.. you rappers aint shit to me
Iíll snap your gat in half if your c-c-click is weak
But you aint really strapped, youíre just in a stricked school
Your crap floats to the top like your shitting in pools
Kids are thinking it's cool, they must be lunatics
These stupid kids are even rocking g-unit kicks
If you got dope beats theyíll play your candy vocals
Even if you hide in your crib staying anti social
Nowadays you don't even gotta earn respect
If your wearing ice your cool, but iíll burn your neck
Eat a rapper, cough up the chain and floss my teeth
You lossed the key to rap, i open the chamber forcefully
Youíre so shallow that you brag about your dick size
If you were riding a bike you wouldnít spit fly
First you were a ghetto child, now you live the rich life
What.. From selling Crack to Pedofiles and sick guys?
Like the diaper you're wearing, youíre full of shit
Pull ya wig when the bullets hit, give you a mullet bitch
You talk on how you busting shots with the hammer
But i know you be fucking cops with bannanas
Change your socks, it smells like you work for the law
You donít have a phat crib, you knock door to door
You canít even arrange a range or afford a ford
You travel with your trolly, cause youíre more than poor
You never 'share', cause you're 'broker' than most
So don't brag about your cash, cause right now..
Locusts what dope..

Ill drop Locust...This last verse stood out for me. The flow of the verse and your multis are well on point. Props bro! Would like to hear it on audio. Keep the ink flowin'

ONE LOVE

Vernakular
04-17-2006, 07:27 PM
i know u h8 me locust, but, nice shit he doesnt sound like the gza he sounds like himself, wtf anyways goo dhit homie spokes speaks of u highly now imma leave u with this smiley:W

Locust
04-18-2006, 10:59 AM
thanks.. grim i don't hate you i just think you're weird

Vernakular
04-18-2006, 03:09 PM
thanks.. grim i don't hate you i just think you're weird

me too

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