View Full Version : sabinchung vs. vernakular Wins

04-16-2006, 01:16 PM
1 riund 16-20

tell me if you want me to spit first

no dickriding or fa votes

04-16-2006, 01:53 PM
you can go first

04-16-2006, 01:53 PM
na man not this time

imma be busy for the next couple days spit, dont be a pussy

04-16-2006, 04:46 PM
your text is vile like, son how are you servin me?
aramaic raps, your like the bible ,writen hyberboles
Jesus Christ its easter, so why you gotta disrepsect
eatin' your soul 'n' ether, makin sure u don't resurect
dont get up, pass out from the pain, lemme explain
I'll exploit your name in lies, like 50 did to the game
your writen half witted shit, when its survival of the fittest
now tell me in triplecit, how in the fuck you gonna win this?
Sorry for breakin your neck, but you shouldnt hold your head high
your a weak threat, lemme give you two reasons why
I laugh at your darts, their recycled chum to the sharks
you put on a skull cap, then call yourself street smart
guess what your not, sorry to burst your bubble
You start a riot with kindergartners, findin ways to get in trouble
You preachin to no1, you cant win, life sucks,
Your gettin lapped in the race, im just beyond you, you weak fuck
Don't respond, you'll get verbally slapped in the face
Your styles trippin its own self, lemme ask you sumtin, feel outta place?

04-16-2006, 04:59 PM
that was an ok verse but u had some good punches

u barkin nonsense dog and your about to be put to sleep

04-16-2006, 08:52 PM
peace bring it homie

04-17-2006, 12:14 PM
my bad for not responding quicker, but my internet got fucked up. so here's a quick keystyle. i didn't even read your verse too.

you claim to rock schemes, you softer then ice cream out the freezer
you, i'mma beat half to death like vegetables, ya girl, i'mma beat her//1
how you talk with a big cock in your mouth n twat?
lets rock n roll, give you a fuckin slipknot//2
you know i rip tracks n skip your clout like whoa
blow, thats exactly what you don't precede to know//3
this for the kids who know you blow like Depp, n you still get at me?
please son, you like eggs on the pavement on a hot summer day b//4
all dried up, all ya trys to beat me failed today mayne
wanna get filthy like master splinter, but your just acting gay//5
clear out, i'm about to air you out when we bout
your flows weaker then a whisper, plus i like to shout//6
so you know i'm all up in your face like a Drew Bress birth mark
talking about sparking me, i blew you for free plus hurt ya heart//7
wanna ball, but don't even throw punches in dodge ball
n you know i'm out for the kill right now, i'm hot ya'll//8

i just number every 2 lines so i don't go over or under the line limit.

hazidus hitman
04-17-2006, 12:27 PM
sabinnchung, i found your lyrics realy hard to flow with, they just diddnt seem to come together smoothly enough for me. i think Vernakular had meaner punch lines and made allot more sense when reading.

my votes gotta go to: Vernakular

04-17-2006, 08:08 PM

sabin u didnt come hard enuff man v walked allover u, u need to keep an eye on ur flow and punches, 1

04-17-2006, 08:12 PM

weak analogies, and a bad flow was all i got from sabin
vernakular took it with little challenge

04-17-2006, 08:22 PM
3-0 ko son


04-17-2006, 09:16 PM
Flow - V no doubt
Punch LInes - V
Creativity - V
Wordplay - V
Vocab - V

Vernakular is my vote.

04-18-2006, 01:27 PM
cool, cool

is it obvious i don't take this(net battling) a fraction as serious as CREEPY FOLLOWS

04-18-2006, 04:04 PM
lol i just flowed like u said spokes