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Visionz
04-18-2006, 08:08 PM
1 round, 5 votes to win
how ever many lines you want to spit.

I know you never responded to the pm I sent ya before I set up this thread but I don't think you scared. peace

Visionz
04-18-2006, 08:31 PM
Step into the arena, I spray like street sweepers
Peepers left blinkin, there's no time for thinkin
You might be titanic but your ship is still sinkin
I put holes in ya cap like Abe Lincoln
I'm a killer in the Booth
SuperSleuth turned evil, lean no evidence of all these mudered people
Run for your church steeple, hop on your knees and pray
Cause you might be Hazidus, but I'm straight deadly when I spray
Is the message conveyed?
Or are you a retarded kid that hears a joke and doesnt laugh for two days?
Delays will leave you silenced forever, head severed and decayed
Body layed in remote spots, the Silent Killer been ill
Since before Aids could kill, And you spilled bullshit
You got your finger on the trigger but your too pussy to pull it

hazidus hitman
04-18-2006, 10:48 PM
Step into the arena, I spray like street sweepers
Peepers left blinkin, there's no time for thinkin
You might be titanic but your ship is still sinkin
I put holes in ya cap like Abe Lincoln
I'm a killer in the Booth
SuperSleuth turned evil, lean no evidence of all these mudered people
Run for your church steeple, hop on your knees and pray
Cause you might be Hazidus, but I'm straight deadly when I spray
Is the message conveyed?
Or are you a retarded kid that hears a joke and doesnt laugh for two days?
Delays will leave you silenced forever, head severed and decayed
Body layed in remote spots, the Silent Killer been ill
Since before Aids could kill, And you spilled bullshit
You got your finger on the trigger but your too pussy to pull it

boy your styles so clumsy youve been spotted by Stevie Wonder,
so your user name "eric unseen" is just fuel to my plunder.
my lyrics apply pressure to your throat,
causing you to gag and choke,
you got flashbacks of giving ya daddy deep throat.
your circumsized rhymes couldnt please a swollen clit,
so you may as well go back home and get back to sucking dick.
imma carve my trade mark in your forehead when im done with you faggot,
its the shape of a 5 cent coin and its mass produced from a bullet.
its ricochets cause the rest of your family to go to graves,
be thankfull you got the bullet and not the edge of my blade.
my flows got a murderous streak when you fuck wit me,
travels into your air drums and coagulates blood in your arteries,
you try to run and hide but ive ripped bare both your akillies.
once apon a time your end may have been necrobiosis,
but now you fuck with the hitman intoxicated by psychosis.
your choices have now been narrowed and left for you to decide,
imma leave it up to you homicide or suicide?.......

Visionz
04-18-2006, 11:34 PM
ahhhh, good shit homie, nice verse. lets get some votes in

hazidus hitman
04-19-2006, 04:17 AM
good battle bro, cheers.
vote up people!

num2son
04-19-2006, 10:07 AM
Flow - Eric Unseen
Punches - Eric Unseen
Creativity - (Tie)
Wordplay - Eric Unseen
Vocab - Hazidus Hitman

My vote goes to Eric Unseen, Nice battle

J-Man
04-19-2006, 12:53 PM
gotta say i give dat 2 Unseen both nice raps but unseen seemed to flow betta for me

hazidus hitman
04-20-2006, 08:42 AM
aight then
2-0
hook us up with some more votes people

Classic
04-20-2006, 11:04 AM
Step into the arena, I spray like street sweepers
Peepers left blinkin, there's no time for thinkin
(Not really a punch here, just about yourself.)
You might be titanic but your ship is still sinkin
I put holes in ya cap like Abe Lincoln
(Played concept, nice bar though.)
I'm a killer in the Booth
SuperSleuth turned evil, lean no evidence of all these mudered people
(First part was just filler? No real punch here either.)
Run for your church steeple, hop on your knees and pray
Cause you might be Hazidus, but I'm straight deadly when I spray
(Good punch here. Wordplay on the name too.)
Is the message conveyed?
Or are you a retarded kid that hears a joke and doesnt laugh for two days?
( "Slow kid" might've been better. Decent punch here.)
Delays will leave you silenced forever, head severed and decayed
Body layed in remote spots, the Silent Killer been ill
(Okay, first line rhymed with one above it. Not too hard of a punch.)
Since before Aids could kill, And you spilled bullshit
You got your finger on the trigger but your too pussy to pull it
(Good closer)



boy your styles so clumsy youve been spotted by Stevie Wonder,
so your user name "eric unseen" is just fuel to my plunder.
(Good opener.)
my lyrics apply pressure to your throat, causing you to gag and choke,
you got flashbacks of giving ya daddy deep throat.
(Decent punch. Played concept.)
your circumsized rhymes couldnt please a swollen clit,
so you may as well go back home and get back to sucking dick.
(Decent punch, liked 1st line.)
imma carve my trade mark in your forehead when im done with you faggot,
its the shape of a 5 cent coin and its mass produced from a bullet.
(Bullet and Faggot don't rhyme, sorry.)
its ricochets cause the rest of your family to go to graves,
be thankfull you got the bullet and not the edge of my blade.
(Decent punch.)
my flows got a murderous streak when you fuck wit me,
travels into your air drums and coagulates blood in your arteries,
(Good vocabulary here. But you're kind of talkin' about yourself.)
you try to run and hide but ive ripped bare both your akillies.
(Meant to rhyme with line above it? Decent punch.)
once apon a time your end may have been necrobiosis,
but now you fuck with the hitman intoxicated by psychosis.
(Decent punch again.)
your choices have now been narrowed and left for you to decide,
imma leave it up to you homicide or suicide?.......
(Good closer.)


In this battle, I saw more harder punches from Unseen then I did Hazidus.
However, when you battle the point is to diss your opponent, not talk about yourself. So bars/lines about yourself aren't good in a battle unless they happen to be brief.
My vote goes to Hazidus, while he may have had weaker punches, he was more consistent with them. Always aiming at his opponent.
Unseen lost it with me with bars talkin' about himself.

hazidus hitman
04-20-2006, 09:42 PM
cheers bro. nice voting method too man, very clear on what your voting for.
2-1 in favour of Eric Unseen

Classic
04-20-2006, 09:50 PM
cheers bro. nice voting method too man, very clear on what your voting for.
2-1 in favour of Eric Unseen

Well, I only talk the truth.
I'm exposing the faults in verses, etc etc.
Bar by bar or line by line breakdown.
It's how I like to vote.
By the way, nice Avatar Hazidus.
I was zoned out starin at that shit for like...6 mins yo.

DREW-DIE$EL
04-20-2006, 09:57 PM
Flow - Eric Unseen
Punches - Hazidus
Creativity - Eric Unseen
Wordplay - Eric Unseen
Vocab - Eric Unseen

i liked em both, but i'm sick of people calling the other a faggot, you gotta be more creative than that.

my vote goes the eric-unseen

T-ribe
04-20-2006, 10:36 PM
I give this one to Unseen
Both had a nice vibe,
but the gay rhymes just don't cut it for me
It's to easy to talk about another man suckin dick
I do like some of the vocab Hazidus droped
But over all Unseen held it down in all catagories

Visionz
04-20-2006, 10:44 PM
4-1, Unseen, lets see some more votes, peace to everyone that already has

hazidus hitman
04-22-2006, 05:21 PM
vote up please people

hazidus hitman
04-24-2006, 09:11 AM
lets end this. vote up

the funky drunk
04-24-2006, 03:18 PM
flow - Hitman
w/p - unseen
vocab - Hitman
punches - unseen
creativity - unseen

was close for me but unseen got this . just came that lil bit harder

props to both o 'yall good battle

peace

hazidus hitman
04-24-2006, 05:10 PM
cheers man.
5-1 in favour of Eric Unseen, good battle bro.

CREEPY FOLLOWS
04-24-2006, 06:08 PM
why don't y'all send some votes on the 8 man elimination process battles?
I got these dudes waiting so we can advance to the second round, c'mon a lil help

hazidus hitman
04-24-2006, 06:31 PM
ayo BIG BEN thats a wrap bro...Eric Unseen V's hazidus hitman....and the winner by way of point defeat is Eric Unseen

cheers unseen, we will have to dual again some time bro

PEACE

Visionz
04-24-2006, 07:42 PM
Fo'sho, I thought this battle was closer than the votes reflected. Def keep battlin up in here. peace

BRASSKNUCKLED PAI MEI
12-29-2006, 12:38 AM
ERIC WINS