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Racailla
06-30-2005, 07:05 AM
Equestrians await, pedestrian proceed through guarded gates,
con artists fate, darts hit ‘em sentinels, sedate
Indeed entrance provided slide in straight into the city’s heart
like syringe shots, lots of booths at the market-place
craftsmen and artisans create, the crowd debates
till the arrival of irate partisans slaughtering mongers, monks
and the cardinal- taking the gardens green
smashing cathedral to smithereens, defiling the most high being-
left’s an island in the Nile held by dead pharaos profiling
The hostile assailants seeking signs of feebleness in the foe’s lines
but the lines closed Shaolins defending their minds ramping like rhinos
stamping the enemies’ flash to cemetery-ash, penalty clash
yet the remedy act aborts tha rival lords aware of the stance at the shore
saw their chance in reward bought pharao-auxiliary defending-off hordes
which sold their souls to the devil, cheddar-coins sharps
their hands cut roll down to the level of the river incisive darts
delivered into their dishevelled hair, their eyes show shiver

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GuardianOne
06-30-2005, 09:24 AM
Quite nice, new type of word arangement, sharp!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! And nice portral also (seemed violent) deadly actually.

Weres/or whats chinguetti?
Like to check more of your lyrics

the messiah
07-01-2005, 01:33 AM
shits ill, but kinda hard to follow

Racailla
07-01-2005, 04:26 AM
Thank's for your reactions! Really appreciate it!

Chinguetti is the place my mind (though not my body) lives in, an oasis in the desert of Sahara - the ancient city of wisdom.

GuardianOne
07-01-2005, 07:18 AM
its alright!!!!!!!!!


Peace