CLASSIC WINS Classic Vs. J-Man

[Classic]

10 bars, 1 round.
3-0 = K.O.
First to five win.

My verse :
Lyrically I'll BAG-YOU, if words weapons I'd STAB-YOU.
You could ask dudes to explain votes, but in the end they won't HAVE-TO.
J-Man, please, you're just a "ROOKIE-AT-HEART".
Leave this retard scarred and proved he was PUSSY-FROM-START.
You could post a response here, but it wouldn't even MATTER.
I'll knock you out of this thread, like three strikes on a BATTER.
I'll LOSE-IT in here, especially when you see what I MOVE-WIT.
You got a interest in hip-hop? But your drops sure don't PROVE-IT.
J-Man? HAH! I treat you like a I treat my BITCH.
Even with a baseball bat and a toilet, you still couldn't BEAT-MY-SHIT.
You won't get paid for shit, we'll call you "NETZERO".
How many battles have you won outside the net?...ZERO!
Your flow are weak, but I think everybody KNOWS-THAT.
Your flows like you overdosed on "PROZAC".
Battlin' a tard is somethin I NEVER-PLANNED.
Like Michael Jackson fondlin' boys in NEVERLAND with a SEVERED-HAND!
I'm sure you want everbody to think you're CREDIBLE-TOO!
But I been doin' this shit since you were eatin' EDIBLE-GLUE.
Tell you what, I'll go first so you can copy and TWIST-THIS.
Spin it like a DISCUSS, hit you in the face and correct yo LISPIS.

[Academic]

[ Message deleted at the request of the user. ]

[J-Man]

My rhymes will blast you, urs are just shit in a tissue
chucked on the road never to be used
mainly becuase, man yo darts aint sharp
they dont even break the skin, let alone hit the heart
your names classic thats a laugh,
cos u aint shit forgot being a blast from the past.
my rhymes are soo hard hitting the kill u n bring you back
just so i can murder you again cos ur so wack,
to listen to yo shit ill need a lil more crack,
if you worked for me, a while bk u wud have got tha sack.

man i dont need votes to be explained,
3-0 in my favour thats how its gonna end,
i know from my previous battle thats not my trend,
but against shit like urs its ova b4 it started my friend.
whats this thing with me being yo bitch,
u go afta men cos u to ugly to hitch?
women run away from the smell of 3:15,
ill tell 3:15 is B.O just so you im being mean.
so here theres my verse from me to you,
im straight up betta than you and will pull through.

Peace

[JackOfHearts]

flow- classic
wordplay- classic
creativity- tie
vocabulary- tie
punches- classic


vote- classic.

well played both of ya.

[J-Man]

1-0

[J-Man]

we need more votes comin in

[the funky drunk]

Flow - classic
w/p - classic
creativity - classic
vocab - tie ..
punches - classic

these are the 2 bars that made my mind up ....

Battlin' a tard is somethin I NEVER-PLANNED.
Like Michael Jackson fondlin' boys in NEVERLAND with a SEVERED-HAND!
I'm sure you want everbody to think you're CREDIBLE-TOO!
But I been doin' this shit since you were eatin' EDIBLE-GLUE.

fuckin illness right there

props to j-man also , nice battle

but my vote goes to classic

[Classic]

2-0 Keep votes comin'.

[andrem]

Flow - classic
wordplay - classic
creativity - classic
vocab - classic
punches - classic

It was a close battle, and J-man fought well. but Classic hit harder in all of the elements, the flow and wordplay especially.

Vote: Classic

[CREEPY FOLLOWS]

yo I need you dudes to send some votes in the 8 man elimination process battles, show some support, the tourny's been goin for almost a month now and we still haven't advanced to the 2nd round, send some votes and use the voting method

[CREEPY FOLLOWS]

I'd vote but this battle's a wrap, 3-0's a k.o.

[Classic]

3-0 = K.O.
But you can still throw some feedback in here.
What can I do to better my style?
etc etc.
Be a critic, only way I can get better is if you help me point out my flaws.