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Vernakular
04-25-2006, 09:54 PM
1 round

no limit to the lines

first to 5 votes

3-0 is a ko

ill spit it first

DREW-DIE$EL
04-25-2006, 10:28 PM
im workin on my verse now. so whoever get's done first get's done first.

Vernakular
04-26-2006, 10:44 PM
YOUR STYLES CHEAP, YOUR WORTHLESS, STEP UP FRONTIN LIKE A HERO/ THIS VERSE IS FOR ALL YA'LL WACK CATS TRYNNA BE MARTYRS FOR ZEROS/ YOUR CRYSTAL CLEAR FLOW, IS AS FRAGILE AS CHINA GLASS/ GO LAST, YOU WON'T WIN, YOUR PLATE IS BROKEN/ YOUR PLAIN AS FUCKIN DAY, WORSHIP BLING WHEN YOU RHYME/ FRONTIN AS AN MC, BUT YOUR REALLY ACT LIKE A MIME/ YOUR GETTIN FUCKED FOR FREE, YOUR CAREER AINT GOIN FAR/ AND ITS PLAIN TO SEE, THAT YOU STRIVE TO BE A PORN STAR/ YOU RHYME WEAK, YOUR BLEEK WITH WORDS THAT ARE USELESS/ IN FACT YOU COULD RECORD A WHOLE ALBUM FULL OF EXCUSES/ TRUE THIS, I'LL MAKE SURE BY THE END OF THIS YOU SEE BLACK/ NIGHT IS SCARY SON, JUST SO AS NEBRASKA IS WACK/ YOU COULN'T COME OFF LOGICALLY, IF YOU HAD GZA DOIN THE MATH/ IT'S SIMPLE AS THAT, SON YOU SUCK, GO HUG YOUR '50' CD'S, THEY'LL DO YOU BETTER THAN BATTLIN ME/ YOUR STRAIGHT 'SADDLIN' G'S TO SHOW THAT YOUR HOOD RATTLIN'S WEAK/ WHEN U SPIT YOU SPEAK, FIRST LESSON THAT SEEPS/ I'LL SET YOU AS AN EXAMPLE OF EMCEE THATS CLICHE/ MORE SO THAN THE ONES IMMORTAL CALLED GAY/ YOU CANT PHASE SHIT, I'D SHOW YOU RHYMES THAT'LL SHAKE YOU LOSE/ LOST THIS BATTLE KID, PUT YOUR LOGIC TO USE/

YOUR SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO LUCKY I HAD TO RE-DO THIS SHIT DUDE

DREW-DIE$EL
04-26-2006, 11:26 PM
The first rule of battle, is know thy enemy,
You volunteered yourself to my hands, like you played for Tennessee
You call yourself vernakular, but people don’t talk like you,
I asked around if they liked your rhymes, and all they said was “who?
You spelled my name wrong, that shit might make me angry,
Ill throw ya like I was the hulk, cuz to him you’re nothing weighty
Im comin for ya son, like an out of control diesel,
You better go hide in your hole, like you was a weasel,
Ill redesign your spine, like my art was architecture,
Leaving ya speechless, like a mute in a lecture
There’s no mercy when you’re play with me,
Its like I got an Uzi, and u a b.b.
Lyrically, you’re in my vortex,
Ill bust you up, like bandicoot did to cortex,
Split ya in half, like moses did the red sea,
Ill send ya on a trip, to see G-O-D
Hittin ya so fast, you won’t have time to parry,
Leave ya talking out ya ass, like ya name was Jim Carrey

Vernakular
04-26-2006, 11:33 PM
Decent Shit, I Wudda Posted A Lot Better Of A Verse But My Comp Fucked Up And I Couldnt Copy It

DREW-DIE$EL
04-27-2006, 04:35 PM
Let's get some votes people!

hazidus hitman
04-27-2006, 09:30 PM
DIE$EL carved up!!

wordplay-DIE$EL
vocab-DIE$EL
puches-DIE$EL
flow-DIE$EL


DIE$EL came in fearless, was hard hitting with his punches, was direct to the target, eyes on the prize...

good battle by both, Vern: i think you need to work on your punches, make them more direct and hard hitting, also your written structure in a battle makes a big difference.

peace

Classic
04-27-2006, 09:58 PM
YOUR STYLES CHEAP, YOUR WORTHLESS, STEP UP FRONTIN LIKE A HERO/ THIS VERSE IS FOR ALL YA'LL WACK CATS TRYNNA BE MARTYRS FOR ZEROS/ YOUR CRYSTAL CLEAR FLOW, IS AS FRAGILE AS CHINA GLASS/ GO LAST, YOU WON'T WIN, YOUR PLATE IS BROKEN/ YOUR PLAIN AS FUCKIN DAY, WORSHIP BLING WHEN YOU RHYME/ FRONTIN AS AN MC, BUT YOUR REALLY ACT LIKE A MIME/ YOUR GETTIN FUCKED FOR FREE, YOUR CAREER AINT GOIN FAR/ AND ITS PLAIN TO SEE, THAT YOU STRIVE TO BE A PORN STAR/ YOU RHYME WEAK, YOUR BLEEK WITH WORDS THAT ARE USELESS/ IN FACT YOU COULD RECORD A WHOLE ALBUM FULL OF EXCUSES/ TRUE THIS, I'LL MAKE SURE BY THE END OF THIS YOU SEE BLACK/ NIGHT IS SCARY SON, JUST SO AS NEBRASKA IS WACK/ YOU COULN'T COME OFF LOGICALLY, IF YOU HAD GZA DOIN THE MATH/ IT'S SIMPLE AS THAT, SON YOU SUCK, GO HUG YOUR '50' CD'S, THEY'LL DO YOU BETTER THAN BATTLIN ME/ YOUR STRAIGHT 'SADDLIN' G'S TO SHOW THAT YOUR HOOD RATTLIN'S WEAK/ WHEN U SPIT YOU SPEAK, FIRST LESSON THAT SEEPS/ I'LL SET YOU AS AN EXAMPLE OF EMCEE THATS CLICHE/ MORE SO THAN THE ONES IMMORTAL CALLED GAY/ YOU CANT PHASE SHIT, I'D SHOW YOU RHYMES THAT'LL SHAKE YOU LOSE/ LOST THIS BATTLE KID, PUT YOUR LOGIC TO USE/

YOUR SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO LUCKY I HAD TO RE-DO THIS SHIT DUDE

Dude, this is structured like a kicked-up scrabble game.
It's a giant paragraph.
Re-structure it like a real verse, bar-by-bar so I can toss a vote in here.

DREW-DIE$EL
04-27-2006, 10:33 PM
ok, so right now it's 1-0 in favor of me

DREW-DIE$EL
04-29-2006, 02:57 AM
come on we need more votes!!

maestro wooz
04-29-2006, 04:19 AM
Dude, this is structured like a kicked-up scrabble game.
It's a giant paragraph.
Re-structure it like a real verse, bar-by-bar so I can toss a vote in here.

honestly, i cant even read this especially with the font

DREW-DIE$EL
04-30-2006, 05:23 AM
votes please

WARPATH
04-30-2006, 11:03 AM
Vernakular

wordplay-1
vocab-1
puches-2
flow-1

Diesel

wordplay-1
vocab-1
puches-1
flow-2

Vernakular's verse hit harder, Diesel represented Disneyland with that verse. =:X

Vote vernakular

DREW-DIE$EL
04-30-2006, 06:53 PM
alrighty it's tied at 1-1

Vernakular
05-05-2006, 11:27 AM
Vote Now

1-1

Sirkulayshun
05-05-2006, 06:46 PM
wordplay-DIE$EL
vocab-DIE$EL
punches-DIE$EL
flow-Vernakular


aight i think diesel basically had stronger lines......for sum reason i think Vernakular had a better flow
i think DIE$EL won it tho

Vernakular
05-05-2006, 09:10 PM
Punches Honestly? He Def Took The Wordplay

But Still

2-1

Vote

Vernakular
05-05-2006, 10:07 PM
YOUR STYLES CHEAP, YOUR WORTHLESS, STEP UP FRONTIN LIKE A HERO/
THIS VERSE IS FOR ALL YA'LL WACK CATS TRYNNA BE MARTYRS FOR ZEROS/
YOUR CRYSTAL CLEAR FLOW, IS AS FRAGILE AS CHINA GLASS/
GO LAST, YOU WON'T WIN, YOUR PLATE IS BROKEN/
YOUR PLAIN AS FUCKIN DAY, WORSHIP BLING WHEN YOU RHYME/ FRONTIN AS AN MC, BUT YOUR REALLY ACT LIKE A MIME/
YOUR GETTIN FUCKED FOR FREE, YOUR CAREER AINT GOIN FAR/
AND ITS PLAIN TO SEE, THAT YOU STRIVE TO BE A PORN STAR/
YOU RHYME WEAK, YOUR BLEEK WITH WORDS THAT ARE USELESS/
IN FACT YOU COULD RECORD A WHOLE ALBUM FULL OF EXCUSES/ TRUE THIS, I'LL MAKE SURE BY THE END OF THIS YOU SEE BLACK/ NIGHT IS SCARY SON, JUST SO AS NEBRASKA IS WACK/
YOU COULN'T COME OFF LOGICALLY, IF YOU HAD GZA DOIN THE MATH/
IT'S SIMPLE AS THAT, SON YOU SUCK, GO HUG YOUR '50' CD'S, THEY'LL DO YOU BETTER THAN BATTLIN ME/
YOUR STRAIGHT 'SADDLIN' G'S TO SHOW THAT YOUR HOOD RATTLIN'S WEAK/
WHEN U SPIT YOU SPEAK, FIRST LESSON THAT SEEPS/
I'LL SET YOU AS AN EXAMPLE OF EMCEE THATS CLICHE/
MORE SO THAN THE ONES IMMORTAL CALLED GAY/
YOU CANT PHASE SHIT, I'D SHOW YOU RHYMES THAT'LL SHAKE YOU LOSE/
LOST THIS BATTLE KID, PUT YOUR LOGIC TO USE/

CrazyCoCasian
05-05-2006, 10:12 PM
After redoing it,I would have to give it to Vernakular on all 4 stages

Vernakular
05-05-2006, 11:03 PM
aight i guess thats like posting it, ill leave it up to DD if he wants to accept the vote

2-2

vote

led_mic
05-06-2006, 02:34 AM
Wordplay: Vernacular
Vocab: Vernacular
Punches: Vernacular
Flow: Diesel

My vote goes to vernacular overall, it wasnt too bad right before the last few lines where the flow fell apart

DREW-DIE$EL
05-06-2006, 02:55 AM
yeah i'll count those votes. it's 3-2 you're winning

Vernakular
05-06-2006, 10:32 AM
Vote

num2son
05-06-2006, 10:45 PM
Wordplay: Vernacular
Vocab: Diesel
Punches: Vernacular
Flow: Diesel

My vote goes to Vernacular, good battle

Vernakular
05-06-2006, 10:49 PM
5-2 final

good battle deis