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RockD
04-26-2006, 11:15 AM
Rules:
first to 5
Max 32 lines min. 16
explained vote
wrd play
punches
originality
structure (categories)

you can go head and drop first if ya like

hazidus hitman
04-26-2006, 09:51 PM
sweet bro, i will spit tonight sumtime, got shit to do today.

RockD
04-26-2006, 09:54 PM
o yea dont worry about feedin of lines non of that and also if 3-0 its a ko i forgott to add that

hazidus hitman
04-27-2006, 09:40 AM
fuck this rock D wannabe,
imma carve you to pieces like an amature MC.
you step into my ring of fire your lyrics are bound to get torched,
my killa words peirce thru your sturnum and your whole torso gets scorched.
forensics stated another victim to spontaneous human combustion,
but your just another victim to the hazidus hitmans style of bustin.
you insult me with your childish presence you portray,
so my reaction of archive lyrical missiles fluently spray.
aimed with a heat seaker in order to deliver you to the grim reaper,
copse of a soul-less tastless bitch to the ditch i will send ya.
i swing with precision accurasy in my fists,
fury in my knucles with 40 fearfull blows never missed.
shake you to the ground with acoustics in my voice and severity in my tone,
lie there bitch im a paid killer in your streets and i will ensure you die alone.
i snap necks of fake rappers like yaself for free,
the next target on the hitlist is sum bitch named rock D.
im your worst nightmare now made a reality,
for you its terrifying but for me its extasy.

RockD
04-27-2006, 06:17 PM
iight koo i'll drop lata today peace

RockD
04-27-2006, 07:10 PM
I’m about to start hazin this "hit man" some one call an ambulance
talk all this shit this nigga must have flatulence
gaseous mc talking all this air
next up, this punk suck knockin em like pin balls at the fair
What the fuck is hazidus and who cares, I’m more hazardous than thou
u should’ve back down clown no u getting knocked the fuck out
this is a 1st rate rout I’m fight a baby rapper with small clout
Running for 2 days scared to battle Rock, were was hazi’s whereabouts?
u slouch watch what comes out ya mouth
I’m an illa killa I wont burry ya in the yard, but under my damn couch
Leave ya stuffed in a pouch and I know u used to that
Kangaroo mutha fucka I don’t play wit leaves I play wit gats
U aint movin the rock, u getting sunk under
I’m baddest thing u ever seen some call a world wonder
Fuck down under I’ll leave ya 6ft deep
I’ll show ya how many bullets you’ll hold out of this here clip
I blow ribs out ya chest don’t come to the battle field with a thin vest
Know that Rock is not a stepping stone but an unsolved test
So go get rest and let this adhere to yo mind
That even the ground stand on is Rock so its mine

Classic
04-27-2006, 08:43 PM
fuck this rock D wannabe,
imma carve you to pieces like an amature MC.
(Decent opener.)
you step into my ring of fire your lyrics are bound to get torched,
my killa words peirce thru your sturnum and your whole torso gets scorched.
(Decent punch.)
forensics stated another victim to spontaneous human combustion,
but your just another victim to the hazidus hitmans style of bustin.
(Good punch here. Wordplay on ya' own name.)
you insult me with your childish presence you portray,
so my reaction of archive lyrical missiles fluently spray.
(Blah, decent punch here.)
aimed with a heat seaker in order to deliver you to the grim reaper,
copse of a soul-less tastless bitch to the ditch i will send ya.
(The end-rhyme sucked here. "Send ya" and "Reaper". Wasn't feelin' it. Although you had some nice multis.)
i swing with precision accurasy in my fists,
fury in my knucles with 40 fearfull blows never missed.
(Decent here.)
shake you to the ground with acoustics in my voice and severity in my tone,
lie there bitch im a paid killer in your streets and i will ensure you die alone.
(Fillers here, this is stretched out. Messed up your flow.)
i snap necks of fake rappers like yaself for free,
the next target on the hitlist is sum bitch named rock D.
(Good punch here.)
im your worst nightmare now made a reality,
for you its terrifying but for me its extasy.
(End-rhyme wasn't too good here. And it's a played concept here.)


Iím about to start hazin this "hit man" some one call an ambulance
talk all this shit this nigga must have flatulence
(This wasn't hittin' hard. Decent opener.)
gaseous mc talking all this air
next up, this punk suck knockin em like pin balls at the fair
(1st line coulda been worded better. Good punch here though.)
What the fuck is hazidus and who cares, Iím more hazardous than thou
u shouldíve back down clown no u getting knocked the fuck out
(1st line - wasn't feelin it'. Didn't rhyme with anything here. Half-decent here.)
this is a 1st rate rout Iím fight a baby rapper with small clout
Running for 2 days scared to battle Rock, were was haziís whereabouts?
(2nd line sucked here, evidently he spit first, so he wasn't scared. Gotta think about shit like that when battling. Half-decent here.)
u slouch watch what comes out ya mouth
Iím an illa killa I wont burry ya in the yard, but under my damn couch
(Multis here, nice. But played concept. Decent punch.)
Leave ya stuffed in a pouch and I know u used to that
Kangaroo mutha fucka I donít play wit leaves I play wit gats
(2nd line should've been worded better. Good play though. Decent punch here.)
U aint movin the rock, u getting sunk under
Iím baddest thing u ever seen some call a world wonder
(2nd line = bragging. Keep bragging brief, a half line at minimum for me. Half-decent here.)
Fuck down under Iíll leave ya 6ft deep
(This rhymed with nothing here. Why is this here?)
Iíll show ya how many bullets youíll hold out of this here clip
(Same with this. Why is this here?)
I blow ribs out ya chest donít come to the battle field with a thin vest
Know that Rock is not a stepping stone but an unsolved test
(Bragging again. Forgiveable though. At least it's just a one-liner like last time. Half-decent here.)
So go get rest and let this adhere to yo mind
That even the ground stand on is Rock so its mine
(Same here about bragging.)

Overall, this battle was VERY close. You bot had some nice multis, punches, and it was flowing pretty good. However, I think Hitman edged this one. Rock just had some minor flaws. Lines that didn't rhyme, and some bragging. Hitman only threw punches, and was consistent. This is what I think edged him out over Rock.

Vote - Hazidus Hitman

hazidus hitman
04-30-2006, 03:55 AM
sweet bro, yea i wasnt very focused when writing those lyrics but no excuse. cheers anyway.
1-0
can we get some more votes in here

DREW-DIE$EL
04-30-2006, 05:21 AM
wrd play - hazidus
punches - hazidus
originality - hazidus
flow- hazidus

vote- hazidus

rock d - i wasn't really feeling your flow throughout as much as i was feelin hazidus's. and you need to fix that if you're gunna have effective punches.

RockD
04-30-2006, 01:30 PM
2-0 hitman cime on we just need 1 or a few more votes
:)

num2son
04-30-2006, 03:55 PM
wrd play - hazidus
punches - hazidus
originality - RockD
flow- hazidus

I vote for H Hitman

hazidus hitman
04-30-2006, 04:52 PM
KO

cheers for the votes!!
thanks for the battle RockD, we will have to rematch again sometime bro.
peace

RockD
04-30-2006, 07:50 PM
NO PROB! ITS been a wile for me scince i dueled some one nxt time it will bea greater battle... plus i needed some type of practice for the battle i'm caught up in now please vote when the battle is over and dont be afraid to leave coments as it is unfolding either :)

Luther Large
04-30-2006, 07:54 PM
ROCKD FUCKIN SUCKS COCK

he a bitch with no skill