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Vernakular
05-07-2006, 07:06 PM
1 round

10-15 lines

no crew hating or dickriding votes

if u want first dibs go ahead i dont drop until night fall at the earliest

Luther Large
05-07-2006, 07:08 PM
i have no problem waitin but i probly wont drop till 2morrow night cuz i'm gonna be out

Vernakular
05-07-2006, 07:51 PM
Luther Large, couldn't shock a FUSE with skill to save his life
a provin farce, shouldn't get hyped to lose, that just isn't right
I'm not even trying, this battle is over n won
Luther stop trying, bitch don't even flip your lyrics they're overdone
You looked confused, try and conjure up some rhyming powers
born to lose, Your ass aint Fly, its brought down to earth like the twin towers
Your terrible at rhyming, your potential deal is a joke
Luther now stop crying, you come off paranoid, like scarface on coke
Your not better then me, your just annoying like symplex three
For its plain to see, all your works to date are travesties
Luther admit it, you suck, you're horrble as fuck, its a crying shame
You aint hard, the only time you rock 'hot pockets' is in a microwave


aight 1

Vernakular
05-07-2006, 08:29 PM
damn luther drop something homie

Luther Large
05-08-2006, 06:43 PM
Yo it's a shame how ive been introduced to this fool
i already got ya mom dukes arrangin ya funeral
diss you, gun in ya face have oral sex with a pistol
liquistics, murderous lyrics, and evil spirits'll rip you
as long as i'm livin you'll be number 2 with a pencil
vern's tensile?, ive trained my brain 2 be a utensil
son your vocabulary is limited like no others
only rapper 2 lie about his age cuz he's ashamed of his color
i'm shootin semen out my dick with it aimed at ya mother
i came out a thug with conditions i managed 2 live in
spittin on your writtens with art that'll damage ya vision
not only are u a target but this man is precision
u better get on trak cuz we runnin the system


arite heres sum half ass shit 4 u i dont know why u were gettin all anxious i told u i probly wouldnt have time till now

VOTES!!! pleez

White_Mouse
05-08-2006, 06:57 PM
hmmm.... ok

word=luther
punches=tie ( Vernakular used lots of similis, luther used more metaphors)
personal=luther (no dubt)
humor= luther
multis=luther

overall luther

Luther Large
05-08-2006, 07:05 PM
aight no doubt good lookin on that vote mouse

any1 else got votes?

Vernakular
05-08-2006, 08:26 PM
hmmm.... ok

word=luther
punches=tie ( Vernakular used lots of similis, luther used more metaphors)
personal=luther (no dubt)
humor= luther
multis=luther

overall luther

DONT PM PPL TO VOTE

Luther Large
05-08-2006, 08:45 PM
DONT PM PPL TO VOTE

wtf you talkin about i didnt pm nobody

Vernakular
05-08-2006, 08:51 PM
just sayin' don't do it, i hate that shit you cool with that?

Luther Large
05-08-2006, 08:52 PM
just sayin' don't do it, i hate that shit you cool with that?

yeah lets just get these votes then

Visionz
05-08-2006, 10:04 PM
These two lines right here..............................................





as long as i'm livin you'll be number 2 with a pencil
vern's tensile, ive trained my brain 2 be a utensil


top all of this shit..............................




Luther Large, couldn't shock a FUSE with skill to save his life
a provin farce, shouldn't get hyped to lose, that just isn't right
I'm not even trying, this battle is over n won
Luther stop trying, bitch don't even flip your lyrics they're overdone
You looked confused, try and conjure up some rhyming powers
born to lose, Your ass aint Fly, its brought down to earth like the twin towers
Your terrible at rhyming, your potential deal is a joke
Luther now stop crying, you come off paranoid, like scarface on coke
Your not better then me, your just annoying like symplex three
For its plain to see, all your works to date are travesties
Luther admit it, you suck, you're horrble as fuck, its a crying shame
You aint hard, the only time you rock 'hot pockets' is in a microwave
.................................................. .....................here



LL takes it in all categories that people are required to vote on.

Vernakular
05-08-2006, 10:07 PM
wow that was biased

but w/e obviously the bitch got something against me but

fuck it 2-0

dont worry inseen ill merk u later

DREW-DIE$EL
05-08-2006, 10:18 PM
These two lines right here..............................................

as long as i'm livin you'll be number 2 with a pencil
vern's tensile, ive trained my brain 2 be a utensil



the first line is aight, but the 2nd line is weak as fuck! seriously tensile? u just get done with your physics class luther. if your gunna use words, make sure the meanin makes sense. let's look at your second line there

vern's tensile, ive trained my brain 2 be a utensil

vern's (Capable of being stretched or extended; ductile.) , i've trained my brain 2 be a utensil


or.. so vern's flexible, and u use your brain?


naw that is weak. if your gunna use sick wordplay, don't let the words play you.


yall did a sick job, but vern gets my vote.

Visionz
05-08-2006, 10:38 PM
I disagree with the assessment man^, those might of not been extra strong with verbals but the multi's in 'em was stacked nice and overall his verse was a lot less generic than this bullshit vern be writin.

I'm not even trying, this battle is over n won
Luther stop trying, bitch don't even flip your lyrics they're overdone
......
Your not better then me, your just annoying like symplex three
For its plain to see, all your works to date are travesties
........lame line with no personality or soul behind 'em and the only thing that comes close to quality is a bunch of overplayed imager


You looked confused, try and conjure up some rhyming powers
born to lose, Your ass aint Fly, its brought down to earth like the twin towers............starts out lame and then finishes with something played out.....doesn't take long to happen again

Your terrible at rhyming, your potential deal is a joke
Luther now stop crying, you come off paranoid, like scarface on coke
........again lame to played out


and then there's the cheesy, trying-really hard punchlines..........

Luther Large, couldn't shock a FUSE with skill to save his life...

You aint hard, the only time you rock 'hot pockets' is in a microwave


The whole thing was a wack ass verse and then he gets all pissy when he don't get his lil' pat on the back. It's not my fault he dropped a shitty verse. That shit was wack and representative of the lil' wack fuck who's sittin at his computer screen droppin wack shit. And Nac, stop trying to get credit for one verse twice. That's some wishfull thinkin you funny lil' bitch. You and I both know you ain't merkin shit.

Vernakular
05-08-2006, 10:41 PM
lmao ur the king of played out shit

pick out the lines, still got him in rhyme schemes and punches

Vernakular
05-08-2006, 10:58 PM
fuck it its your opinion your descesion, but dont influence others ill drop a verse when im done with finals n shit my minds fucked right now man

get at me

Luther Large
05-09-2006, 10:03 AM
the first line is aight, but the 2nd line is weak as fuck! seriously tensile? u just get done with your physics class luther. if your gunna use words, make sure the meanin makes sense. let's look at your second line there

vern's tensile, ive trained my brain 2 be a utensil

vern's (Capable of being stretched or extended; ductile.) , i've trained my brain 2 be a utensil


or.. so vern's flexible, and u use your brain?


naw that is weak. if your gunna use sick wordplay, don't let the words play you.


yall did a sick job, but vern gets my vote.


aight man what i was doing was questioning vern by saying verns tensile? i was questing his ability to stretch out or be flexible as an mc so i hope this clears that up i just 4got to put the question mark cuz it did look way fucked up with out it so i just added it real quick

so dont tell me my words played me

but like i said my verse was just sum fast mediocore stuff

anywayz thanx 4 votin ya'll

any1 else got VOTES!!!!!!!!! pleez

White_Mouse
05-09-2006, 01:03 PM
"diss you, gun in ya face have oral sex with a pistol"........

I'm still laughing about that, lol

that was funny luther

Luther Large
05-09-2006, 06:20 PM
VOTES!!!pleez


tryna get this done

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Vernakular
05-09-2006, 07:34 PM
feelings mutual, i was rushed tat night cuz of damn finals, but respect LL good battle son

votes 2-1

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VOTES

Vernakular
05-09-2006, 09:30 PM
you know what unseen, fuck you. Your fuckin thirty years old and the only thing productive your doing is pointing out a verse (that obviously destorys anything you've ever written jk) that u know is better than the dim witted shit your droppin these days. Were is your audio? i thought your were makin a career, you dont even act like a rapper, you sound like an old fuckin' bitch who can't get his shit straight. Go, get some audio goin your really not worth any1's time pointed out played out shit

Flan, sweet and phoney

....plain

your from miami couldnt handle the heat
.....get the fuck out of here

and heres YOUR weak attempt at punches

:your fake like the easter bunny and santa claus"

Your bullshit, a peice of shit that'll never amount to anything in life because your scared to be beaten by a fourteen year old

LL and this battle is irrelevant right now

ive had enough of your bullshit, go fuck yourself

Visionz
05-09-2006, 10:15 PM
you talk all that shit you want. I know you just a spoiled lil' bitch whos got a real tough time with critisicm. But keep cryin lil' baby, I'm sure daddy's there to make it all better. lmao........I drive to work and school (both full time) in a Jag I paid for with my own money. You don't know shit about me or the struggles I've overcome. Fake little fuck from the suburbs droppin N-bombs, frontin like you know the streets. You the one who ain't shit. You better toughen up lil' bitch. It's a cold world that don't take kindly to frontin mothafuckas like yourself. I shit on you to teach you a lesson, you just too fuckin stupid to get it.

Vernakular
05-10-2006, 05:34 PM
ok, you seem like an educated dude when it comes to the streets, i nvr dissed your struggles man, i just thought u critique the fuck out of my rhymes when ppl say they are good, but honsetly, do you really know anything about me etheir? I want to go farther with emceein' but really dude, its not my fault my dads rich? Unless you really think it is, which is bias to your part.................but keep critizing, its healthy

anyways VOTE PEEPS

Alesco
05-12-2006, 06:03 AM
LL was the winner here. (that wasent a vote by the way) I aint gonna vote coz this was a wack ass battle. Jus thought i would comment on it... And vern, dont take shit so serious man. You be given people the feuel to burn ya. You have to learn to take other peoples opinions, Dont let them hurt ya.. Learn ya craft kid