View Full Version : WINNER---->Eric Unseen vs Vernacular

05-08-2006, 12:13 AM
1 round, no line limits, first to five votes wins

05-08-2006, 12:14 AM
go ahead, im out for right now man i got school at 6

05-08-2006, 01:49 AM
I scan this Zartan who be flan, both phoney and sweet
Marshmellow fellow who be yellow, so fuck the concrete
You ain't even seen the streets,in Miami but you cant stand the Heat
You style fades like Wade jumpers, New Jersey crushin lead to early summers
So you can slumber in your dreams of layin lines to coke fienes
Cause your movie scenes is serene by no means
I watch you slang fiction with no depiction of the life you was handed
Reprimanded by pops for tryin to be black, I'll pull the trigger and blast both ya caps back
You couldn't speak on facts, cause the fact is that your ass is wack
You gotta stack of books, but reading dictionaries don't make you a crook
You shook like a feather in inclement weather, step to the battle and leave with your head severed
Like chickens prior to the finger-lickin, I'm stickin you like voodoo dolls
Sick pricks like Aids-infested porno flicks, leaving you shittin ya draws
Suicide the only prescription written that be a subscription for applause
You as fake as the fuckin easter bunny and santa clause
Maybe your dad can get you a ghostwriter so your rhymes will be tighter
Cause you couldn't spark flames if I handed you gasoline and a lighter
Im banishing this dickrider who be swallowing like alcoholics to apple cider
Dialing Hasselhoff cause you wanna be a Nightrider
Your punk ass wishes you was Shiva so you could have some more dicks to hold
I'm Texas Hold'em bitch, the game never folds.

05-08-2006, 08:52 PM
nice verse Eric, don't sleep on me tho, ill post in a bit

05-09-2006, 12:27 AM
Venom spillin, you aint really thrillin, you a fairy track faggit
Read-em feelin, your verse is LUMBER jack, leme take a hack at it
Its not like your bad, your just poppin lose at the seems
Crush your dreams,Im sicker than doctors sellin crack to the pheens,
level any schemes, Your weak Unseen, I mean like your styles got polio
Only so, you sound like u b makin' conffesions like you a holy-hoe
I bite the rattles, watch me topple this fakes half baked weak slithers
You like saddles, stop please u make me laugh cake, with your bleak pictures
Graspin' this, you couldn't beat me if u spoke blashphemos
You be minded weak, flickerin bulb, polaroid shit cudnt capture it
Single celled weak sperm, he aint even developed yet
My nausic raps spread germs, you throw down an irrelivant set

votes btw unseen, ur aight dude sorry for that shit i said

05-09-2006, 07:31 PM

Luther Large
05-09-2006, 07:35 PM

i know it might look funny since eric voted like this in my battle with vern but in no way am i riding i just thot eric blew it away with his whole verse

he got you with the perrsonals and meta4's in the 2nd half of his verse

so vote=eric unseen

05-09-2006, 07:36 PM
what second verse? Yea he won this shit i didnt give that peice of shit verse an ounce of thought

Luther Large
05-09-2006, 07:39 PM
what second verse? Yea he won this shit i didnt give that peice of shit verse an ounce of thought

why do you always get so angry when people vote against you?

godamn it's just my vote i wasnt hatin u always actin up 4 no reason and then tryna apologize

and yeah i made a typo sayin 2nd verse i meant 2nd half i edited it so theres no bullshitin

05-09-2006, 07:42 PM
i aint hatin' i said he won this shit

i wrote my verse in like 5 minutes dude lol chill

but honestly,Unseen you know it we both could have done better, with the verses i mean

1-0 in favor of Unseen

05-09-2006, 07:45 PM
im shakin me head at both of ya. i know ya both can do better.

05-10-2006, 09:44 AM
Wordplay = eric
Punches = eric
Flow = eric
Vocab = eric
Creativity = Vern

Vote goes to Eric Unseen

05-10-2006, 11:01 AM
Wordplay = eric
Punches = eric
Flow = eric
Vocab = eric
Creativity = eric

Eric unseen all the way, vernakular was also great, but to me, in each aspect a bit less then Eric...


05-10-2006, 01:10 PM
yo both yall are WAY better than this. but my vote goes to unseen in all catagories, and i think u know why, i'm not gonna type 5 minutes for explanations.

12-29-2006, 01:36 AM